STARZ

[VENKIRAJA]

PRALAYAM
Iru siruvargal vedantharithu vilaiyadi kondirundhanar.Oruvan karadiyaga,pirithoruvan veduvanaga.karadayanavan karathilagappattathaiyellam veesi ethiriyai viratti vanthan.Avargalai crickattum,koodaipanthum kooda ivvalavu magizhvithathillai.akilame kulunguvathai pol,polenna kulungiyevittathu.aam,vilayadikondirukkum iruvaril mudalvan-GREAT BBEAR endru koorapadum saptarishi;irandamavan ORION endrazhaikkapadum vrishaban!Ovvoru yuga mudivin podhum ippadi than ivargal vilaiyaduvaargal;vetriyaalanukku karakoshathai revathi,sathayam,moolam muthaliyor karavosham ezhuppuvar!Aanal nirai melintha ezhai naalmeengalukkuthan athagu deepavaligal varuvathillai!

[bingleguy]

Seems to have a lot of open infos ! can u describe the same venki ! Firstly welcome to Mayyam !

[VENKIRAJA]

naan pralayam kurithu yosikkayil oru pori thattiyathu.vilaiyattu vinaiyagum enpathai adinaathamaga kondu,kathai punainthen.irandu constellationgalukku idaiyal sandai nadappathagavum,adhanal pralayam undavathagavum,stargalum nammai pol vazhvadhagavum enni ezhudhiyadhu idhu. thanks for responding,
bingleguy,plz read my sudden fiction stories and respond.

[bingleguy]

AniTharamaana unmai allavidilum !
Azhagiya unarvaaga padaithuviteergaL !

VaazhthukkaL !

Sure, shall give comments on them too ! Good Work Keep them goin !

[crazy]

venki
i have been reading this starz from yesterday, but iam so sorry, i don't get the point!
it is not ur misteke, perhaps its mine. sorry but what was u saying at the end, the last two lines?
forgive me for my acknowledge!

[VENKIRAJA]

i.e)those stars are also like people(por,rich,etc.)
hence some donot celebrate
also we humans have made extinct many species,which is a sort of pralayam/disaster to their race. it's all metaphoric.
by the way,i'm not too big,just a beginner.also view my poems crazy!

thanks EVERY ONE.

[crazy]

i.e)those stars are also like people(por,rich,etc.)
hence some donot celebrate
also we humans have made extinct many species,which is a sort of pralayam/disaster to their race. it's all metaphoric.
by the way,i'm not too big,just a beginner.also view my poems crazy!

thanks EVERY ONE.
thanks for explaining!
where is ur poems? :)

[VENKIRAJA]

they are in kavidhaigal section
by the way help me to type in tamil?

[Shakthiprabha.]

MR.VENKIRAJA,

A request please.

Do not type multiple characters as the story title

titleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
starssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!new story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

etc

Though I fail to understand the purpose of typing this way (may be to catch attention??!) please understand it kinda... gives a very unprofessional look

sorry I was blunt.

[bingleguy]

Well ..... i too feel u can opt Shakthi's suggestion ...

Guess u r doin that to catch eye attention

[Shakthiprabha.]

I think Ive read sujatha's story PRALAYAM.
Have u read it too. IT does not start this way. It reminds me of just the story crux.

EXCELLENT STORY telling capacity.

CONGRATS. Expecting more :clap:

[VENKIRAJA]

yeah i acknowledge
i,ve made up not to repeat my mistakes.
i hope u will also be pleased to read my poems.
visit poems section:
en aaruyir nanban,
pudhukavidhai,
haikus

plz read them and suggest on my literature.
thkz everyone for ur bouquets