Thodum Dhoorathil

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Topic started by Malligai (@ 0-1pool59-8.nas22.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on Wed Sep 24 01:49:42 .



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þâø ¾¼í¸¨Çô §À¡Ä,
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¬É¡ø ¦¾¡Îõ àÃò¾¢ø.

´ýÈ¡ö þ¨½ó¾ ¿õ Å¡ú쨸
þÉ¢ ¾É¢ò§¾ þÂíÌõ
Á¨Ä§Áø §Á¸í¸¨Çô §À¡Ä,
¾ØÅ¢Ôõ ¾ØÅ¡Áø
¬É¡ø ¦¾¡Îõ àÃò¾¢ø.

´ýÈ¡ö þ¨½ó¾ ¿õ ±ñ½í¸û
þÉ¢ Á¡ÚÀ𧼠þÕìÌõ
¾¡Á¨Ã þ¨Ä §Áø ¿£÷òÐÇ¢ §À¡Ä,
ÀðÎõ À¼¡Áø
¬É¡ø ¦¾¡Îõ àÃò¾¢ø.

µÂ¡¾ ¯Éì¸¡É þó¾ ¾Åõ ÁðÎõ
Á¡È¡Áø þÕìÌõ
¸¾¢ÃÅÛ측ö ¸¡ò¾¢ÕìÌõ ¦Åñ½¢Ä¨Åô §À¡Ä,
¸ñÎõ ¸¡½¡Áø
¬É¡ø ±ýÚõ ±¾¢÷À¡÷ôÒ¼ý...


Thodum Dhoorathil
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Onrai inaintha nam paathaighal
ini vilagiyey thodarum
rayil thadalangalai pola
thani thaniyey
aanal thodum dhoorathil

Onrai inaintha nam vaalkai
ini thanithey iyangum
malai mel meghangalai pola
thaluviyum thaluvaamal
aanal thodum dhoorathil

Onrai inaintha nam ennangal
ini maarupatey irukum
thaamarai ilai mel neer thulli pola
pattum padaamal
aanal thodum dhoorathil

Oyaatha unakaana indha thavam mattum
maaramal irukum
Kathiravanukaai kaathirukum venillavai pola
kandum kaanamal
aanal enrum edhirpaarpudan...


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Arputham ungal varigal.nalla sindhanai.nanjarntha paratukkal.


"Thandavlam thotukondal
Thadampuralum rayilvandi
Thamirai illai neerai thotokondal
Thaneeril thalai moozhgum

Thotum thodamal irupavai
Thodaramal ponal
Thatu thadumatrangalal
Thavikka neridum"

Siva

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"µÂ¡¾ ¯Éì¸¡É þó¾ ¾Åõ ÁðÎõ
Á¡È¡Áø þÕìÌõ
¸¾¢ÃÅÛ측ö ¸¡ò¾¢ÕìÌõ ¦Åñ½¢Ä¨Åô §À¡Ä,
¸ñÎõ ¸¡½¡Áø
¬É¡ø ±ýÚõ ±¾¢÷À¡÷ôÒ¼ý...

"<<<<<<<<<

desirable dreams....
unfulfilled dreams
exhaustive dreams
hopeful dreams...yet
IMPOSSIBLE DREAMS

dreams....and dreams alone!

:(

nalla irukku


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hi malligai,

aha!i gotta give you 50.uvamaigaL pudhidhillaavittaalum kooRiya vidham thiRampada..

thituththakkan

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I was waiting for Mr. TT to offer his valuable comments. With due respects to that..

'«Æ¸¢' À¼õ «§É¸÷ À¡÷ò¾¢Õì¸ì ÜÎõ. «ó¾ «§É¸Ã¢ø ¦ÀÕõÀ¡§Ä¡÷ ÜÈ¢ÂÐ: "þó¾ô À¼ò¾¢ø ²§¾¡ ´Õ ¸¡ðº¢¨Â ¿¡ý ²ü¸É§Å Å¡úó¾¢Õ츢§Èý".

'ÁøÄ¢¨¸', ¯í¸û þó¾ì ¸Å¢¨¾ ܼ «ôÀÊò¾¡ý, ¿¢¨È §À÷ ÜÚÅ¡÷¸û («øÄÐ ¿¢¨ÉôÀ¡÷¸û) " ¿¡ý ¦º¡øÄ ¿¢¨Éò¾¨¾ þó¾ «Æ¸¢Â ¸Å¢¨¾ ¦º¡ø¸¢È§¾!" ±É -

(See Shakthi's comments here and also his reflection in his own thread:
http://www.forumhub.com/poems/1605.04.26.39.html )

"µÂ¡¾ ¯Éì¸¡É þó¾ ¾Åõ ÁðÎõ
Á¡È¡Áø .. ¸¡ò¾¢ÕìÌõ ¦Åñ½¢Ä¨Åô §À¡Ä,
¸ñÎõ ¸¡½¡Áø
¬É¡ø ±ýÚõ ±¾¢÷À¡÷ôÒ¼ý... "

ÌÈ¢ôÀ¡öì ¸¨¼º¢ þÕ Åâ¸û.. þ¨¾ Å¢¼ ¦Áý¨Á¡¸ ´Õ §¿ºò¨¾ ¸½½¢ò ¾¢¨Ã¢ø ¸ÚôÒ ¦Åû¨Ç µÅ¢ÂÁ¡öò ¾£ð¼ þÂÖÁ¡?

