Don’t adjust to suppress yourself

[ramyap]

Stanza 1

She,Visarathika is the only little daughter of that great/psycho man...
She loved her father more than any one else in this world. But she was separated from the rest of the world because of his peculiar characters and believes.
That may be called as fate that mother left her...
But what people around will tell was because of her father's foolishness her mom left her...
No one else in this world can realize his greatness, except her...
She is left all alone because of these things...
Is she waiting for a Prince to take care of herself and her family?
Or she is not expecting any one to rescue her from her problems...
Is she the one to take revenge against all giving her problems?

Stanza 2

Her life also started with all beautiful colors and butterflies flying around, with sweet chocolates and balloons around.
She remembers only some of her sweetest moments in her life..
Always played together with friends in school, received good name and prizes from her teachers.
She imposed all her ideas over them being as a leader.
All of them were golden moments..
In house also she is the queen to her sweet mother and pa, and even in her locality also as most of the houses belongs to them.
But all were just scenes and miseries covered by the clouds, once when the rain come those clouds will go and the reality will cum into picture.
Even God gets bored with smooth lives. He also needs some climaxes, some situation turn around. God also wants to see something thrilling and interesting..
She was never knowing that so much troubles will be there in her life in some ten years..
Everything was fine then..

[ramyap]

hi frds,
After so many months i am entering into hub...
Realizing that i have to spend myself sometime...

Comments please on this release...

[ramyap]

[tscii:3f1d1af3f3]Stanza 3(Age 25)

She is now working in a good multinational concern with a neat environmental atmosphere and of course not a strict boss.(Letting to take leave at any time)

She is having all in her life, lovely little home, with beautiful car.(of course not with any strict big’s to trouble going out with boy friend)

She is having her own boy friend who is ready to take care of her at any moment..

But she is not satisfied with all these…

She just wants to take revenge of this society.

How her anger intrudes in to every field of the society like mixing poison into river water and kills people silently……
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[crazy]

She is having her own boy friend who is ready to take care of her at any moment..


:roll: :?

welcome ramyap :)
so far, story is intresting...............keep writing :thumbsup:

[Surya]

Ramyap! :D
I'm a huge fan of ur stories as u prolly know!! :D Please continue!! :thumbusp:

[ramyap]

[tscii:c5b6aec30c]Really it is terrible, sometimes we won’t understand the people who really loves us, but will go for the present seconds console and satisfaction.
After getting really relieved all sufferings because of her father’s not steady mind, she just entered in to a new city.
But of course for some days some of her friends may be with her. But then she was left all alone, may be because of her peculiar nature of not mixing with people so easily.
At that time, she happened to have chat friends and has become so close to one guy who just started to love her.
But what is this age, it is never stable and confident in any decision many times. So only she could have turned to another guy.
It may be because of the situation she have been brought up, one father combining his wife and dear daughter as having Lesbian relationships. No point in having such doubts, but how come its possible for a man who is having daily sexual relationships with all the lady Gods and feeling it both physically and mentally.
When every one was feeling for leaving home, she was happy with that.
Really terrible, but in Visharathika’s life came one guy just like that, just invited for her to go out for dinner out one day.
Of course, it is the wish of any young girl to go out with a guy in nice moon light to a dinner. So she accepted and gone. But when he invited her for his house the next day, she would not have gone.
But they are some physical needs and mental attractions at this age which will hide all the moral values stored inside.
That was the situation where no one was even caring for her. Yeah, even there are so many girl friends around, a guy having sexual feelings towards her will show greater attention and help towards her, which will make feel other loves diminish.
The fact she lost herself in that visit to his house, she cannot oppose whatever he has done towards her, may be she is need of all of them at that time. But being from a cultural background, she can ask only one question to him, can u marry me and being satisfied with his answer of ya, definitely.
She knows it is just to satisfy the inner soul during the illegal intercourse. But thank God her inner heart has woken up. She just left out of that place.
No one can be told, all because of lack of control.
After this bad bitter experience from that guy, who just wants to enjoy her for fun, she realized the true love of her chat friend, Vishwa.
But now she could not even talk to Vishwa, because of her own guilty conscience. She started avoiding him.
But how long Vishwa’s true loving heart towards her, tolerate her avoidance.
Now she has just realized that love cannot be compared to anything. May be there sexual needs but that does not stand in front of true love.
She now planned to use Vishwa as her tool to rescue the poor and helpless and take revenge of all those corrupters and killers.
But when she is going to realize there is never a perfect man or woman in life.
Every one might be good or bad in some situation.
If she finds fault in everyone she has to find fault in every one. If she finds good ness in every one she can find in every one.

She is still not mature enough, so only. Lets see her tool (Vishwa) will turn her towards a good girl destroying her from her series killing plans, or will he also will involve in destroying the society for destroying the evils(some activities mentioned so by our ancestors..)

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[ramyap]

She is having her own boy friend who is ready to take care of her at any moment..


:roll: :?

welcome ramyap :)
so far, story is intresting...............keep writing :thumbsup:

thank you yaar..
yenna irundhalum boy frd, girl frdnu yethavthu pota than oduthu illa?

