This is very innovative and it is best termed a autobiographical description of love and how it can affect a man's life and in a way the feelings that surround the person's circle....Bipolar please continue this story....my support is with you..

I myself feel saddened at the way the way Anil's life delves into tragedy at the end..i suggest that you focus on his interactions with all these main characters and try to give a feel of a dead man telling his tale from the grave...possibly like Autograph meets Virumaandi....i guess you should be able to carve out the narration as you seem capable...best of luck..