An enjoyable (very)short story

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Topic started by rajeshrs_tvm (@ 61.1.229.223) on Thu May 29 00:40:24 .


Let me translate a "short" form of a malayalam short story which
i enjoyed:

-kamala,vaelaikku pogum kanavanai vaasal varai vandhu vazhiyanuppinal.
-piragu thuvaikka thunigalai adukki vaithapodhu tholaipesi adithathu.
-Eduthu pesiyaval alarinaal.Idi vizhundha idhayathodu veetai kooda poottaamal
theruvin munai varai odinaal. Angae...
-rathathil kulitha nilayil vibathil adipattu kanavan.
kamala suyaninaivu izhandhu surundu vizhundhaal.
-Kanavan irandhu vittaan.Kamala Vidhavai aanal.
Aanalum aval, avan ninaivaaga rathathil podhindha
vellai nira sattaiyai paadhukaappaaga vaithirundhaal.
-Kamalaavin thaai avalai thaduthaal."Vaendaam andha sattaiyai thookki podu.
ilaatti avan aathma unnai pinthodarndhu kittae irukkum..."
aval kaetkavillai.
-Oru naal Sanikkizhamai.Maalai aaru mani.
thunigal thuvaikka aval kulakkaraikku ponaal.
andha thuni moottayil kanavanadhu rathathil puranda sattaiyum irundhadhu.
-Aval sattaiyai eduthu neeril alasa aarambhitha bodhu oru IDI MINNAL thondriyadhu.
Maegangal irundana.
-Aval soap eduthu sattaiyil theythu kazhuga aarambithaal.
oru murai,iru murai ....pala murai ...
...illai- andha raktha karai pogavae illai!!
-Dhideer enru vaanathil oru minnal velicham.Bhoomiyae pilandhu
pogumaaru sapthathudan!
-Suraavali,kaatru.saandhamaana andha neer thadaagathil neeralaigal koppalithana!!
-ADHO...ADHO... oru vellai uruvam.andha vellai uruvam mella aval arugae vandhadhu...
aval viyandhaal;bhayandhaal.
"aththaaaan..."
aamaam.adhu aval kanavanin aathma dhaan.
uruvam aval arugil vandhu ninradhu.
piragu kaagidhathil podhindha eadho onrai avalukku neetiyadhu.
-aval adhai vaanginaal.
Thirandhu adhu ennavenru paartha nerathil uruvam maraindhadhu.
aanal oru Asareeri mattum muzhangiyadhu..
"Idhu pudhiya venmaegam soap.orae alasalil azhukkellaam poividum
palichidum venmaikku venmaegam soap"...
(do u like this prize winning kad(a)i by a student named Manu.U.ponnan?)

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No takers ?? :( :(

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Sorry to disappoint. This is not a short story. One of those melodramatic ghost stories trivializing the theme with which the story was started.

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s.subramanian ..
thks for the comment.
but this cannot be called a short story, the writer actually wanted to make a satire on today's consumerism and advertisements.
thanks

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Pls don't call these sort of scribbles as Short stories,Idhu kadai yum,illai,kadi yum illai,adhaiyum thandiya kuppai.

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yeppaaa..
aalukku aal rotten eggs-aa paathu moonjeela adikkiraanga :(
thaanga mudiyalai..
mannichurungannaa ..theriyaama post pannittaen
:)

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Unmai solbavan,

Comments are welcome!
But too strong comments leads to distaste!

Shakthi

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shakthi..
konjam kai kuduthu ezhuppi vida neengalaavadhu vandheengalae..
nanri..
naan padichappa romba enjoy pannaen.
naan thamizhaakkam senjadhulayo alladhu engoyo
sodhappittaen
bye

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veN padai, sori idhukkellaam indha veN mEga soap pOttu kuLichaa sariyaa pOgumnu ninaikkiRen.

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u could have at least wrote the story in english so people could understand it
not everybody understands ur language

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u could have at least wrote the story in english so people could understand it
not everybody understands ur language

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to the person who thinks this is dumb,

IF U DONT UNDERSTAND OUR LANGUAGE, U READ SOMETHING WHICH U DO UNDERSTAND.

Not the whole population in earth, talks ur language.

WE HAVE OUR LANGUAGE

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not nice.i expected some matured ending.sounds silly.can use this story to kid 5 year old child during night times.

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"the writer actually wanted to make a satire on today's consumerism and advertisements. "
the story is well appreciated in this angle. Moreover, its written by a student, probably a kid. And, it has all the qualities that a short story should have. The end is silly or not, it provides a good humour inspite of the seriousness in the beggining. After all, the story was making a point on the extent which "advertisements' can go.

My appreciations to the original author and rajeshrs_tvm who found that there is a point here!

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rajeshhrs_tvm dont give up.keep up ur good job. critics is what made great people today

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I tried to read the story, but i didn't understand it can you plaese translate it into English, thanks. No, REALLY I WANT TO READ IT BUT IT TAKES ALOT OF TIME TRY TO MAKE OUT THE WORDS WHICH I FIND VERY HARD.

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nithya kalyaani.. thanks so much for the encouraging words.
tharsini .. thanks 4 your interest .
but i dont feel this story deserves a translation.
may be with a better one next time.
thanks a lot

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Dear mad friend ,I thought it’s a small story oh my god it’s a huge story I went mad while going thru that stupid story,

Please inime inthamathiri engala yemathathey kollathey ,na etho story nalla irukom nu padicha etho reel ezhuthi vechi-iruke hey guys plz look at the title An enjoyable (very) short story so sad achooooooooooooo my friend plz don’t do this again

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mannichukkongannaaa

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rajesh, tvm,

pavanga neenga, edo teriyaaama oru kathai ezhudi, adukku tiruppi tiruppi mannippu kekarade unga pozhaippa pochu!

lol

i guess every one gets irritated with the title u wrote.
(enjoyable) What is enjoyable is a relative term. Adanalai vimarsichu ungalai kizhi kizhinnu kizhikaraanga

:)

i appreciate ur patience in replying

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hi rajesh plz dont be sorry it happens sometimes

title was good Obviously not matching with story
unga muyarchi kandipa appreciate pannanum keep try to post some more stuff

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hakthi..
for me, these comments of readers have become more enjoyable than the
story.
everytime i come this side, naturally it becomes a habit
to see where my thread is..(kaakkaikkum than kunju..!)..just to
find out some 'interesting'comments..

rajani avargalae..

mikka nanri.
indha thread "archive" section kku pogum varai kadhai viduvadhillai
enru kudumiyai avizhthu vittullaen...:)
;)

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Shakthi ..ungalidamum mannippu kaetka vaendiya nilamai :)-
S vizhungiyadharkku...

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rsr,

:)

paravayillai!

"mikka nanri.
indha thread "archive" section kku pogum varai kadhai viduvadhillai
enru kudumiyai avizhthu vittullaen...:)
;)"<<<<

:))))

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ok bye shakthi

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hi
your story is nice.its your own creative thinking,we all don't have any rights to complain about that.its a nice story.don't give up.sure u will give better story.

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Next time right this in english.So that every one can understand it.(this is not a short story,it looks pretty to me.)

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I opened the Forum Hub and didnot read the short story but casually I atarted reading the commentaries and appriciations about the story written by rajeshrs.After that only I felt like reading it. I started reading the short story. It is a very good imagination. Only one doubt grinds my brain, and that is can by any chance this rajeshrs be a manufacturer of that Venmaegam Soap.

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Hahahaha

there it is!


this thread is back again...

lol rsr

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Silar sirippaar
Silar Azhuvaar ..
naan Sirippadhaa Azhuvadhaa?
Shakthi..
Unga Lollukku alavae kidaiyaadhaa?
Indha thread ennaikku Archive -kku poavadhu...naan
eppo adutha kadhai ezhudhuvadhu

:) and also :(

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:))

k i wont post in this thread......hope that would take this inside archive

:))

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hi aactually this story is soo funny at first i thought its a really ghost story but i realise that yorcreative mind is cheating everyone.Ok i suggest u to read our story tittle "nanbar ulagam" part 1 thank you......

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dONNO who is gonna interpret this in what way ...lol...so intersting!

I remember one story in english

I think written by 7 authors, its a thriller and agatha christie has contributed her version too. It was superb .....

and finally all 7 authors as epilogue wrote how they would have finished the story....pointing who as culprit. IT WAS WONDERFUL TO READ.

We should do something like that...After this story ends, we should invite all participants to write a jist of their end....(how they would have finished the story)

GREAT GOING.



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rajesh,

THE ABOVE POST IS FOR '' DISCUSSION ON THODAR KATHAI THREAD''

i SERIOUSLY did not wanna trouble ur thread........:((

:((


sorry sorry sorry sorry!

Guess fate is playing strongly against u (or for ur thread...)

:(

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sHakthi vidunga ...
sorry for the delay in responding.
anyway i had too much fun with this thread.
thanks 2 u..

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short story

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rajesh plz give up ur vratham and start with another story...looks like its gonna be tough for u to keep up the word

:))

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rubbish! you nerds!

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It is a pain reading it this way. How about using a tamil font-generator like Murasu Anjal?

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hai folks can i also join inthis hub to present some of my works here & to share the things with u....i don't how to do it ....plz help me ....

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Good story

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nice da rajesh,
a typical ghost comedy A typical ghost comedy story brought to u by venmaegam soap, ungal thairiyathuketra bayangaramana soap

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ada paavi ippadi sentimentaiyum comedyum mix panni kuruma pannittyae

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hi
iam new to this forum. i happened to read this story(kadi-ya pottuduchu) in a google search. was really nice. i want tp join this forum atleast to read the contributions. please tell me how.
soumya

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Can anybody help me by giving a link from where i can get the malayalam short stories in Malayalam itself.

Hope to get reply.

Thanks in advance.

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Can anybody help me by giving a link from where i can get the malayalam short stories in Malayalam itself.

Hope to get reply.

Thanks in advance.

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i think the store is super!! from the commend. by i dont understand
that in tamil fond
good try!!!

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hello,

can anybody translate it to malayalam or please give the link. i am not able to understand the story

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