[ramyap]

Ramyap! :D
I'm a huge fan of ur stories as u prolly know!! :D Please continue!! :thumbusp:


thanks pa.. really great people will have great mind to appreciate even not eligible people. i cannot even understand u'r stories with my little knowledge. They are of that high range.It is a great pride for me u r considering my writings too.

[bingleguy]

Welcome back Ramya :clap:

[crazy]

She is still not mature enough, so only. Lets see her tool (Vishwa) will turn her towards a good girl destroying her from her series killing plans, or will he also will involve in destroying the society for destroying the evils(some activities mentioned so by our ancestors..)


killing plans................ :roll:

[ramyap]

[tscii:285b5161d1]Stanza 5
Mean while, some words about Vishwa,
A smart, young, inbuilt courageous from a Royal family. He is doing his PG in Microbiology with ug in Bio Tech.
He is the son of a Mexican and an Indian air hostess.
Though he is always surrounded with money and no people around, he has grown with good moral and spiritual values. He has hardly seen her mother and father one or two times. He was brought up by his mom’s grand pa, who is very old.
But our Vishwa is always having the faith that nothing is wrong. He never can even dislike any one in his life.
Of course, obviously so many girls want to have friendship with him, so many want to take part in life. But he never found any interest in any girl.
Even many of his friends will babble at him telling him as impotent.
But he himself wonder, while in all enjoying things he is like his age mates, why towards girls only he is not finding any interest.
That’s how Visharathika came in his life, when he was doing a research as part of his final year pg when he was surfing thru net.
Every one was wondering how Vishwa has taken such a topic for his research.
How cum they won’t wonder ya? The Topic Vishwa has taken was to produce love between a Guy and Girl scientifically. In short if we explain, it has this theme.
By increasing and balancing the estrogen and testrogen hormones in human body, we can introduce love and affection towards two opposite sexes.
Some laughed at him, telling “Hey Vishwa, u do not know what even a girl is, how come it is possible for you to do such a research.”
Some laughed by telling, “Hi this does not need any research and all. Just go and ask for some road side fellows. They will give some ointments and powders to do these kind of things.

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[ramyap]

She is still not mature enough, so only. Lets see her tool (Vishwa) will turn her towards a good girl destroying her from her series killing plans, or will he also will involve in destroying the society for destroying the evils(some activities mentioned so by our ancestors..)


killing plans................ :roll:


What to do yaar, all won't like romance alone, some will like thrillers and killers also.

[ramyap]

Welcome back Ramya :clap:


hi vasanth,
what is this yaar, if i cum after 6 months also your learned yes is not ending.. learning is never ending is it?

[crazy]

[tscii:248c5d67a6]

He is the son of a Mexican and an Indian air hostess.

Some laughed at him, telling “Hey Vishwa, u do not know what even a girl is, how come it is possible for you to do such a research.”
Some laughed by telling, “Hi this does not need any research and all. Just go and ask for some road side fellows. They will give some ointments and powders to do these kind of things.

Story int.national levelukku pogudha :)


What to do yaar, all won't like romance alone, some will like thrillers and killers also.

ok ok.............. :) [/tscii:248c5d67a6]

[ramyap]

[tscii:5d9fcc69ee]Stanza 6:(VISHWA )
It was in this stage he met Visharatika thru one of his friends.
It is she who has brought all the beauty and heaven to his life.
Though he has not seen Visha, her nearness to his heart, made him to change a lot.
Vishwa, who even don’t care about his dressings, now – a – days, has totally changed.
He was a calm boy until now.
He was such an adjusting type; every one will utilize his innocence and the habit of not hurting anyone even if he suffers.
Though his basic nature of not giving trouble to any one hasn’t changed, Vishwa has become bolder now- days.
All because of his Angel Visha, who changed his entire life? Now Vishwa can any thing he feels to be right instead of hesitating for others sayings.
Whenever he feels lonely, it is Visha who gives him strength, moral support, encouragement. There are so many instances where his ideas and Visha’s ideas clash but yet he cannot leave Visha, as he loves her so much.
Even he himself had a doubt in his research of developing love thru physical features with hormones and all.
He knows that Visha is very open towards guys, having lot of friends in guys unlike him who won’t mingle with opposite sex.
He is very possessive towards her. He will get lot of anger even if he knows she had sent a mail to any guy. These are silly, he knows, but all are out of control some times.
No one has even seen Vishwa getting anger, but what is happening now is just the opposite.
But all the angriness where until hearing her voice, once she talks him will become so cool.
He cannot even show his angriness towards her. He daily decides not to talk to her any more as she never considered him as special. According to her he was just one among her friends, which Vishwa never likes.
But when days are rolling off, things were also going out of control.
He cannot even concentrate on his studies by always thinking about her. He wants her also to feel the same towards him.
But Visha will always tell like, I Like u Vishwa very much. But I cannot decide whether it is love and all.
When Vishwa was discussing this with his grand pa, he told like these girls are always like this only. They will never decide any thing suddenly; they will confuse themselves too much and confuse others also. They won’t cum out of their bounds. They want to earn good name, even by sacrificing their own wishes and desires.
But how come Vishwa will console himself, he can tolerate if she loves him as much as he but fearing for others or moral values. But he cannot tolerate now- a-days this intermediate stage of not knowing whether she loves him or not.
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[crazy]

