kAla iyandhiram (TIME MACHINE)

Topic started by Surathi (@ cache2-2.ruh.isu.net.sa) on Sat Aug 2 07:39:36 .





Time-machine (kAla iyandhiram)


nee ingu varAmalEy irundhirukkalAm.
alladhu nAn adhan munbEy vEru oor sendRu irukkalAm.

thAndi pOna tharuNangalil nee thirubi pArkAmal irundhirukkalAm.
nee pArtha samayangalil en kavanam veRedhin melum irundhirukkalAm.

nee pOtta mArghazi kOlangal nAn pArkum mun kalaindhirukkalAm.
neengal kEttavaiyil nam viruppangal vEru vErAga irundhirukkalAm.

nee udhirtha pookkal en veettu vAsalil vizhAmalum,
nAn kirukkiya otRaithal un kAladiyil sErAmalum irundhirukkalAm.

minnaL-mazhaiyil jannalOram un ozhi mugham thenbadAmal irundhirukkalAm
alladhu adharkku munbE nAn urangi pOyirukkalAm.

unakku kavidhaigaL ezhudha theriyAmal irundhirukkalAm,
alladhu un kavidhai varigal en kannil padAmal pOyirukkalAm..

oru kAla iyandhirathin meedhEri thirumbi nAm payaNithu
marupadi andha nAtkalil mErchonnavai nighazhAmal
nimmadhiyAi vAzhndhu pArppOm, varuvAyA thOzhi?

surathi,

u made my day. Engeyo ninaivugal alaipaaya thuvangugiradhu.

indha kavithaiyai enakku tamil font-la mail pannunga surathi. Romba nallarukku.

Natpudan
deepa.

nanRi.. maRRavar kavidhai ezudha, nAn rasigan Aga irukkave niriya viruppam.. ungal perunthanmai mikka pArattukkalukku nanRi

super kavidhai kadaisi vaari romba super!

Author HGW than first imagined TIME MACHINE in his novel. Back to the future, Terminator, Matrix pondra English movies ellamey indha time-travel concept-i use panniyirukku.

nijamave irundha eppadi irukkum? avanga rendru perumey, marupadi merchonnavai nighazhamal vazhnthu iruppargala?

ungal iruvarukkumey nanri.. for resurrecting / appreciating this.

appadi vazha nerndhal nandraga irundhirukkum,
anaal saathiyamillai.

Thiruppangal Niraindha paadhai
vaazhkkai enbadhu,
saagasangal puriyum podhu
vibaththukkal nearvadhu sagajam thaney?

natpudan
deepa

Kavithai very nice surathi.....

Padman, Amsa, Deepa, mikka nanRi..

DEEPA, neenga sonna maadhiri ithellam oru illusion.. oru
vidha escapism.. sari, ungal vaarthaigalai padithadhum
enakku thondriya varigal ivai.


vibathukkaLukku AyaththamAi..
--------------------------------

ovvonRum oru anubhavam..
vibathukkaLum uLLadakkam!
ovvoru vibathilum
oru maraNam alladhu oru kAyam!
ovvondRiRku pinnum
oru uyirthezhal alladhu vadukkal!

marikkAmal kidaitha
indha maru jenmangalil,
kAyappaduthubavargal mArugindranar..
kAyangalum mArugindrana,
valigal mattum pala samayam orEy mAdhiri..

ovvoru murai uyirthezundhO
alladu sugamadainthO
sutRum mutRum pArkirOm..
angEy innoru sutru
vibathukku AyathamaagirOm..

oh, rasikka ethanai kavidhaigal,
viyakka ethhanai manidhargal,
silirkka ethanai anubhavangal - endru..
meendum meendum kAyappada sithamAi,
meendum meendum..
meendum meendum..

Å¢ÀòÐì¸ÙìÌ ¬Âò¾Á¡ö..
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´ù¦Å¡ýÚõ ´Õ «ÛÀÅõ,
Å¢ÀòÐì¸Ùõ ¯ûǼì¸õ!
´ù¦Å¡Õ Å¢Àò¾¢Öõ
´Õ Áýõ «øÄÐ ´Õ ¸¡Âõ!
´ù¦Å¡ýÈ¢üìÌô À¢ýÛõ
´Õ ¯Â¢÷ò¦¾Æø «øÄÐ ÅÎì¸û!

