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Topic started by K.Sudhakar(srimangai) (kasturisudhakar@indiatimes.com) (@ 220.224.43.12) on Tue Sep 7 12:27:27 EDT 2004.




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An absolute opposite of my reaction to the seaside experience! I always find the sea, waves, the sands filled with perpetual cheer, mischief, energy, mystery etc but never such tyranny!
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¦¸¡ïºõ ÅõÒ ¦¸¡ïºõ ÅÕò¾òмý: þô¦À¡¦¾øÄ¡õ Å¢¾¨Å¸û ¦À¡ð¨¼ ÐÈôÀ¾¢ø¨Ä- ÅÕò¾õ «ÐÅøÄ («Ð ÅçÅü¸ôÀ¼ §ÅñÊÂÐ); ÌÁâ¸ÙìÌ Áí¸ÄÁ¡ö ¦À¡ðÎ ¨Åì¸ À¢ÊôÀ¾¢ø¨Ä! ±É§Å ¾¢Õò¾¢ ¿¡¸Ã¢¸ Ôž¢ §À¡ø ±ýÚ «Á¡Å¡¨º Å¡Éò¨¾ ¦º¡øÄÄ¡¦ÁýÈ¡ø Å¢¾¨Å ÁÉ §Å¾¨É ¯ÅÁ¡Éò¾¢ø Å¢ðÎô§À¡¸¢ÈÐ!


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sudhakar,

it's not new moon by any means.full moon totally bleached (to clear the blemishes) and dipped in gold.you are setting new standards to emulate!
can't put it anywhere below 70.
ppji,
what is auspicious for you could be irritating or unfashionable to someone else. you may do without that sarcasm (that exclamation mark has a hidden mocking smile).

tiruttakkan

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¸¡üÚ Ðì¸õ À¸÷ó¾ §¿ÃÁÐ.. // ivvalavu powerful expressions.. thamizil padichu evvalavu naalachu!! i have read many poems by you. neenga ellaigalai nagarthi vachukittey poreenga, sudhakar.. engalal etti pidikka mudiyaa vaNNam.

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I will be back with more comments on this same poem, a little while after.


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Thanks PP, TT and Kathir.
The widow symbolism gives the extra density that the theme needs.. Nice discussions on that PP madam and TT!
Kathir, I am happy that you have like this poem. Thanks for the encouragement. Would like to have your comments on the other parts of the poem too.
anpudan
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¾ý ¦¿ï§º¡Î ¸¢Çò¾ø ¦ºöÐ À¡÷ò¾¡ø - ±øÄ¡Ó§Á Íð¦¼Ã¢ìÌõ ¾ý ¾ÅÚ¸Ùì¸¡É ¾£÷ôҸǡ¸ò¾¡ý ¦¾Ã¢¸¢È§¾¡?

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"¸Å¢¨¾" - ¸ñ½¡Ê §À¡Ä - À¡÷츢ÈÅý Ó¸À¢õÀÓõ ¸¡ðʧ ¾£Õõ ±ýÀ¡÷¸û - ;¡¸ÃÕìÌ «ó¾ þÄ츽ò¾¢ø ¸Å¢¨¾ À¨¼ôÀ¦¾ýÀÐ - ´Õ ¾Åõ §À¡ø þÕóÐ ¦ºö¸¢È¡÷!

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welcome back Geno the parimelazagaa! what a commentary! kudos buddy!

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Geno!!!
Thanks a million for coming back . You and your class of appreciation was much missed here by all friends. Welcome back Anbare!
Thanks for the excellent commentary!
anpudan
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¿ñÀ÷¸û ¾¢Õò¾ì¸ÛìÌõ, ;¡¸ÃÕìÌõ ±ý Žì¸í¸û. :=)

¿¡ý «Êì¸Ê Àí̦ÀÈ¡Å¢ð¼¡Öõ - þó¾ô Àì¸í¸¨Çô ÀÊòÐ즸¡ñξ¡ý þÕ츢§Èý. ÜÊ Ţ¨ÃÅ¢ø þÛõ ¿¢¨È ±Ø¾§Å Å¢ÕôÀõ :=)

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