Not until he could get to the truth. He quickly paced to his car to follow Paul's red Lamborgini..."Hmm, a carpenter, with a Lamborgini?" he pondered.
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Not until he could get to the truth. He quickly paced to his car to follow Paul's red Lamborgini..."Hmm, a carpenter, with a Lamborgini?" he pondered.
Its a good thing that the traffic was light he thought..otherwise he would have never been able to keep up with Paul.
Just as he was busy focusing on the trails of Pauls car...a 18 wheeler was rushing furiously on the opposite of his car..
He swerved the car to the right, and then the rest was a daze. When he opened his eyes, he found himself in a room. He faintly heard two voices outside the door....
"Come On Holmes! I say we Smoke Him Ese!!" He heard coming the other side of the door.
He had to think quick. He positioned himself by the wall next to the door. The surprise element was his only way out!
He peeped out from the edge of the wall ... and saw a sight which shocked him beyond words !
It was his wife and his brother!!!! :shock:
(Thanks Madhu for catching that :) )
his Wife... mm.. means.. wife of John :lol:
His wife was for somereason speaking in a heavy mexican accent using terms like Homes and Ese? :? :lol:
Anywayz, here it goes:
His brother grabbed her and pinned her to the wall. "If we don't kill him now, he will find out!! Why don't you understand?!"
"He is my Husband!!" she replied.
both of them were thinking and were speechless for a moment.
then suddenly,the door knocked.. PIZZA for delivery maam.. she told sorry wrong door number.the pizza guys then went away.
As they were preoccupied with the Pizzaman, John kicked the dorr open and shot his brother's Thigh.
The bullet just grazed his brother's thigh but ...lodged itself into his wife's leg instead :oops: :lol:
"This is my chance to escape" he thought, and bolted past the door...but soon realised that he had made a BAD decision....
@ the door was a 300 pound overgrown black monstrocity with a sawed off shotgun. "Nigga get back inside foo!!!" he yelled. :lol:
checking in as i said i would NM...seems like walking down memory lane...dodging bullets all the while...if you know what i mean :wink: :roll: :P
haha..u should post the following one liner...one which might change the whole situation, from dodging bullets to surpricing endings. :P
He ran scared for his life, bullets whizzing past his head...the staccato firing of machine guns like a rhythemic beat in tune with the sound of his running feet.
Ramky!!!!!! :D :D :clap: That was an awesome Line!!! 8-) I can't follow that...:oops:...it was too good. I'll let someone else post. :D
:oops: :( I really thought the story will take a different route until Surya had to come with the bullets :PQuote:
Originally Posted by Querida
:oops:
Every moment each bullet fired upon him..there was a sound of death in them...and when death itself was reigining upon..a bright light of hope dawned upon him..Quote:
Originally Posted by ramky
Dont check in for a few days and look what happens!!We have the brother alive plotting with his wife :lol:
Yes!!All he had to do was dodge a few more bullets and then he'd be safe!
He too had a gun ! Now he just has to remember where he had dumped it ( afraid that he would be framed for a murder he didnt commit ) while escaping the hot pursuit of the law.Quote:
Originally Posted by Hulkster
As his fustration grew wider after he could not find where he left his gun...a van zoomed past him snatching him inside it and to his surprise it was his wife.
For a few seconds, he had a sense of relief...until she took out a syringe with a very long needle.... :twisted:
She jammed it into his neck....
"yeaeeeaeaeaaoooo" he screamed! It was a scream that comes out with you know with absolute certainty that you are going to be high. :lol: :P
Ayyyyoooooo....Surya!!!!! :roll:
As he passed out into oblivion, the last thing he saw was the look on his wife's face - that of a spider which has ensnared a prey in its web ... and looking forward with glee to finishing it off !
She smiled.. She smiled after 7 long, lonely, sad and cruel years. She had not killed but put an end to the trauma in her life.
7 years of her life wasted bcos of this man lying before her ! ..... her mind went into a flash back ... how it had all started 7 years ago when she had visited the temple of the Lord of the Seven Hills in Tirupathi, as part of an archeological team - to study the temple's architectural grandeur. What a strange coincidence the number 7 played in her life ! She had met him at gate no. 7 at the temple. They had roamed around together & courted for 7 weeks. They got married in 7 minutes at a temple. And she had found that she was pregnant after 7 months ..... !
..... and the chiming of her wristwatch brought her back to the present...
( NOW THE STORY MUST MOVE IN QUANTUM LEAPS AND JUMPS, LIKE A HOLLYWOOD FILM. NOT LIKE A TV SERIAL !
COMMON PPL, USE UR IMAGINATION TO THE FULLEST AND LETS PRODUCE A RACY & EXCITING TALE ! )
what was john/pauls wife doing in Tirupathi???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by ramky
:lol:
that is a huge jump,from LA to Tirupathi :lol:
:rotfl: :rotfl:
Nalla vella 6-6-6 theme illa :lol: Anyway, getting back to the story...Quote:
Originally Posted by ramky
Now all she had to do was to figure out how to get to the money in the bank locker and make a run for it. She was determined not to get caught this time either!!!
SS : she went to india to study temple architecture ! :-PQuote:
Originally Posted by ssanjinika
i took a bit of literary artistic license to make the story spicy, and took the location to the land of spices ! :lol:
ab_123 : u cud hv linked my lines and continued from there ... :roll: neways carry on with ur original storyline :-P
She planned quickly. With a little money she got for herself a new wig, a walking stick, a grandma glass and a air pouch. Once her makeup was over, she looked at herself in the mirror and was satisfied. She was looking like a Roman in the Rome.
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It seemed a miracle how her life has twisted from Tirupathi to Rome.. (Both reffered as city of 7 Hills)
... and "in Rome do as Romans do" as the saying goes.. so she ....
Unga story "flashback" nenaichutu proceed panniten. Sorry.Quote:
Originally Posted by ramky
So she dialed a number on her cell phone and said "Bon giorno...". She listened carefully to the man on the other end and then scribbled on her note pad "Raymondo Romano".... :lol:Quote:
Originally Posted by ramky
She felt hungry, so she dialed a number that she remembered from...oh who remembers, on her cellphone? After the thrid ring, "Ray Romano's Pizzaria" a man with a deep voice answered.
PS: I just read all the stories from page 1....:shock: :shock: W-E-I-R-D!
Ray would be the man to help her break into the Bank locker. "They had to make a flawless plan", she thought, "otherwise....." she did not even want to think about the consequences.