Áâ측Áø ¸¢¨¼ìÌõ þó¾
ÁÚ ¦ƒýÁí¸Ç¢ø,
¸¡ÂôÀÎи¢ÈÅ÷¸û Á¡Ú¸¢ýÈÉ÷
¸¡Âí¸Ùõ Á¡Ú¸¢ýÈÉ - ¬É¡ø
ÅÄ¢¸û ÁðÎõ ÀÄ ºÁÂõ ´§Ã Á¡¾¢Ã¢!

´ù¦Å¡Õ Ó¨È ¯Â¢÷ò¦¾Ø󧾡
«øÄР͸Á¨¼ó§¾¡
ÍüÚõ ÓüÚõ À¡÷츢§È¡õ..
«í§¸ þý¦É¡Õ ÍüÚ
Å¢ÀòÐìÌ ¬Âò¾Á¡¸¢§ü¡õ..

Ò¾¢Â ®Ãõ, Ò¾¢Â ÐÇ¢÷¸û - ÁÚÀÊ
ú¢ì¸ ±ò¾¨É ¸Å¢¨¾¸û,
Å¢Âì¸ ±ò¾¨É ÁÉ¢¾÷¸û,
º¢Ä¢÷ì¸ ±ò¾¨É «ÛÀÅí¸û - ±ýÚ
Á£ñÎõ Á£ñÎõ ¸¡ÂôÀ¼ º¢ò¾Á¡ö..
Á£ñÎõ Á£ñÎõ,
Á£ñÎõ Á£ñÎõ..

By the way, Mr. Padman, en oor Tiruchy..

ok..surarthi

eppadi surathi,

Endha thalaippilum ungalal ippadi vaarthaigalai azhagu kavithai maalaiyaai korkka mudigiradhu.

Nallarukku.

Sila vibaththukkalai virumbiye varaverkkirom, kaaya paduvadhu urdhiyaai therindhum......

ozhi oru puram ozhindhu kondu vedikkai paarka,
prathibalikka mattumE therindha kannAdi
thadumArum indha paarattu varigalil..

adhuvum, andha ozhiyE sila samayam kannadiyai
pArAttumpOdhu..

nanRi

ms/mrs surathi....

"vibathukkaLukku AyaththamAi.. "
atputhamaana varigal....sotkalin payanpaadu paaratukkuriyavai

kavithaikku "punch" kodukkum sila vartaigal serthirunthaal innum suvaithirukkum !!!

hi anita, welcome. konjam vittutteenga ! adhutha murai thavaramal ezuthunga "ms/mrs/mr/master surathi" nnu.. (naan rahasymai tick pannikkiren)..

naan mr. deepak ellam chumma discuss pannittirundhom.. avvalavudhan.

could you explain or show some example or modify (punch)?

i'd be happy to see it. (by the way, paarattukku nanriyum).

Deepa

.. "saagasangal puriyum podhu
vibaththukkal nearvadhu sagajam thaney?" nnu sonneenga.

saagasam puriya avagasam illamal saadharanamai nadanthu pogum pothu kooda vibaththu ethiritharpol vanthu hello sollugirathu..

vibathukkaLukku AyaththamAi.. was execellent.

SURATHI,

'keep guessing for a few days'---i dont have to guess....i know already!!

malligai, i knew you'd surely. hide-and-seek evvalavu inimaiyanadhunnu ippa puriyudhu

Surathi,

hahaha (aioo sirika bayama iruku...thiruppi neenga ethavathu soluveengalonu!!)...yes Surathi, it is fun..

¯í¸§Ç¡¼ 'Å¢Çí¸¡¾Åý' -¨É þí§¸ §À¡Îí¸§Çý...«Æ¸¡É ¸Å¢¨¾!!

It took me back to good old days!

