yeah :lol2: such rich choice of words! I cant help admiring every bit of it :)Quote:
Originally Posted by chevy
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yeah :lol2: such rich choice of words! I cant help admiring every bit of it :)Quote:
Originally Posted by chevy
Que... needless to mention.. .. kalakkals :thumbsup:
I have to admit that I had to read the story once again to be sure of what I understood is right :P
Yea .. as u said you were struggling to get rid of the poetry and make it pure prose ... but I think, the unique style made the story look polished.. :)
All the best for ur future stories :thumbsup:
simply blown away by the narration style, queri..........implicit narration at its best..........wish i could write in this style one day :)
:bow: :bow: :bow:
You mustn't spoil silly a new timer...sweet how my own faves call me theirs :ty:
Sinthiya :ty:
Thamizh :ty:
Maddy! you have your own style...it rocks!..no need to say one day!
Queri,
As with your Scribbles and Indigo, this is simply astounding! I read it the other day and guess i couldn't find words to express my thoughts and feeling, hence this little post of mine a few days late :oops:
You really should seriously think of writing and publishing short stories plus poetry/poems! Such talent should not be wasted. :D
I was thinking of you as I was reading Jeffrey Archer's short stories - short, sweet, abrupt :D
Thank for thinking of me NM :D ( a hug emoticon would go here if this were yahoo :P)...well NM I have tried before entering writing contests esp poetry but have been turned down...I keep it to the back of my mind...cause i am seriously awful when it comes to dealing with disappointment...but thank you all the same!!!
I sometimes really do think you all spoil me too much...I am so very used to my papers being torn up with criticism and corrections...my grammar is abhorrent...and here i am not being merely modest...I have enough evidence! :lol: :oops:
wow !
Q ! :clap:
nice narration ! we can just feel the emotions of the characters as our own !
what to say ?
I cant even turn ! ( to read other articles, for a while ) :thumbsup:
Good one Q !
Have always toyed with the idea of making a story out of journeys in TTC. The motivation vanished as I stepped out. The moments "inside" are pregnant with untold stories.
The fractured storytelling style was impressive. Had to read carefully and piece things together.
That the moment and theme may be less than universal but is quite important to the narrator was brought out quite well.
Keep writing :thumbsup: