Pen

[jalal]

Enatharumai pennae
unnai parthen nanae
parthathum maranthen ennai
ennai thedinen ennul
kidaikkavillai, thavithen
pin arinthen naan irunthen unnul
ennai thinam tharisithen un vizhigalil
veyil,mazhai,kaatru,velicham yavatraiyum maranthen
aanal marakka mudiyamal thavithen unnai
neeyo pennae tharisikkamal vittai ennai
unathu kadaikkan parvaiyai kooda enakku tharavillaiye
pennae yennai yematriya pennae
unakkul puthaiyunda naan izhanthu vitten ennai

[malligai]

good Jalal...

[tiruttakkan]

May be a shade better than the other two. Try more and better. Wish you happy hubbing and all the best in your efforts!

Tiruttakkan

[ungaludan]

enna Kadhal Tholviyaa? Kavidhaiyai innum mergaetrum vagaiyil ezhutha en vazthukkal!
Thiagu :)