Ramya...............so intresting, thank u for writing a love story :)

[ramyap]

[tscii:fa3cd40ce3]Stanza 7:
Visharatika also started chatting with Vishwa just as a time pass.
Of course, when she first started to speak with him, she doesn’t like him that much.
As per most of girl’s interests, she also liked somewhat tight and rough guys with lot of boldness and individuality. But Vishwa seems to be very soft and calm, and he was such inefficient (as per her judgments at that time), he cannot even argue with others for his own rights. After all this he is dealing with some biology concepts and studying that.
Being a software girl and allergic to Bio how come she would prefer to talk with him.
She has talked with him, just with lot of hesitation and for the only one reason he was his friends friend. That too as her friend Sathik has told her a lot about Vishwa, as a world genius, Sathik has described Vishwa to such an extent as if Vishwa was a God.
But even in her first speech Visha got disappointed only. She just wants to spend her time with some guy who can tease her, who could very well know the girls feelings, who she can make fun over.
But Vishwa was totally different; he was not even an ordinary guy with simple interests in movies, girls or such funs.
He seemed to be such innocent that he doesn’t even know that opposite sexes will be having some short of attraction or affection towards each other.
For everything he just replies, they are just like magnets attracting each other, like hydrogen and oxygen forming water, humans have to generate something through them.
He even will talk like this entire body is nothing but just calcium, minerals, proteins, carbohydrates. Just like the process of forming water, these chemicals form human body. So naturally the chemicals will be having attraction towards each other depending on the electron deficiency.
How come to talk to a guy, who never agrees, there is heart and mind to think over and it’s having feelings and affections which can make one to do anything for true love.
Even for death, he will say as if we buried the body, then the chemicals in the body have been converted to Nitrogen. When we burn the dead body, the chemicals in body has been converted to carbon dioxide.
How come it is possible for an young beautiful girl, looking for a smart guy tolerate the talking of one guy as entire world is nothing but oxygen and nitrogen’s..
Visha decided never to get into chat with this guy any more, at least just can escape from his bore talkings.
But it is this difference in Vishwa has punched a deep whole in to her heart which she herself does not know at that time.
Only one thing is true, Visha is not affected by any heart breakings now-a-days thinking about her past and her family histories.
She think by herself some nitrogen content might have increased in my body so only I am laughing, similarly some thing might have decreased so only others are behaving so to me.
All are chemicals means why to worry about others sayings and behaviors towards us.
Thus even her external mind has thought Vishwa as a mad and decided to stop talking to him, her internal mind started following his words, feeling their meanings in every incident and things.
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[sgokulprathap]

welcome back thangachi...
:thumbsup:

[ramyap]

welcome back thangachi...
:thumbsup:

i think two more months are remaining, athena unga logo wedding invitation modelaa?

[crazy]

ramya: :lol2:

nitrogen, oxygen, carbon dioxide, chemy bayangarma work pannapodhu pola :)

[sgokulprathap]

welcome back thangachi...
:thumbsup:

i think two more months are remaining, athena unga logo wedding invitation modelaa? wedding invitation model yellam illa.
chumma inga avatarla podaradhuku net la search panni yeduthen.

[ramyap]

[tscii:1b9e51c66c]Stanza 8:

There are several incidents which came to trouble in real life always on its own way. Some times we think everything is smooth, everything goes fine and feel really comfortable, but it is that time some sudden misery will attack our life.
Those who are always in worries and trouble won’t get much affected by the way the new problems come.
But really people enjoying and just feeling everything fine, only will be affected to the extreme when problems come.
They will lose their control in such massive kind of attack from fate and do something terrible which may affect their entire life.
Such a sad incident happened in Visa’s life to change her entire way of life. If her near and dear are there to console in such situation, she would have got rid of such pains.
It has almost become some 5 months Visha and Vishwa started mingling with each others idea. Though every day they ended their speech in some kind of fight or misunderstandings, they will continue the next day.
They had become some what close, but one day when Visha told about that she was going out with a her friend(guy) for dinner. Vishwa is totally upset.
He is not that kind of guy who thinks as having friendship with opposite sex is bad and all. But with Visha, he cannot bear her close to any one except him. He won’t even tolerate her praising or telling some one is close to her, whether it’s a girl or boy.
Vishwa has become so possessive towards her. But unfortunately, Visha won’t be like that much considered toward him. It seemed she just wants to time pass with him.
Being in the other state and not ever met her, he could not control her from going out with other guy. Visha also seemed to start avoiding Vishwa as she is comfortable with the one who she can meet, feel daily. More over she is a young girl, not having too much exposure towards real world experiences, has fallen in to that guys words.
This made a break between her and Vishwa.
But when she understood that guy is roaming around with her just for fun and enjoyment and do not have even a peanut of care or love towards her, she came to know the real mind of Vishwa.
It was in the cool month of December, one day Vishwa’s dearest grand pa died very naturally of old age. But he felt almost very lonely; he already is very much upset, tired and troubled as Visha is avoiding him. His only relief in the world was his grand pa, who lived for him alone, who is the only one he knows and the only one who knows him.
Just going to some twenty five years back to Vishwa’s familyVishwa’s mother, Nirubama, really brought up by such a high personality never has got any such moral or principles like him. She always wished to be rich; she is fond of materialized life. She is very adamant, yet she managed to achieve whatever she wished in her life through her great intelligence and beauty.
She joined as an air hostess by her beautiful appearance and talented speech. Being the only catch to Vishwa’s grand pa, she never worried about taking care of him, or being with him. Nirubama never wants to be one among the lakh of women who are washing vessels and clothes all day for their husbands and children.(of course she has failed to realize the happiness and satisfaction lies in being dedicated and sacrificing for the family).
She is always flying to some country, she never even come to visit her home, she has totally forgotten everything. At that time he met the great business man of Mexico Mr. Robert. He has fallen in her beauty and the way she is extra ordinarily talented in everything. It was in 1980’s where many women won’t even come outside their houses.
But Nirubama is such talented; she knows everything from the small idol God sitting in the corner of a small village of India, to the new space shuttles launched.
She has contacts with the sweeping boy in the airport to the Indian Prime Minister Indira Gandhi.
No doubt in Robert being almost in his 40s, but being a bachelor spent all his these days in search of money and matters fall of in Nirubama’s heart.
Nirumba wants all is to live a life where she would be the twinkling star and all should she her raising their heads only. She wants to be the richest lady in the world.
She has of course kind heart and thoughts to help poor and respect hard work. But she just does not want to be one among the thousands. She thought joining Robert would lead her to a rich place and will lead her to achieve her life ambitions of being richest and powerful in the world. But having independent ideas in herself, Nirubama never had belief in marriage or having a permanent relationship with a guy for the entire life and doing everything. More over her is not even interested in sex or having a generation for herself.
She wants her to be the only one, to be outstanding and should have the power and control to manage and destroy and care everything. Though she has these much sever thoughts in her mind near to a dictator, she never seemed to be hard.
She always seemed to be friendly, soft spoken women. She just wants to rise in life, so she started having relationship with Robert in his business. She never felt anything wrong in entertaining him. This is how it happened, Robert also started rising in his own business of furniture making because of Nirubma’s talents.
She brought up new designs; she used all those techniques used in Indian scripts and old sculptures. Instead of merely putting simple cupboards and tables, she made them in the form of moving items, with light weight and also with lot of pictures portraying their own purposes. Of course in 1980’s they were all new, instead of delivering a table in normal 2 dimensional, she gave the idea of making items such that a single thing can serve multiple purposes.
All her tricks made Robert to extend his business branches in many countries of the world. Nirubama left her job and came to serve him for the twenty four hours. Robert wants to marry Niru and lead a normal life as in India.
But Niru do not want to tie or bound her to a relationship. She just wants to be independent and not to depend or be under some one. She just was learning all the processes and ways to manage a big business like Roberts to start her own.
She was even getting some percent of profit from Robert. Mean while, nature won’t be silent for human dances, she got Vishwa.
Of course for Niru’s nature, she does not want Vishwa, but Robert was very happy when he hearted the news. He begged with Niru, tell Niru I will marry you and let us be happy with our child.
But Niru refused telling giving birth to that child may distract her from achieving her own objective. Of course Robert cannot live without Niru. He too doesn’t have much interest in growing a child and all. But how come one man won’t be happy on seeing his own sperm going to be a man one day.
He begged and kept Niru even like in jail, to prevent her from destroying his child.
Niru also cannot go out of Robert, she was very week at that time physically, and also not got any support from any one at that time.
But Niru was always sad, was looking like as if she lost everything. This cannot be tolerated by Robert. He wants his Niru to be always happy, making others happy and inventing her own new ideas.
So Robert finally agreed to Niru’s thought of not giving birth to that child. But it was too late in his decision; doctors said nothing can be done at that time.
Only solution is to give birth to the child. beautiful smile.
But Niru was not even taking her food properly. She felt like every one is cheating her. She thought Robert to want her to be his servant (wife in his saying).
Every body was forcing her to lead a normal life. She started behaving like a hysteria patient. She was shouting in anger one day with Robert, my father was very cultural and orthodox, but he never troubled me or compelled me to do any thing like you.
Really Robert himself does not know what to do at that time. He wanted his angel to return to her normal extraordinary state. He even started hating that child giving so many troubles before its birth itself.
Robert went to meet Niru’s father as she was talking about him often then. Really Niru’s father was so happy to here the news, though his inner mind was troubling that her daughter hasn’t got proper marriage life and going to give a legal child. Niru ‘s father was so happy to receive a new generation of his. He got a means and meaning for the rest of his life. He brought Niru along with him, acted as a big support for her until she delivered Vishwa.
Niru , being not an ordinary one, never cared about Vishwa or her father. She was feeling like she was suffering from some big disease for the past 10 months. She felt like got relieved from her illness and went to carry on her business with Robert.
Robert has not even seen his son. He just loved Niru to such an extent and he was happy that he got his Niru to support him.
Now, Robert has become old and his entire business was in the hands of Niru. Niru though not successful as a mother, has succeeded very well as an industrialist.
Now NiruRob group of Industries have their products from pencil to space shuttles manufactured.Niru is now one among the first 100 rich people in the world.
No one knows that Niru and Robert had a child. Until now they have been declared as just partners (of course not as life partners but as business partners)
Robert was suffering from his own diabetes and old age problems. He just wants to take rest. He lost his interest in rushing behind money. Niru seemed to have totally forgotten that she had a child. Of course at the time of that child birth, she was a hysteria patient and was in half state. She not even remembered any thing fully.
Robert also does not want to remember her any thing and push her in to that stage. But he was very often thinking of his future now. He started thinking of what he is going to leave this world and all.
It was at this time, Vishwa’s grand pa’s death news came. He was suddenly shamed by a question, have you ever even seen your child. Have you ever even spent half a second for him. Then what is there in calling you as a successful man in life?

