Topic started by M (@ 63-227-112-115.dnvr.qwest.net) on Sat Sep 11 22:04:04 EDT 2004.
Hiii All,
Thought we can post our comments about Kavidhaiku Kavidhai thread here...
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Topic started by M (@ 63-227-112-115.dnvr.qwest.net) on Sat Sep 11 22:04:04 EDT 2004.
Hiii All,
Thought we can post our comments about Kavidhaiku Kavidhai thread here...
Wow wow Shakthi, what a return...
PP, Kathir, KSS and Kajan all ur kavidhais r great too..
Sudhakar, i liked ur "Å£ðÊÉ¢ø ÁðÎÁ¡ ¿¡§É¡÷ ¿øÄÅý?..." very much...how come i can understand SOME of ur kavidhais these days??...(i guess i have become perceptive now...)
:))
And what happenend to MR. GENIUS??? :)
oopsss, thats supposed to be 'more perceptive'..
:)
Paravalley, women are taking the lead now. Shakti initiated the 'Kavidhaikku kavidhai' thread.. and now Malligai has initiated the 'comments' thread.
Malligai,
you are at that again!!! your subtle satire and the timely humour makes the hub lively. Nice of you to start the comments section. This is very much needed.
"how come i can understand SOME of ur kavidhais these days??...
þо¡§É §Å½¡í¸ÈÐ?! ÍõÁ¡ þó¾ ͧà Á¡¾¢Ã¢ ¦º¡øÄìܼ¡Ð..
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Áí¨¸
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//Paravalley, women are taking the lead now. Shakti initiated the 'Kavidhaikku kavidhai' thread.. and now Malligai has initiated the 'comments' thread. //
Neram thaan! Kathir women take the lead anywhere :P
thx pp madam and others.
MALLIGAI,
thats very thoughtful of u to start this thread.
I liked roshan poetry. Small and sensible
PP, kathir, shakthi and Tiru,
yaarai epadi paarataruthunu theriyalai...u all have just drenched us wwith ur 'kavidhai malai'...so WOWOW to all of u...
Roshan, i missed ur short but sweet kavidhai..well done..
kallar maravar agamudayar pallar mella mella maruvi vellalar aaginar(in srilanka too)
thanks malligai.
tiruttakkan
Kajan,
//º¢¨¾ÅÐ ¦¾Ã¢¸¢ýÈÐ.
þÕóÐõ §Å¸õ ÜðÊ
µÊ즸¡ñÊÕ츢§Èý //---õõõ, Å¡úÅ¢ý ¯ñ¨Á¨Â ´Õ º¢Ä Å¡÷ò¨¾¸Ç¢ø ÀÊîº Á¡¾¢Ã¢ þÕìÌ...«Õ¨Á...
¬É¡ þÐ ±ýÉ þò¾¨É negative-a ´Õ ¸Å¢¨¾??...Òк¡ ¸ø¡½õ
¬ÉÅí¸ ±øÄ¡õ 'romantic' ¸Å¢¾¸û ÁðΧÁ þí¸ post ¦ºö «ÛÁ¾¢ì¸ôÀÎõ!
:)) :))
tt! a "Wow!" for your sweet little kavithai!
Thanks PavaLaaji.EnRa pozhodhinum peridhuvandhEn!
I've not read yours yet.
Tiruttakkan
EnRa illai-EEnRa ...
Tiruttakkan
Shylaja ma'am
I came in for a brief moment to just glance through.. i cannot resist appreciating you for this :
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romba azaga ezudhi irukkeenga. paarattukkal.
Hats off to you, Shylaja! ¯í¸û Ò¾¢Â ¸£¨¾Â¢ø¾¡ý ±ýÉ ¦¾Ç¢×, ±ýÉ ¬Æõ! þ¨¾ò¾¡ý, þó¾ ÀìÌÅò¨¾¾¡ý ¿¡ý ¬Ã¡¾¢ì¸¢§Èý!
o, innikkuthan unga commnts pakkaren adhan thaamathamaana bathil mannikka muthalil,mikka nandri PP. kadhir. ungaL manamthirandha paarrattaivita veredhuvum perithillai enakku..anbudan,,shylaja
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Hello friends,
I have not been following this thread due to time constraint. What a nice show of poetic power! Great work friends!.
Will I be wrong , if I say , I getting a different picture when I read throught the lines of PP, TT and geno?!
Perhaps, I should re assure myself that we are a very matured group without any personal bias...
with regards
Srimangai
:-)
srimangai,
/ I getting a different picture when I read throught the lines of PP, TT and geno?! //
- but the right picture... ;-)
:-)
Wow, wow...like KSS said, what an impressive show of poetic power by PP & Geno...
but the underlying cynicism blemishes the beauty somehow!!
KSS,
//þõÁýÈ ¨ÁÂò¾¢ø ¨ÁÂõ ¦¸¡ñÎ
¸Å¢¨¾¸û ¾óÐ , ¸Å¢¨¾¸û ¯ñÎ
¸Ç¢ô§À¡õ. ¸¡Äõ ÁÈô§À¡õ ¿¡§Á!
¦ÅÚô¨Àì ¦¸¡ðÊ Å£§½ ¢ó¾
±ïº¢Â Á½¢òÐÇ¢ ±ÁÛì ¸¢¼¡¾£÷. //--rompa alaga soli irukeenga..i agree with u..
srimangai, didn't mean to undermine your plea but this is indeed a culmination of frustrations, long overdue ventilation...
don't mind me please, others continue...
cyg,
wow!! that was great!! ungaLukkuL oru nalla kavinjar ozinthu kidakkiRaar. thodarnthu ezhuthugaL. vaazthukkaL!
sudhakar,
your's was also a nice one and i sincerely hope every body would give an ear to your plea.
Cygnus,
I fully appreciate your views. My only concern was that we should not go overboard by calling names to our other friends. Arguements and discussions are always welcome.Thanks for your kind message.
with regards
Srimangai
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Roshan, Å¡úòÐì¸ÙìÌõ, °ì¸òÐìÌõ Á¢ì¸ ¿ýÈ¢! KSS, geno, PP, Kathir, §À¡ýÈÅ÷¸Ù츢¨¼Â¢ø ÀíÌ ¦¸¡ûŧ¾ Á¢ì¸ Á¸¢ú, ±ô§À¡¾¡ÅÐ ¸¢Úì¸¢ì ¸¢Æ¢òÐô §À¡ÎÅо¡ý ¿¢¨È ;-))
Srimangai, I wonder where an arbitrary line could be drawn, what are the confines of decorum that would keep intact the fabric of the well-intended polemic and when does one seep through the boundaries to rudeness? :-)
Cygnus,
Read your latest poem.it has taken off well and ended beautifully. Pl post more.
worth a 50.
Your English is very impressive.
Are we interacting fo the first time?
Tiruttakkan
Tiruttakkan avargaLE, it is probably the first time we're interacting but I have had the pleasure of reading your poems and critiques on others' works, especially the grammar commentaries. 50 is awesome, thank you and I'm overwhwelmed by the "English" remark, I am just an ordinary linguaphile.
Cygnus,
I "strongly"endorse TT's comments on your English ! The selection of words and the weave of them in your sentences are truly admirable ( your comment on "drawing the line" itself speaks of it!).
As you have said, it is very subjective to draw a line. One can only express the desire of a limit from other person - with out expectations of fulfilled.
Your poetry was genuinely intended and expressive. May I request you to post more?
Besides, just yesterday I saw your IP address. Temple.edu. Hmm... I used to have some friends in Temple Univ. Last year I had "almost reached " there on my fleeting trip to Phil.
with regards
Srimangai