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Nichiro
18th December 2006, 08:42 PM
Sounds of silence

O "Silence" ,
Your alphabet
Has only
one consonant,
Which has many sounds.


The sound of silence
In a childless home
Is different from
A child sleeping
In a mother's lap.

The sound of silence
In a graveyard
Is different from
Empty labour room
In a hospital.

The sound of silence
Heard by a mute child
Is different from
The silence locked
In a teacher's stick.

The sound of silence
Just before the storm
Is different from
The deathly silence
That prevails after the storm.

O "Silence ,
Your alphabet
Has only
one consonant,
Which has many
Sounds."

Nichiro

pavalamani pragasam
19th December 2006, 07:47 AM
Interesting similes!

Badri
19th December 2006, 07:55 AM
Powerful piece of poetry. :thumbsup:

Querida
19th December 2006, 07:55 AM
Nichiro this reminds of one of the very first poems i wrote here....but i cannot say i thought of such comparisons...yes silence can be menacing or comforting...i have only found once the silence that exists between two people who can enjoy it between themselves.

Nichiro
19th December 2006, 06:27 PM
SILENCE!!!


Shhhhhh !!
Let me be.
I am
opening wounds
On my hurt soul
And
With the
droplets of
Pain that
Oozes out,
I am painting
My poetry.

Nichiro

crazy
19th December 2006, 07:30 PM
beautiful :clap:

Nichiro
21st December 2006, 05:08 PM
PP Madam, Badri, Querida, and Crazy ,

Thanks for your comments and kind words,
I feel really encouraged.

Nichiro

Shakthiprabha.
21st January 2007, 03:50 PM
////Shhhhhh !!
Let me be.
I am
opening wounds
On my hurt soul
And
With the
droplets of
Pain that
Oozes out,
I am painting
My poetry. ///

:clap:

wow