OH HOW WE ALL WISH, somethigns dont happen in life!

innoru piravi edutaal (vendam saami ondre porum)

kalathai kaikul adakka asai (chinna chinna asayin periya periya aasai)

muyandralum mudiyaa aasai

NANDRU! surathi

surathi,

"Áâ측Áø ¸¢¨¼ìÌõ þó¾
ÁÚ ¦ƒýÁí¸Ç¢ø,
¸¡ÂôÀÎи¢ÈÅ÷¸û Á¡Ú¸¢ýÈÉ÷
¸¡Âí¸Ùõ Á¡Ú¸¢ýÈÉ - ¬É¡ø
ÅÄ¢¸û ÁðÎõ ÀÄ ºÁÂõ ´§Ã Á¡¾¢Ã¢!
"<<<

"Ò¾¢Â ®Ãõ, Ò¾¢Â ÐÇ¢÷¸û - ÁÚÀÊ
ú¢ì¸ ±ò¾¨É ¸Å¢¨¾¸û,
Å¢Âì¸ ±ò¾¨É ÁÉ¢¾÷¸û,
º¢Ä¢÷ì¸ ±ò¾¨É «ÛÀÅí¸û - ±ýÚ
Á£ñÎõ Á£ñÎõ ¸¡ÂôÀ¼ º¢ò¾Á¡ö..
Á£ñÎõ Á£ñÎõ,
Á£ñÎõ Á£ñÎõ..
"<<<

Brilliant!
You have a style which goes, rests and creates indelible marks in the emotional part of brain

Shakti, thanks for your compliments.

þÐ ¯í¸Ç¢¼Á¢ÕóÐ ¸¢¨¼ò¾ Ó¾ø À¡Ã¡ðÎ ±É ¿¢¨É츢§üý.

I am a silent admirer of the works of mr. v.p (VEENAPONAVAN).

i was also inspired to a great extent by DEEPA.

¯í¸û À¡Ã¡ðÎ ±ý¨É þýÛõ º¢ÈôÀ¡¸ ÓÂüº¢ ¦ºöÂò àñÎõ. Á¢ì¸ ¿ýÈ¢. - Íþ¢

good one yaar...romba nalla irukku.

while using time machine, you should be careful in setting the MEMORY option.

there are two options: MEMORY=RETAIN and MEMORY=ERASE.

if you travel back with MEMORY=ERASE option, you will forget whatever happened...
so when you meet your friend again in the past....you will do the same mistakes again...

if you travel back with MEMORY=RETAIN option, you will remember whatever happened...
so when you meet your friend again in the past....you have chances to take different decisions :-)

TIME MACHINE pathi naanum niraiya ezuthanumnu ninaithEn. neenga munthikiteenga.
vaazhthukkal. thodarndhu ezuthungal.

Flower-guy, nalla vezai ninaivootineergaL. But problem ennanna, naanum en thoziyum MEMORY-RETAIN option-le ponalum kooda, marupadi mERchonnavai nigazha koodum.. anyway, thanks for reminding.

"if you travel back with MEMORY=RETAIN option, you will remember whatever happened...
so when you meet your friend again in the past....you have chances to take different decisions :-) "<<

some mistakes are too sweet, too enjoyable, to be committed again........

we shall end up doing it yet again another time.

inspite of the sweet bitterness it leaves afterwards

PROBLEM WITH MAKING OF MANKIND I GUESS

LOL

Surathi,

Like what Shakthi and Flowerguy have said, u must be careful about these two options... it looks like both the options r not suitable for u...if u use the M-Retain, chances r that u will remember things that u want to forget...if u use the M-Erase, chances r that u will forget ur friend too (which u would not want)

So ungaloda situation-ku the Time Machine might not be the right solution..:)

Malligai,

Oh my goodness, enna oru imagination! "if u use the M-Retain, chances r that u will remember things that u want to forget...if u use the M-Erase, chances r that u will forget ur friend too (which u would not want)"

I am unable to say anything.. I could only smile.. thanks.

hi,
indhak kavidhaikku 45 taralaam.andha 'ilaiyum maramum 'maadhiri innnum seyyalaam.