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[ramyap]

[tscii:8f645b2592]Stanza 9:

It was at that time, Vishwa’s grand pa died. Robert got the news through his fellow men, he informed Niru about his father’s death. But she has become so much money and duty minded, she told like she has to attend an important international conference at London and went off. Robert haven’t told anything about her Son now also, but has decided to bring his son along with him. Of course for his company and to take care of him, he needed a confident person. Every thing in this world ends in mere selfishness only, isn’t it?
Robert came to attend Vishwa’s grand pa’s funeral and took Vishwa along with him.
Vishwa was totally upset at that time because of Visha’s behaviors and also of his grand pa’s death. He needed all was just to escape from the situation, she just want himself to hide from the pains of Visha leaving his hands. But that was the mistake he has done. He would have caught hold of her tight, but he by his nature not that much bold, wants simply to escape from that situation. He flied away with his father.
In the mean while so many incidents have happened in Visha’s life which has nearly made her future as a question mark. Visha’s father, whom she loved very much though he is not quite ok, has been killed.
It cannot be even said as killing, it is actually the torture. As Usual he was not ok and he was shouting at all the people going in the road side. But the people who know him itself got irritated too much. But they would have informed her about his condition is going out of tolerance.
But these public won’t be having humanity when they got disturbed. At least they might have hospitalized him. If an unconscious man is doing something wrong, will normal mentally ok people will also do the same?
They started beating him, and this encourage some of the guys there who where also irritated by her father’s scolding in big loud voice, when they teased some young girls.
They thought this as the good chance, when the public got angry towards him, they also can beat him up. That man was already physically and mentally weak with no one around him to support died off.
Visha can’t even cry, only feeling she got was to take revenge of them. Those people who led to a helpless man’s death were telling now the fault is with Visha.
She thought of taking her father with her, once she is some what ok, but within that what is this cruel thing.

Only cruelties are leading to further destroying. The disaster happened to her changed her totally against the society. She no longer believes in any one in this world. The only bright spark she still had was Vishwa. She got angriness like killing every one, destroying everything.
If she could have met Vishwa at that time, her thoughts would have changed. She could also have led a happy life. But what to do, people don’t keep faith in their love, they do not have confidence they can win their loved ones heart if tried with full scope and energy and enormous love continuously.
All lovers won’t be confident that they can achieve. They lost hope and will go off in the midway, which will not only lead to failures, but also spoiling of so many people’s life.
Such thing only happened in Vishwa’s life, he would not have left at nay time, in any situation from her. He would have always been near to her.
Now Visha, planned to kill those guys who killed her father.
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[crazy]

Now Visha, planned to kill those guys who killed her father.

:roll:

Vishwa's story is beautiful, except for his mother............strange woman!

[ramyap]

Now Visha, planned to kill those guys who killed her father.

:roll:

Vishwa's story is beautiful, except for his mother............strange woman!

thanx crazy, i think you are the only one reading this story and i am writing this for you only.

No mother can be cruel. Have you heared a saying [tscii:44e5d0d2ef]Peyanalum Thaai[/tscii:44e5d0d2ef]. So Niru won't be strange, will soon see motherhood in her.

[crazy]

Yes a mother is a mother. well i like vishwa's father........
and visha seems stranger than vishwa's mother :)
anyway keep on writing :D

[ramyap]

Yes a mother is a mother. well i like vishwa's father........
and visha seems stranger than vishwa's mother :)
anyway keep on writing :D

nearly 50% of this story is really happened. so you can understand many strangers like Visha are always there in this world.

[crazy]

Yes a mother is a mother. well i like vishwa's father........
and visha seems stranger than vishwa's mother :)
anyway keep on writing :D

nearly 50% of this story is really happened. so you can understand many strangers like Visha are always there in this world.

:roll: is she a good person or bad?

[ramyap]

Yes a mother is a mother. well i like vishwa's father........
and visha seems stranger than vishwa's mother :)
anyway keep on writing :D

nearly 50% of this story is really happened. so you can understand many strangers like Visha are always there in this world.

:roll: is she a good person or bad?

it is not cinema yaar, to portray a person as enitirely as good and another as bad. IN real world everyone will be good in some situations, they may be bad to some one else.

thooku thndanai kudukarenu sollitu judge oruthara kolai paninalum , avaru nalavaru...
athuvey yethavathu satharana manithan panina avan kettavan.
nalavan ketavanu sollarathu yellam avanga avanga manasu, sumooga valarapa poruthathu..

