Remains of there (Querida)

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Remains of there

- Querida


around the bend
there lies more of this
yet still i rise
to see the corner
i've come so near!
and so far
i still see no more than this
i turn back and start again
so that point cannot be missed!
i pretend to begin
where i continued before
walking towards the edge of this
here lies the remains of there!
reached before without even
knowing it was where!

[pavalamani pragasam]

:clap: Beautiful play of words with apparent contradictions/confusions!

[bingleguy]

Good one Q !

[crazy]

Nice :clap:

[Querida]

Thank you PP Maam, BG and Crazy!
:D

[Wibha]

Q :thumbsup:

[sundararaj]

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[ravi58]

good work

[thamizhvaanan]

:roll: Someone explain the theme of this poem... :roll:

[Hulkster]

Thamizhu...its like oxymorons used in a "searching" like manner to explain something that the fella is searching but cant seem to get/understand it. :D