Surathiii,

naan thaan apovey soneney?...ungaluku time machine othu varaathunu..en kekalai??..ipo thaniyaa vanthu polambitu iruntha ena seiyarathu??...anyway knowing that u r waiting, she will come :)..so wait!

kavithai is superrrr...unga kavithaigalai pathi solanuma??..´ù¦Å¡Õ ÅâÔõ «Õ¨Á!!!

I like these lines very much:

¸¨ÄóÐ ¦ºøÖõ §Á¸í¸û §À¡ø
¸¨ÃóÐ §À¡Ìõ þ측Äõ.
-Å¢Ãø þÎ츢ø

ŢʞüìÌ ¦ÅÌ §¿Ãõ Óý§À
ŢƢò¾¢ÕóÐ ¸¡ò¾¢ÕìÌõ ¯ý ¿¢¨É׸û

avaL varuvaLA?

varuvaaL!....



nalla kavithai....vazhakkamaana soR prayOgam missing.


"- þÕðÊø
§¾Êò ÐÆ¡Å¢ ²Á¡óÐ §À¡ö
®Ãõ ¸º¢Ôõ ±ý þÕ Å¢Æ¢¸û "<<

nEgizhchi

Shakti, thank you, vimarsanathukkagavum, paaraattukkagavum, "aval varuval" endru nambikkaiyudan sonantharkkagavum..

¾¢Õò¾ì¸ý «Å÷¸ÙìÌ ¿ýÈ¢.

I must thank flower-guy for reminding me about the 'memory-retain' and 'memory-erase' option buttons in the time machine. «ôÒÈõ, 'ÁøÄ¢¨¸' ÁüÚõ '„ì¾¢' ±Ø¾¢Â º¢Ä Åâ¸û þó¾ sequel-ìÌ ÅÆ¢ ÅÌò¾Ð.

Memory Retain Option-ø þÐ. «ôÀÊ¡ɡø Memory-Erase-Option-ø, ¸¡Ä þÂó¾¢Ãõ-Part-3 ¯ñ¼¡ ±ýÚ §¸ð¸¢È£÷¸Ç¡? ¿¢îºÂÁ¡ö..

§¾¼ø ¦¾¡¼÷¸¢ÈÐ.. thEdal thodargiRathu


nAn
---

ezuthi, kasakki, kiziththu vitterindha thaLgal
azuntha thudaikkatha en mugam paarkum kannadi
'on' seyyapadamaley sunangiyirukkum walkman
irandu vai sappittavudan erichalai tharum dinner
soappu kuliyalukkai kaaththirukkum azukku sattaigal
iyakki niruthi iyaki nirutha ethirppu kattum en pc
ethanai neram visil adippathu enum milk cooker
yen enai pidikkavillaiya ena ketkum razor
adithu, azaiththu soarndhu pona azaippu mani
sinthanai suvarengum yekka silandhi pinniya
un ninaivu valaigalil meeLa mudiyatha nAn!

¿¡ý
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±Ø¾¢ì ¸ºì¸¢ì ¸¢Æ¢òРŢð¦¼È¢ó¾ ¾¡û¸û,
«Øó¾ò Ш¼ì¸¡¾ ±ý Ó¸õ À¡÷ìÌõ ¸ñ½¡Ê,
'¬ý' ¦ºöÂôÀ¼¡Á§Ä Í½í¸¢Â¢ÕìÌõ Å¡ì§Áý,
þÃñÎ Å¡ö º¡ôÀ¢ð¼×¼ý ±Ã¢îºø ¾Õõ ÊýÉ÷,
§º¡ôÒì ÌÇ¢ÂÖ측öì ¸¡ò¾¢ÕìÌõ «ØìÌî ºð¨¼¸û,
þÂ츢 ¿¢Úò¾¢ þÂ츢 ¿¢Úò¾ ±¾¢÷ôÒò ¦¾Ã¢Å¢ìÌõ ±ý PC,
'±ò¾¨É §¿Ãõ Å¢º¢ø «ÊôÀÐ?' ±Ûõ Á¢øì Ìì¸÷,
²ý ±¨Éô À¢Êì¸Å¢ø¨Ä¡ ±Éì §¸ðÌõ §Ã…÷,
«ÊòÐ, «¨ÆòÐî §º¡÷óÐ §À¡É «¨ÆôÒ Á½¢,
º¢ó¾¨Éî ÍŦÃíÌõ ²ì¸î º¢Äó¾¢ À¢ýÉ¢Â
¯ý ¿¢¨É× Å¨Ä¸Ç¢ø Á£Ç ÓÊ¡¾ ¿¡ý!