[crazy]

adhennavo unmai thaan :)

[ramyap]

[tscii:5edf0eb10c]Stanza 10:

She planned everything properly. She never believed even a single individual. Everything she believed was just money, money and money, nothing else. He sold out her house that came through her grand father. She made every one to believe that she is going to settle in her work location.

Silently, she went outside everyday, got the help of one of her servants. But to him also she never believed. She just gave him some money and got all the information about those silly guys who are the root cause for her father’s death.

She just called those guys for a dinner in a big hotel and finished of their lives just naturally by making some goats to pass over the narrow road they were traveling.

It is all just a trial kind of thing, she haven’t believed fully, this will cause their death.
But in that narrow road, even if they just shake from their way, they will die.
That was her aim and she succeeded in that also.

That was the last day of those pity guys, they lost their lives. What Visa thought was to go back to her work location silently and continue her normal life.

But God is very good player than humans. He made that servant to babble everything in drunken state to their village people.

Though it hasn’t become a police case, those guys parents won’t take it as accident. They know that girl only called their sons for dinner.

They started chasing and hunting her. This is what is going to change Visha’s life entirely.

This bad incident is going to make Visha, a home loving good wife and social worker with lots of love and affection towards every one.
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[crazy]

:shock: murder...........

[ramyap]

:shock: murder...........
y do u think ladies won't do them? :shock:

[selvakumar]

Ramyap! :D
I'm a huge fan of ur stories as u prolly know!! :D Please continue!! :thumbusp:

:rotfl: :rotfl: :rotfl:
I also know that :exactly: :rotfl:

[sgokulprathap]

thanx crazy, i think you are the only one reading this story and i am writing this for you only. :shock: gr8 insult. appa naangallam idha padikka vEndaamaa. If this is only for her, u cud PM the story to her. :huh:

[ramyap]

thanx crazy, i think you are the only one reading this story and i am writing this for you only. :shock: gr8 insult. appa naangallam idha padikka vEndaamaa. If this is only for her, u cud PM the story to her. :huh:


appadi yellam onum illa,
avanga matuum than ithanai nalla padichutu vimarsan paninaga, athanala than appadi sonen..

ninga yellam padichaa, yenuku santhosam than..

[ramyap]

Ramyap! :D
I'm a huge fan of ur stories as u prolly know!! :D Please continue!! :thumbusp:

:rotfl: :rotfl: :rotfl:
I also know that :exactly: :rotfl:

selvaa nee kamnu irukaa matiyaa, inga yethuku past yellam test panitu irukey?

[crazy]

thanx crazy, i think you are the only one reading this story and i am writing this for you only. :shock: gr8 insult. appa naangallam idha padikka vEndaamaa. If this is only for her, u cud PM the story to her. :huh:

poraamai poraamai!

[crazy]

:shock: murder...........
y do u think ladies won't do them? :shock:

no no neengathaan erkanave sonneengale there is kind of good in that person............. murder..........hm.......but she becomes a good wife, isnt?

[ragav89]

well the story was excellent and i read it fully all the ten stanzas were extremely good.... :2thumbsup:

[ramyap]

well the story was excellent and i read it fully all the ten stanzas were extremely good.... :2thumbsup:


thanx ragav, infact i don't even felt like finishing of , as no one was reading, but then thought any way let me finish atleast for crazy.

now only feeling happy...hearing many are reading..

[crazy]

well the story was excellent and i read it fully all the ten stanzas were extremely good.... :2thumbsup:


thanx ragav, infact i don't even felt like finishing of , as no one was reading, but then thought any way let me finish atleast for crazy.

now only feeling happy...hearing many are reading..

:ty:

[ramyap]

Stanza 11:

This is how Visha has been moved to that small village Ranakudi . She left her job, left every one she knows and came to hide in that small village. She met there Rani who changed her utter life.

Rani was an uneducated ordinary girl. But her courage, boldness to face any one, her determination to help any one, her kindness to forgive any one, all made her to feel as great even she was in her eighteens.

Her ready to help any one has earned a good name and respect from every one to Rani within her that short age. Loosing her father at the age of 5 and mother at the age of 10, she was brought by her own work and determination.

That is where Rani stood as a role model to Visha in her life.
Visha just hided herself from those hunters and resided in that small village Ranakudi.
She started a small computer centre in a near by small town and continued to stay in Ranakudi. This is the time when she started realizing what life is, what love is. She now wants Vishwa to be with her.

She understood now Vishwa is her strength, he is her happiness all. She cursed herself for avoiding him and not cared about him.

[crazy]

:)

[ramyap]

Stanza 12

In the mean while, Vishwa has been taken to Mexico. He has got to stay at one of their buildings on the lake side of Valle de Bravo.
Though his arrival has not been informed to his mother, he was taken care and well treated as a guest by his father and their maids. Yet some short of loneliness was surrounding and killing.
He was of course good nature lover who can forget himself in the beauty of nature.
Dogs barked all night in Valle de Bravo. In the morning, he went and stood on the balcony and looked into the backyards of all the neighbors.Birds similar to sparrows sang and chirped in the trees. Bright yellow lemons hung from the trees, a purple fruit that looked like small eggplants covered another.
Birds of paradise, an orange flower in the shape of a bird, stood above a plant that had tall pointing leaves in the backyard. Water sprinklers were on, changing from one area of a courtyard to another.But still some kind of loneliness was piercing through his heart which mad him to look always dull and unenergetic. He tried to contact Visha, but she is never coming online or else she might have blocked him. Even her mobile always is switched off.He himself got disappointed and distrusted thinking Visha has become close to her boy friend so only avoiding him.But one day he was very dull, when his father Robert came to see him. Robert was already very week, but he seemed to be some what clear in his mind after seeing Vishwa.

