kaadhal.........

[srijk]

kaath..irundhu kaath..irundhu
thavaravitta 12Bkkal...

kandum, kaanaamal irundhu
kural kaettu rasitha kaadhugal...

urupottu vaithirundhum
o..dipona vaarthaigal...

varaadha mazhaikaaga
odhungi nindra kaalgal...

kudaikkul pirindhirundhum
pinainthirundha kaigal...

santhikka mudiyaamal
sirithu sendra kangal...

punnagai baa..shaiyai
puriya vaitha udhadugal...

swaasa kaattru pattu
silirthu pona sparisam...

aadhavan vidaikoduthum
vidai peraadha nenjam...

nithirai marandha iravugal
muthirai padhitha pagalgal...

nee paesiyathilirundhu
marandhu pona en kural...

unnai paarthadhilirundhu
un mugam kaatum en kannaadi...

paesum bodhellaam
mulaithuvidum un peyar...

varudum thendralil nee...
nanaikum mazhaiyil nee...
unnil karaindhu pona naan.................

amaidhiyaana manakkottai...
adhiradiyaai pugundhu vittaai...
siraivaasam.............
veliyera vazhiyillai...
en manadhilirundhum ...........
uyirilirundhum.............................
-- SRI--

[xlntbarani]

//
urupottu vaithirundhum
o..dipona vaarthaigal...

varaadha mazhaikaaga
odhungi nindra kaalgal...

kudaikkul pirindhirundhum
pinainthirundha kaigal...

santhikka mudiyaamal
sirithu sendra kangal...
//

Sri... Neenga hubukku veenum naa pudhusa irukkalam... aanna ezhuthu ungalukku pazasu pola irrukke... nalla irrukku.... tamil'la post seya try pannunga...

Barani

Yennoda.. innum oru vendukoal... ithe threadlayea post pannunga ... unga collectionagavum irrukkum... yengalukkum... thedal baakki... ok...

[malligai]

hi Sri,

//varudum thendralil nee...
nanaikum mazhaiyil nee...
unnil karaindhu pona naan................. //---very nice lines...Barani sonadhu pola u dont seem to be a beginner... :) ...welcome to the K section of the hub...

innum neraya eludhunga...mudinthaal kavidhaigalai tamilil post seiyunga...

[kaathal_kavignan]

dude .

one of the best poem in the hub .
keep it up . post more .


KK

[srijk]

hi!!!!
thank u one and all
i didn't 'xpect such a wonderful response from u all
i'm really very happy
this is my first venture in the group and i'm really moved by ur comments
ur encouragement boosts me to write more and more
meet u all soon with a new post
good day

:)

[gragavan]

nalla ezhuthureenga sri. thamizh-la ezhuthungalean. innum nalla rasika mudiyum. help section refer pannunga. all the best.

regards,
Ragavan

[srijk]

sorry friends!!!

i'm not in a position to use the tamil fonts
try to tolerate my tanglish
here is one more .......

:) kavidhaiye nee enna rettai kulandhaiyaa???????
eppoludhum kaadhalludane pirrakkiraaye????

kaadhal vandhaal kavidhai varum
kavidhai ezhudhinaal kooda kaadhal varugiradhey!!!! :)


and let me have a big one soon

luvin' hubbie,
sri

[srijk]

kandaen unnai en kaadhaliyaai
unarndhaai ennai un thozhanaai!!!!!

kaadhalithen endru arindhavale
adhu unnaithaan endru ariyaadhadhu een?????

en aal manadhaiyum kandavale
adhil un mugathai mattum kaanaadhadhu een????

en kaadhal kadidhangalai sari paarthavale
avai unakuthaan endru puriyaadhadhu een????

ivalaa avalaa endru kettu vandhaye
naanho endru oru muraiyaavadhu kettirukkalaame????

un mana(marriage) ohlaiyai nanaitha en kanneer thuzhigalai
aanandha kanneeraai ninaithu poorithu phonaaye!!!!

en kannil soghathai paarthavale
adhil kaadhalai paarkaadhadhu een????

irudhiyil,
en ganathu phona idhayathai
vaithu tharapogiren indha poongothil!!!!

veen muyarchi,
unnaku theriya povadhu
idhil sirikkum pookkal mattum thaan...........

[malligai]

very nice kavidhai Srijk....thamizhil irundhaal innum ''veryyyyyyy'' nice-aaga irukkum... :)

[srijk]

thank u malligai :)
my problem is that here i cudn't get tamil fonts
please suggest me someway....