Íþ¢,

"«ÊòÐ, «¨ÆòÐî §º¡÷óÐ §À¡É «¨ÆôÒ Á½¢, "<<<

‹õõ....À¡Åõ «ÊôÀÅ÷¸û!...but happens...lol

"º¢ó¾¨Éî ÍŦÃíÌõ ²ì¸î º¢Äó¾¢ À¢ýÉ¢Â
¯ý ¿¢¨É× Å¨Ä¸Ç¢ø Á£Ç ÓÊ¡¾ ¿¡ý! "<<<

wow! could not be expressed better!

___________

"¯ÉìÌô À¢Êò¾¾¡ø
´§Ã ¿¢Èò¾¢ø ´ýÀÐ ºð¨¼¸û,
ÌǢâÖõ Ţʸ¡¨Äì ̾¢§Â¡ð¼õ,
°÷ô ¨ÀÂýÙìÌ 'µº¢'¢ø Êä„ý.. "<<

lol good one!

"¬É¡ø,
±¾ü¸¡¸×õ ¾Â¡Ã¢ø¨Ä,
À¢Ã¢Â ÁðÎõ ! "<<<

«ÅÙõ, «ÅÛõ, not compatible i guess!

¦Á¡ò¾ò¾¢ø, ¯í¸û §¾¼Ä¢ý Å¢¨ÇÅ¡ö..Åó¾

'¿¡ý' ¦Ã¡õÀ «Æ¸¡É ¸Å¢¨¾.

«ÅÛõ «ÅÙõ "not bad!"

"ayyOdA ! «ö§Â¡¼¡ !"<<<

lol....rings the tune..in my mind..

ungaL thEdaLin "Naan" padithathum enakku thOndriya paadal

"«Æ†¡É ᄺ¢§Â..«Ê ¦¿ïº¢ø ̾¢ì¸¢È¢§Â...
«Ê Áɨº «ÕÅ¡Á¨½Â¢ø ¿ÚìÌÈ¢§Â"

plz forgive me for all 'Ã ' and 'È' mistakes. I happen to be too poor in that also in sandhippizhai.

to be read as

"«Æ¸¡É á섺¢§Â"

Shakti, I owe you a lot for these reviews. (Enakkum pidiththathu 'nAn'..) the scrapping of this 'Time-Machine' is just one more poem away (memory-erase option).

on compatibility..

±ÉìÌô À¢Êò¾ ¯ÉìÌ
±ý¨Éô À¢ÊìÌõ ÁðÎõ
±ÉìÌô À¢Êì¸Å¢ø¨Ä,
±ý¨É ÁðÎõ!

enakku piditha unakku
ennai pidikkum varai
enakku pidikkavillai
ennai mattum !

enRu avan sonnathaRkku, avaL padhilthan..

¯í¸û Å¢ÃÄ¢ý Ñɢ¢ø ±ýÈ¡ø,
¦¿üȢ¢ø þðÎì ¦¸¡ûÇ..

ungal viralin nuniyil endral,
netriyil ittuk kolla..

[pls wish them goodluck, shakti.. and thanks)

ennavo onnnnnnnum puriyalai

yeah i am ready to wish goodluck to any such non-compatible or compatible pairs!

:)

best wishes to THEM

unakku kavidhaigaL ezhudha theriyAmal irundhirukkalAm,
alladhu un kavidhai varigal en kannil padAmal pOyirukkalAm.....
surathi....ippadikuda sollalaame.."neeye kavidhaiyagi iruppadhai naan adhai unaraamal poyirukkalaam" endru....azhagana neerodai pondra varigal ungaludayathu...idharkumel naan paarattavillai,,seriya surathi? shy

Shy, Thanks. "NeerOdai pOl varigal.." enRu neengal kurippittirundhathai periya paarattaga eduthu konden..