[crazy]

then :)

[ramyap]

[tscii:9f897f953e]Stanza 13:
One day, Niru was very free .Some severe attack on the city by terrorists has been announced. :twisted: VIP’s of the city are requested to stay in some secret and safe places.
They are expected not to come out any where. Every bad thing has got a good thing in it na. That massive threaten to the city only has lead to the reunion of Niru’s family. Niru was feeling very boring. She always wants to be engaged in some work. :shhh: She never wants to spoil anything by wasting time. But this time, she thought of spending her day with Robert after so many days. Robert is not involving much in their business now- a-days. Doctors also have proposed him to take rest. Niru also don’t want to disturb him. But when that threatens came, most of her employers even felt satisfied like they got a good chance of a day to be spent with their family.
Niru also started thinking of Robert. She just wants to meet him then, but it seemed that he is in their lake house. Niru thought why don’t me also go and stay with him for this day.
Vishwa was not yet getting rid of his dullness and calmness, because of his dear fathers love and Sathik’s speeches. :( He yet seemed to take advantage of their kindness towards him, seeing his situation.
Niru came to that house. The moment she came there the entire house seemed to be active. Niru really got irritated seeing the dirty curtains, with not aligned sofas and not properly cleaned room. :smokesmirk:
Niru wants everything to be neat, clean and hygienic. At the same time she will never take dictatorship. She will talk such politely and softly that no one can refuse to do what she says. She not even seemed to be the mother of a 25 year old guy. Though she is in her late 40’s she seemed as if she was in her 30’s.

Even the disturbance made and the rapid changes made in the house because of Niru’s arrival made Vishwa to come out of his bed.
Shatik as per his nature of freely moving, easily come out and introduced himself as Robert’s friend son. He said that he and his friend Vishwa has came there to do some research regarding for their studies. These are all what planned between Shatik and Robert at before hand itself.
Niru really got shocked on seeing Robert in such a lean figure. Her motherhood got its eyes opened. But she also noticed his eyes showing a kind of brightness, happiness, self satisfaction which she never had seen in his eyes.
As soon as Robert seen Niru came there, he was so happy, he jumped here and there like a child, he started hugging all the maids there and dancing with them. :boo:
Shatik too called of for a song and every one started enjoying and laughing and Niru himself laugh seeing Robert dancing like a child. :clap:
The only odd figure, who could not mingle in those enjoyment stuffs was Vishwa. :oops2:












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[crazy]

:D

[ragav89]

tat was good...

[ramyap]

[tscii:35fd28cda9]Stanza 14:

Visha’s life has changed entirely in these days. She cannot wear all those modern dresses in this small village like her city. Every one will seem to look odd on her.
Further if she appears to be entirely different from those people, those people chasing her might easily identify her.
She rented out a house there and kept Rani along with her for her help. But Rani was an illiterate having very minimum school education which won’t be enough for her to help in her Computer centre. She needed some one else to help her.
But it would be better if it is a known person to take care of such valuable come responsible jobs. So she thought of one of her class mates who are still searching for a job because of the time of two years she has taken to complete her degree.
Visha has just met her some two months before when she requested her to recommend for a good job. So Visha called her(Nesa) up and her job burden too got reduced a lot.
Even Visha was remembering Vishwa every day, she now a days had no idea of getting married Vishwa or any one else.
Visha knows she was a killer and was supposed to go to jail, once reported or else will be supposed to death by those chasers.
In the mean while she does not want to have any commitments.
Now very lately she was thinking what a wonderful life God has given her, with a good lover ready to take care of her, enriched job. After seeing Rani and Nesa having no one to even care about them, having no permanent financial or job support, she understood the betterment of her situation.
Rani seemed to be an entirely outstanding girl. Though she is very little, she seemed to give suggestion for every one. When those village people needed to take some bank loans they approached her. When there is a property problem, some people approached her.
Really Visha wondered seeing Rani’s activities and the respect every one had with her.
Rani does not have anything except her quick thinking mind and active body. But that alone had earned her that much fame and respect.

Though she does not have any money she could be able to give to others lot many things with her.

Nothing is impossible with having all the possible features with our self.