[Shakthiprabha.]

plz download murasu editor or
e-kalappai

[srijk]

dear friends ,

this one xpresses the feelin's of a ladyluv who was hurt by the words from her intimate lover.

kaathirukiraen...

oworu vaarthaiyilum thulirtha kaadhal kaaviyangal
indru ranangalaai malarndhadhaen???

undhan sorkalin vellathil moozlgiyaval
indru aeno moochu thinarugiraen!!!

oworu sollilum marumurai pirandhaen
indru marumurai ninaikka ennaiyae izakkiraen!!!

un vaarthaigal ingae sidhariya muthukalaai...
vaarthaigalai thaeda manamillai...
thaediyavatrai maalaiyaakka manadhil dhidamillai...



en aazh.. manadhukkul pudhainthupona
un sorkanaigalai ninaikka marukkiraen...
unnaval enbathai marakka seidha
un mozhigalai ninaikkaamal marakkiraen...

suyanalam...
un mozhigalukku marumozhi koori
unnul irrukkum ennai
kaayappadutha manamillaamal...

ini ,
irrugiya en idhayathai
un illaipaartrum varavukaaga...

un kai..udhari naan kollapogum
poi kobathirkaaga...

ennai thol saithu nee ketkkapogum
mannipirkaaga...

pirapaiyum marakka seiyum
un aarudhalukaaga...

ennaal thulirkkapogum enakkaana
un iruthuzhi kanneerukaaga...

un sogam maraikkapogum
en aravanaipirkaaga...

iruthiyil jeyikapogum
num kaadhalukaaga...

kaathirukkiraen...............
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[srijk]

dear friends
i wrote this after the kumbakonam fire accident

AMMA ENDRU.........

palli mudindha maalaigalilae,
un mugam kaana thudithadhundu...
indru vendhupoana palliyilae,
un mugam kaanaamal irukka thudikiraen...

thavaraamal dhinamum ennai aemaattri
veedu sendravanae..
indrum ennai aemattri
sendrirukka koodaadhaa...

andho!!!!!!
thangaiyidam nee sandaiyittu
poattukonda nagapoochu...
en karuppu thangatthai indru
karugiya thangamaai kaativitadhae...

thangamaai ,vairamaai vazharthaenae...
ippadi thottadhum sidharidum
saambalaagi pogavaa???

kannukkul kanmaniyaai irundhavanae...
eppadi kandupidikka mudiyaamal
urumaari pogavaa???

nee pirakaamalae irrundhirundhaal
vizhiyodu sendrirukkumadaa en sogam...
ippadi pirandhu , pirindhu
en uyiraiyum aedutthu selgirayae...

nee kaalaiyil kodutthu sendra mutthathin
eeram kooda kaayavilaiyadaa
adharkkul mugam theriyamal
pudhaindhu ponayae !!!

indha paaviyin irudhipidi soarukkagavaa
endrumillaamal ootivida sonnaai
indru!!!

siru thee kaayatthai kooda
unnaal thaanga mudiyaadhae...
indru theepilampirkae iraiyaagiyum
amaithiyaai urangugirayae...

kannaa..
endradhum oadi varuvaayae...

indru uyir karaiya
katthugiraen,kadharugiraen..

oru murai kooradaa
amma endru.........

[srijk]

dear friends!!
no comments for my last 2 poems??
"kaathirukiraen" and
"amma endru"
is anythin' wrong with that

[selvakumar]

thangamaai ,vairamaai vazharthaenae...
ippadi thottadhum sidharidum
saambalaagi pogavaa???

"ippadi thottadhum sindhidum" would be more appropriate.



indha paaviyin irudhipidi soarukkagavaa
endrumillaamal ootivida sonnaai
indru!!!

Fantastic.. Today is mother's day. But today those departed souls can say wishes to their mothers from heaven only.



oru murai kooradaa
amma endru.........
Nice finish.

[minnalpoo]

hey sri the last one was absolutely baffling
i never read melancholic poems
but urs was wonderful.
good ending
please do continue

[rami]

"Penaval un peyarai naan ezhuthiyathillai...
Pena mul pattu nee kaayam pada koodathu enbatharkaga...

Un peyarai en ithayathil ezhuthi vaithirukkiren...
Enrum unnai kaayam pannatha en rathathal..."

[selvakumar]

Nice indeed rami. Write more on this.

"Penaval un peyarai naan ezhuthiyathillai...
Pena mul pattu nee kaayam pada koodathu enbatharkaga...

Un peyarai en ithayathil ezhuthi vaithirukkiren...
Enrum unnai kaayam pannatha en rathathal..."

[malligai]

elaam nala iruku... :D