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V.Annasamy
20th March 2009, 10:48 AM
Two ways for depiction
See, carry out description.
Other is some contemplation,
Supported by words ornamentation.

First is little easier
As ones get busier
With 'scene', intimates further.
Like reporting as is where.

Other one requires imagination.
On something, a 'tele'vision.
Experience with true sensation
Flow follows, a tradition.


-va-

pavalamani pragasam
20th March 2009, 03:25 PM
A good attempt!

V.Annasamy
21st March 2009, 11:57 AM
Thanks PP.

pavalamani pragasam
21st March 2009, 05:08 PM
You are welcome!

Querida
27th March 2009, 12:29 AM
nice attempt...keep up with it :) don't be afraid to not rhyme :)