Your 'kavidhai's are becoming dangerously beautiful. ±ý Å¢Á÷ºÉõ ÓÊÂÅ¢ø¨Ä.. þýÛõ.. À¢È¢¦¾¡Õ ¿¡û!


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"(See Shakthi's comments here and also his reflection in his own thread:
http://www.forumhub.com/poems/1605.04.26.39.html )
"<<<<<

oh my god! How many times am i gonna repeat......
:(
Anyway u are not the first one surathi.....well...

I am not hissssssssssss
i am herrrrrrrrrrrrr

huh

thx
shakthi

(I thought shakthi is such a feminine! name!! so much for my thought)

:(

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Shakti, I used to be very careful about it. I'm sorry on one hand and happy on the other. (reason later). your reflection was also nice. we will come to that later. thank you.

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Malligai,

µÂ¡¾ ¯Éì¸¡É þó¾ ¾Åõ ÁðÎõ
Á¡È¡Áø þÕìÌõ
¸¾¢ÃÅÛ측ö ¸¡ò¾¢ÕìÌõ ¦Åñ½¢Ä¨Åô §À¡Ä,
¸ñÎõ ¸¡½¡Áø
¬É¡ø ±ýÚõ ±¾¢÷À¡÷ôÒ¼ý...

Kathiravan mERkil maRaikiRaan. VeNNilavu mERkil uthayam aagiRathu. Ivai iraNdum onROdu onRu vegu nEram ninRu pEsi koLvathillai, vegu nEram onRaaga iruppathillai. NeengaL solvathu pOl 'kaNdum kaaNaamal' paarththu vittu vilagi vidukiRaarkaL. Aanaal dhinamum oruvarai oruvar ethir paarththu thodarnthu varugiRaarkaL. KaNdum kaaNaamal irunthaalum, kaalam maaRinaalum, maaRaamal oru uRavu iruvarukkum. "Thottathai meeNdum thottu thodarkiRadhO nenjam" enpathu pOl thodarkiRaarkaL. Migavum nanRaaga solli irukkiReerkaL.

´ýÈ¡ö þ¨½ó¾ ¿õ Å¡ú쨸
þÉ¢ ¾É¢ò§¾ þÂíÌõ

INaintha vaazhkkaiyaa, allathu iNainthiruntha vaazhkkaiyaa enRu sollungaL. Athu vERu poruLai kodukkalaam.





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A marvellous one malligai...good job

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«Æ¸¡É ¸Å¢¨¾!
Ó¾ø ãýÚ Àò¾¢¸û
¦¾¡Îõ àÃò¾¢Öõ
¸¨¼Åâ, -´Ç¢
ÀÎõàÃò¾¢Öõ «¨Áó¾¢ÕôÀÐ º¢ÈôÒ !

ÁøÄ¢¨¸Â¢ý ¸Å¢¨¾ Á½õ,
±ý¨É ²§¾¡ ¦ºö¸¢ÈÐ!
ÀÊìÌõ§À¡Ð
¯¾ðÎìÌû Òýɨ¸òÐõ
ÒÕÅõ ¯Â÷ò¾¢Ôõ ÀÊ츨Åò¾ ¸Å¢¨¾.
*ó¾ ¸Å¢¨¾Ôõ
±ý Å¢Ãø ¦º¡ÎìÌõ àÃò¾¢ø
«¨Á󾾡ø Á¸¢ú¸¢§Èý !


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Siva,

ungaloda karpanai kooda rompa alagha iruku...thanks for the comments

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Shakthi,

thankssss...yeah, only dreams...

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Tiru,

i am soo happy that i reached the half-way mark this time too..nanri

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¦Á¡ò¾ «ÆÌõ ¦¸¡Îì¸ôÀð¼ ´ôÀ£Î¸Ç¢ø!
¿øÄ ¬ì¸õ.


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Surathi,

"Your 'kavidhai's are becoming dangerously beautiful."

---"Beauty is in the eye of the Beholder"...so more beauty lies in ur heart, than in what i wrote...thanks!!

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S-O,

"KaNdum kaaNaamal irunthaalum, kaalam maaRinaalum, maaRaamal oru uRavu iruvarukkum."

--wow..naan eluthina pothu kooda, i dint realise the beauty of these lines...nanri..