Meanwhile Nesa has contacted with her friends telling that she has got a good job. Shatik was seriously searching for Visha, so he quickly came to know where Visha was.
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[crazy]

Meanwhile Nesa has contacted with her friends telling that she has got a good job. Shatik was seriously searching for Visha, so he quickly came to know where Visha was.

intresting :)

[ramyap]

[tscii:c20fe17901]Stanza 15:
Whatever the science and technology develops, some times the nature wins over everything. Such a thing is motherhood also. Though Niru was impressed by Shatik’s friendly moves, genuine talks, somewhere something is disturbing.
Without any relevance (according to her), Vishwa’s face was remembering her father, her childhood to her. Some thing started annoying her.
At that night after so many months, she was sleeping with Robert, thinking about her.
Robert was sleeping silently like a child, though Niru haven’t married him, she never thought of any other guy in her life.
She knows all the fame, respect she earned everything she got through Robert only.
Whenever she was with Robert she will feel like lying in the mothers lap, so safe and secure.
She herself wonders today why she has missed all these enjoyments and surrendered herself to a material mechanic life.
She just looked in to Robert’s face which is enriched with enormous enrichment and fulfillment. She silently bent down and gave a kiss so that Robert sleep won’t get disturbed. She just moved herself lied down on Roberts’s chest, hearing his heart beat silently.
It seemed to her, Roberts’s heart beat was telling to her, “I am there for you Niru, to look after you, for you only”.
She cannot control her feelings any more than that. Though she is in her 40’s she hardly had sex some two or three times. But Robert never forced her any time. Everything happened quite naturally. Robert’s calmness, ready to give up for Niru , everything suddenly got boomed in her mind.
She just held her hands tight around him and gave a sudden hug with a forceful kiss. What she has given for him, her wonderful lover, he has given her everything in life.
Robert got up and this was his happiest day in his life. He was surprised to see Niru in such a condition. Her eyes were shedding some drops of tears. Robert has seen Niru as a brave woman ready to face everything with determination. He has seen her playing like a child and encouraging and attracting every one from servants to senates.
But Robert in his 27 years of relationship never saw even a drop from her eyes. It seemed she wants to submit all her things to him. She just lied down on him and told,
Robert, i am going to retire. Let we give all these business issues to some one, let we settle in this house itself with nature surrounding.
Robert really surprised and was feeling very happy. Because, from now onwards, Niru, will be with him for the 24 hours of a day. She won’t be going around for those meetings and share markets.

Robert thought it was the good time to tell her about Vishwa. But he doesnot want to give her any more shocks. As, because during the pregnancy and birth of Vishwa, she was in hysteric condition. She never seemed to remember that she gave a birth to a wonderful child like Vishwa.
Robert said, ok to Niru. He suggested Shatik to take care of their business and to help him for some one or two months so that he can better take care of their business.
Niru was totally comfortable to teach Shatik about their business and to give him her work. She even started growing affection towards Shatik. For everything she started calling out Shatik.
But Vishwa was now totally upset. He cannot bear his mother showing that much affection towards a third person. Though, he is his dear friend. This often ended in fight between Shatik and Vishwa. Vishwa such a nice calm boy, started shouting at Shatik, he will show a distrusted face on seeing Niru.
Niru will never like such a lazy boy always lying in his bed or surfing some useless sites, showing dull face. But something started troubling her every time she sees Vishwa.

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[crazy]

:D ..............

[ramyap]

[tscii:b360030d04]Stanza.16:
Shatik understood clearly that Vishwa was jealous over him. But he wants that to happen, then only he can come out of his bounds and move freely with every one.
In the meanwhile, he contacted Visha, but she is not at all responding properly to him.
Shatik haven’t stopped with that alone, as soon he has known her place of living, he started watching her 24 hours with the help of Nesa itself.
At last one day Nesa got up what is Visha ‘s problem from her diary. Once Shatik and Nesa came to know what was the problem and the reason Visha was avoiding everything seemed to be simple.
Shatik informed Vishwa about Visha’s situation. Then what’s up, Vishwa was totally happy. He went to meet Visha, they both joined.
All her policies and determinations of not to meet Vishwa stood until she met him.
Mean while, Niru also known Vishwa is her son. They all are happy now…
Of course Nesa is flying with Shatik to take care of Robert, Niru, Vishwa’s business.
Vishwa, Visha, Niru , Robert are living happily in that small village getting back their original life.

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[crazy]

[tscii:02a39f4f05]Stanza.16:
Shatik understood clearly that Vishwa was jealous over him. But he wants that to happen, then only he can come out of his bounds and move freely with every one.
In the meanwhile, he contacted Visha, but she is not at all responding properly to him.
Shatik haven’t stopped with that alone, as soon he has known her place of living, he started watching her 24 hours with the help of Nesa itself.
At last one day Nesa got up what is Visha ‘s problem from her diary. Once Shatik and Nesa came to know what was the problem and the reason Visha was avoiding everything seemed to be simple.
Shatik informed Vishwa about Visha’s situation. Then what’s up, Vishwa was totally happy. He went to meet Visha, they both joined.
All her policies and determinations of not to meet Vishwa stood until she met him.
Mean while, Niru also known Vishwa is her son. They all are happy now…
Of course Nesa is flying with Shatik to take care of Robert, Niru, Vishwa’s business.
Vishwa, Visha, Niru , Robert are living happily in that small village getting back their original life.

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OMG...............idhu thaan endinga????????????
ippadi mudichitteenga?

[ramyap]

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OMG...............idhu thaan endinga????????????
ippadi mudichitteenga?[/quote]

yes da, i lost my interest in writing. But have to finish of the story , athu than seekrama mudichiten...

[crazy]

oh appadiya................anyway thanks for writing :D