he found a spanner and a screw driver
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he found a spanner and a screw driver
and searched for his crowbar...he knew it was somewhere in the now mangled trunk
but he was not ready to search for it as he was in haste
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Hi all
I am giving a brief synopsis of the story so that new comers to this thread can contribute their one liners without confusion :
Elaine has a daughter. She had an older brother Cassidy for whose accidental death, she blames Jed (her ex-husband / ex-boy friend). There's also a character Jess (illicit lover? / blackmailer? / gangster? / police detective ? / ?) who's connected with Elaine and Jed has come to know something about Jess.
At this point in the story, Elaine speeds away from her house in a car, after hearing gun shots. Her mobile buzzes and the voice at the other end says, "He has shot me!". Elaine has crashed the car & is in a daze (maybe injured?), and someone is walking towards her with a crowbar in hand.
Now to continue -
It was covered with the blood of the man he had shot. He now walked towards Elaine with the crowbar poised for assault.Quote:
Originally Posted by Querida
Elaine looked at the approaching menace almost blinded by the shock of the crash - who IS it coming towards her ? Jed or Jess ?!
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designer anna thank you so much for da summary :redjump: as i was lost :roll:
someone continue pls :D
Arshu : why dont u try ur hand :D ? jez one line will do :P
sure why not :D
Something tells her its' JED
To clarify further:Quote:
Originally Posted by Designer
Jeff is Elaine's husband, and Jess is Elaine's daughter. Jess's biological father is Jed, Elaine's ex- boyfriend...
to continue...
She tried frantically to free herself from the car, but the locks were jammed. Her fingers shivered as she tried to dial 9-1-1 on her s\cell phone....
she pressed the mobile upon her ear hoping to hear the ring tone..
but the voice informed "All the lines in this route are busy !"
"what the hell is this",she said.
She was profusely sweating by now. 'WHAT NEXT?' She thought!
at last she got the solution... for her sweat. yes... she found her hand kerchief.
But alas, she did not notice the letter that had dropped from her handbag where she reached for her handkerchief!
madhu anna :lol: even a thrilller can b made a comedy..........
but her kerchief was already wet with her sweat
( madhu :rotfl2: )
so she bent and picked up a paper napkin from the roll, "oh whats that, seems like a note!" her mind was contemplating
The note she picked up was torn, crumpled and illegible, smeared with lipstick, powder and perfume; probably the impact of the accident had crushed her handbag. However on a fragment of paper she could barely make out the letters 'JE' - Jeff? or Jed? or..?
But before she could make sense of the letter, the man with the crowbar was right by her window. She had to think quickly....with all her might she pushed open the car door, knocking the man slightly off his feet...
she heard the angry voice "maam... cant you just see what you are doing ? How can we do the road repair if public disturb us like this ?"
she has no idea of her thoughts and actions
... she had barely recovered from the accident and viewed the man with suspicion. As she looked at him closely, he seemed to look at her malevolently...
// Hi ab_123 ! wb, long time no c ? - Ramky
"Sorry sir", she apologized, still unsure of what had happened. Just then, she saw a police car approaching "Was Jed a killer?" she thought...she didn't know who to trust anymore...
(Hi Ramky...nice to c u 2)
Car stopped right near her car with a screeeeeeech!
Who is in the car? Am i safe? she had these confused feelings within her
Her palm was dripping sweat and the note which she wanted to read, was mashed almost into a pulp. "why me!!!" she thought
The policeman jumped out of the car and grabbed Elaine by the arm, "Lady, you are under arrest for the murder of Jed Evans...." Elaine froze in disbelief!!!
"i did not kill him. What are you talking about?", she asked in a nervous tone
Sweat & tears, of threat and fears blurred her vision. As she fumbled in her handbag & took out her hankerchief, something fell from it with a metallic clink - a blood stained knife !
That was enough for the policeman to handcuff her, and push her into the backseat of the car. He then carefully picked up the knife with a handkerchief and dropped it into a plastic bag.
"Sigh! This is enough to run enough electricity through you to light up Birmingham!" he whispered letting a puff of smoke which he had sucked through the half burnt ciggerette out of his mouth as he walked back to the Squad Car. 8-)
As they drove to the Jailhouse, Elaine's thoughts wandered from who was going to take care of the kids to how she was going to get out of this mess. Jeff was dead, and Jed had framed her...what was she to do now? "Think Elaine, think..." she murmured to herself...
The Cuffs on her hand felt like they were getting tighter by the second. A Thought Finally Dawned On Her....The Only Way To Get Out Of The Cuffs And The Car Was...Seduction. "Officer...Oh Officer" She said in her deep Seductive Tone.
:rotfl2: :poke:
:o :notthatway: be nice or i'll call the pharmacist on you! :lol: :P
"Lady don't give me any of that crap! Shut up or I'll tape your mouth shut!" growled the officer...she should have known better than to resort to such cheap tactics!
:oops:
"Hmm...Must be gay" She thought to herself. "How'd the hell did u get this job?! :x " She said aloud with unwarrented fury hurting the queer cop's feelings.
"I miss San Francisco!" He snapped back at her again with equal frustration and anger.
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:o
Looks like Elaine touched a soft spot. :cry: :rotfl2:
:lol: @ Surya...
Elaine shifted her weight easing the pressure on her arms, she felt the car slow down to a stop, yet as she was pulled out there was no police station to be seen...
Only a Re-Hab Center for Homophobics. :shock:
:lol:
She was puzzled. Was she being "PUNK'd" ??? Sure felt like it..UNLESS...
(FOr those who don't know...PUNK'd is a show where people play a major pratical joke on a person and capture it thru hidden camera).
:lol: surya ur making dis comedy :lol:
Yam Irukka Bayem Yen? :huh:Quote:
Originally Posted by Wibha