þÄ츽ò¾¢ø ÀâîºÂõ þ øÄ¡¾§À¡Ðõ ¬÷Å째¡Ç¡È¢É¡ø þ¨¾ ±Ø¾¢§Éý, À¢¨Æ¾¢Õò¾õ ¦ºöЦ¸¡Îí¸û:
¦¸¡ñ¼Å¨É ¾ý ¬ñ¼ÅÉ¡ö ¦¸¡ñ¼¡Ê
¬ñ¼Åû ¬ÉÅû «Õ¨Á ¦Àñ¼¡ðÊ
¦¾¡ñÊø ÌÇ¢ôÀ¡ð¼ þÕÅ÷ìÌõ §À¡ðÊ
¸ñ¼È¢ó¾ Áɧ¾ Á¸¢ú× ¾Õõ
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þÄ츽ò¾¢ø ÀâîºÂõ þ øÄ¡¾§À¡Ðõ ¬÷Å째¡Ç¡È¢É¡ø þ¨¾ ±Ø¾¢§Éý, À¢¨Æ¾¢Õò¾õ ¦ºöЦ¸¡Îí¸û:
¦¸¡ñ¼Å¨É ¾ý ¬ñ¼ÅÉ¡ö ¦¸¡ñ¼¡Ê
¬ñ¼Åû ¬ÉÅû «Õ¨Á ¦Àñ¼¡ðÊ
¦¾¡ñÊø ÌÇ¢ôÀ¡ð¼ þÕÅ÷ìÌõ §À¡ðÊ
¸ñ¼È¢ó¾ Áɧ¾ Á¸¢ú× ¾Õõ
//ponnum maNiyum porulum palathEdi
pannaadengum paranthalaiyum - pazanthamizaa
ponnum poruLum pukazthEdi vanthaalum
chontha maNNil vaazum manamE makizvu tharum.//
¸¡÷ò¾¢¨¸â ¸Å¢ìÌ þõãýÈ¢ø ²¾¡Å¦¾¡ýÚ:
¦À¡ýÛõ Á½¢Ôõ ¦À¡ÕÙõ Àħ¾Êô
ÀýÉ¡ ¼¨ÄóÐ ÀÃó¾ ¾Á¢Æ¡
¾Éõ¡×õ ¦ÀüÈ¡Öõ ¾ý¦º¡ó¾ ÁñÅ¡ú
ÁɧÁ Á¸¢ú× ¾Õõ.
ÀýÉ¡ ¼¨ÄóÐ ÀĦÀ¡Õû ¦À¡ýÁ½¢Ôõ
¿ýÉ¡ô ÀÆó¾Á¢Æ¡ ¿ñ½¢ÊÛõ - Óý§É¡÷
¿¢Äõ¦º¡ó¾ Å¡Æ¢¼Á¡ö ¿£¦¸¡ñ¼ §À¡§¾
ÁɧÁ Á¸¢ú× ¾Õõ.
ÀýÉ¡ ¼¨ÄóÐ ÀĦÀ¡Õû ¦À¡ýÁ½¢Ôõ
¿ýÉ¡ô ÀÆó¾Á¢Æ¡ ¿ñ½¢ÊÛõ - Óý§É¡÷
¿¢Ä§Á¯ý ¦º¡ó¾ þ¼Á¡öÅ¡úóò ¾¡§Ä
ÁɧÁ Á¸¢ú× ¾Õõ.
Next we shall indulge in the poem by Mdm PP.
¿¡ý¸¡Å¦¾¡ýÚõ µÊÅóÐ ±ý¨ÉÔõ ±ØÐ ±ýÈÐ. «Ð þ§¾¡:
ÀýÉ¡Îõ ¦ºýȨÄóÐ Àø¦À¡ÕÙõ ¦À¡ýÁ½¢Ôõ
Óý¿¡Êô §À¡üÚõ ÓоÁ¢Æ¡ -- ¦¾ýÉ¡Î
¯É¾¡õ ¦º¡ó¾Áñ½¢ø ´ðÊÅ¡úó¾¡ø «ý§È¡
ÁɧÁ Á¸¢ú× ¾Õõ.
I have gone a distance from the original compo by Karthikaipoo. I won't try further. As I wrote all the four, I leave it to you readers to say which one you like:
This was written by our PP Madam:
//¦¸¡ñ¼Å¨É ¾ý ¬ñ¼ÅÉ¡ö ¦¸¡ñ¼¡Ê
¬ñ¼Åû ¬ÉÅû «Õ¨Á ¦Àñ¼¡ðÊ
¦¾¡ñÊø ÌÇ¢ôÀ¡ð¼ þÕÅ÷ìÌõ §À¡ðÊ
¸ñ¼È¢ó¾ Áɧ¾ Á¸¢ú× ¾Õõ //
The above can be converted to a veNba as follows:
¦¸¡ñ¼¡ý¾ý ¬ñ¼ÅÉ¡öì ¦¸¡ñ¼¡Êò ¾¡ÉÕ¨Áô
¦Àñ¼¡ðÊ ¬ñ¼ÅÇ¡ É¡û§À¡ðÊò ---- ¦¾¡ñÊø
þÉ¢ÐÌÇ¢ô À¡ðÊ즸¡ñ ¼¡Ã¢ÕÅ÷ ¸ñ¼
Áɧ¾ Á¸¢ú× ¾Õõ.
தென்னாட்டை மட்டும் செப்பிட்ட பொருளேதோQuote:
Originally Posted by bis_mala
பொன்னாடாம் தமிழ்வீரம் பொலியும் தமிழீழம்
அன்னாடும் எம் சொந்த நன்னாடாம் என்பதை
என்னாளும் மறவாதே எழிலார் தமிழ் நெஞ்சே!
வணக்கம் Mala!
உங்களுடைய கவிதைகள் எல்லாம் மிகவும் நன்றாக உள்ளன. எனக்கு சுட்டுப் போட்டாலும் வெண்பா வராது போலிருக்கிறது. மேலேயுள்ள வரிகளையும் தயவு செய்து வெண்பாவாக மாற்றுங்கள்.
நன்றி
கார்த்திகைப்பூ
Á¡Ä¡, ¿¡ý ¦º¡øÄ ¿¢¨Éò¾¨¾ Á¢¸ «Æ¸¡¸ ¦¸¡ñÎ ÅóÐûÇ£÷¸û! ÀÊì¸ Á¢¸×õ Á¸¢ú¡ö þÕ츢ÈÐ! Á¢ì¸ ¿ýÈ¢!
(±ÉìÌõ ÍðÎô§À¡ð¼¡Öõ ¦ÅñÀ¡ ÅáР±ýÚ¾¡ý §¾¡ýÚ¸¢ÈÐ!!!)
Superb, Madam Mala. You have made my 'venba' a venba. Yes!Quote:
Originally Posted by bis_mala
I am not asking too much, I guess, but can you pick some of the santhams from the venbas here as examples of the sIrs that you mentioned above
¾¡õ-¾¡õ
¾É-¾¡õ
¾É¾É
¾¡õ-¾É
¾¡õ¾¡õ
¾¡õ¾É
¾¡õ¾¡õ¾¡õ
¾¡õ¾É¾¡õ
¾É¾É¾¡õ
¾É¾¡õ¾¡õ
¾¡õ
¾É¾É¾É
Idiappam wrote:
//I am not asking too much, I guess, but can you pick some of the santhams from the venbas here as examples of the sIrs that you mentioned above//
Now earlier on I did not include eezam in my composition. Now I compose a special one for yaaznaadu, using our mr. karthigaipoo's substance:
²ú¿¡Îõ ¦ºýȨÄó¾¡ Üú¿¡Êô ¦À¡ýÁ½¢±ô
§À¡ú¾¡Ìõ ±ý§È ¦À¡Õû§¾Îõ --- ¡ú¿¡Î
¯É¾¡¸ô ¦Àü§È¡ö¿£ ¯ýÁñ½¢ø Å¡úó¾¡ø
Áɧ¾ Á¸¢ú× ¾Õõ.
Now let's see the santham:
¾¡õ¾¡õ¾¡õ ¾¡õ¾É¾¡õ ¾¡õ¾¡õ¾¡õ ¾¡õ¾É¾¡õ
¾¡õ¾¡õ¾¡õ ¾¡õ¾¡õ ¾É¾¡õ¾¡õ - ¾¡õ¾¡õ(¾¡õ)
¾É¾¡õ¾¡õ ¾¡õ¾¡õ¾¡õ ¾¡õ¾¡õ¾¡õ ¾¡õ¾¡õ
¾É¾¡õ ¾É¾¡õ ¾É.
þôÀÊî ºó¾õ ÅÕõÀÊ¡¸ô Ò¨ÉóÐ À¡Õí¸û.
Pl also note that the santham in bracket (tham) will disappear in santhi or choRpuNarchi.
Àý-É¡-Îõ ¦ºý-ȨÄó-Ð Àø-¦À¡Õ-Ùõ ¦À¡ý-Á½¢-Ôõ
¾¡õ-¾¡õ-¾¡õ ¾¡õ-¾É-¾¡õ ¾¡õ-¾É-¾¡õ ¾¡õ-¾É-¾¡õ
Óý-¿¡-Êô §À¡ü-Úõ ÓÐ-¾Á¢-Æ¡ -- ¦¾ý-É¡-Î
¾¡õ-¾¡õ-¾¡õ ¾¡õ-¾¡õ ¾É-¾É-¾¡õ ¾¡õ-¾¡õ-¾¡õ
note: in É¡-Î, there is no ´ü¦ÈØòÐ and in ¾¡õ-¾¡õ there is in each syllable, but ingore this for the time being. Same for other santhams also.
¯É¾¡õ / ¦º¡ó-¾Áñ-½¢ø/ ´ð-ÊÅ¡úó- ¾¡ø / «ý-§È¡
¾É¾¡õ/ ¾¡õ¾É¾¡õ /¾¡õ-¾É - ¾¡õ /¾¡õ-¾¡õ
ÁɧÁ Á¸¢ú× ¾Õõ.
ÍðÎô §À¡ð¼¡Öõ Å᧾¡?
Íð¼ ¦ÅñÀ¡ì¸û §Åñ¼¡õ,
ͼ¡¾ ¦ÅñÀ¡ì¸û §À¡Î§Å¡§Á!!
PP Madam and Karthikapoo avl : miindum varuka!!
Can't read the font!
Mala,I shall always go through your contributions very eagerly whether I respond or not. Keep it up!