"INaintha vaazhkkaiyaa, allathu iNainthiruntha vaazhkkaiyaa enRu sollungaL"--ithu rendukum enakum difference theriyalai??

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Malligai, beautiful imagination. S-O sonnathu pOl suriyan n-ilavu mattum konjsam maaRupatta uvamaanam.In-tha san-thOshamaana ethirpaarppu situation vaazkkaiyil sOkamaakavum nikazvathuNdu- n-aanku suvarkaLukkuL anpinRi an-n-iyar pOl vaazum thampathi-sila pala kaaraNangkaLukkaaka legal separation-ai n-aadaathavarkaL. Balu mahendra-vin "Mauna Raagam" ithai azakaaka padam pidiththu kaattiyathu.

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Krish,

thanksss...

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Kurankatti,

*"ó¾ ¸Å¢¨¾Ôõ
±ý Å¢Ãø ¦º¡ÎìÌõ àÃò¾¢ø
«¨Á󾾡ø Á¸¢ú¸¢§Èý !"

---¯í¸û ¸ÕòÐìÌ Á¢ì¸ ¿ýÈ¢!!!


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Kajan,

"¦Á¡ò¾ «ÆÌõ ¦¸¡Îì¸ôÀð¼ ´ôÀ£Î¸Ç¢ø! "

thankss..


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PP,
"suriyan n-ilavu mattum konjsam maaRupatta uvamaanam"

--thanks for ur comments...neenga sona maathiri i am sure these lines fit many situations..

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Let me see..mm. i don't think so. Proof: Sori Observer and Kurankatti's reviews. Especially, Kurankatty..

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'Enna sola theriyavillai..' engira vari, ungalidamo, kajanidamo sollapatta vari alla. adhu kavidhaiyai nokki sollappattathu.

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'M', Pls ignore last posting.. that was meant elsewhere.. See, the one before..

Malligai: ---"Beauty is in the eye of the Beholder"...so more beauty lies in ur heart, than in what i wrote..."

Surathi : "Let me see..mm. i don't think so. Proof: Sori Observer and Kurankatti's reviews. Especially, Kurankatty.. "

OK?

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SUN,

OK.OK

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ÁøÄ¢¨¸,

'¦¾¡Îõ àÃò¾¢ø..' ¯í¸û ¸Å¢¨¾¨Âò ÐÃò¾¢ô À¢Êì¸ ÓüÀÎõ Áü¦È¡ýÚ.

¦¾¡¼Å¢ÂÄ¡ àÃò¾¢ø..
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µÊô À¢ÊìÌõ àÃò¾¢ø ¯ý §ÀÕóÐ..
´Õ ¿¢Á¢¼õ þ¨¼¦ÅÇ¢.

ŢƢ¦¾ØóÐ ¯¨Éò ¦¾¡¼Ã¡Áø,
´Õ Á½¢ þ¨¼¦ÅÇ¢.

¦º¡øĢ¢Õì¸ì ÜÎõ ±ý ¿¢¨Ä¨Â..
¦¿ïº¢üÌõ ¿¡Å¢üÌõ þ¨¼¦ÅÇ¢

¨¸ì¦¸ðÎõ àÃò¾¢ø ÀÄ ¿¡û,
þÕó¾Ð ´Õ Å¢Ãü¸¨¼ þ¨¼¦ÅÇ¢.

¯ý¨Éô ¦Àñ §¸ðÎõ Åó¾¢Õì¸Ä¡õ..
´§Ã Á¡¾õ þ¨¼¦ÅÇ¢.

¾Å¦ÈýÚ ¦¾Ã¢óÐõ ¾ÅÁ¢Õ츢§Èý..
þ¨¼Â¢ø ´Õ ¬Ôû þ¨¼¦ÅÇ¢!

thoda iyalA dUraththil
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Odi pidikkum dUraththil un perunthu,
oru nimidam idaivezi

vizithezunthu unai thodarAmal,
oru mani nEram idaivezi

solliyirukka kUdum en manasai
nenjirkum nAviRkum sila idaivezi

kaikettum dhUrathil pala nAL,
annalum oru viraRkadai idaivezi.

unnai pen kEttu vanthirukkalAm..
oru mAtham idaivezi

thavaRenRu therinthum thavamirukkiren..
idaiyil oru ayul idaivezi !



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surathi,

Absolutely touchy. one can feel the poem...literally feel the emotions!

"¾Å¦ÈýÚ ¦¾Ã¢óÐõ ¾ÅÁ¢Õ츢§Èý..
þ¨¼Â¢ø ´Õ ¬Ôû þ¨¼¦ÅÇ¢! "<<<

azha vaikkum vari........

ellaathukkum azuvEn enbathu vEru vishayam...lol (kidding)

u have amazing amount of potential. plz keep writing


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±ØÐõ§À¡Ð ¸Å¨Ä. ±Ø¾¢ ÓÊò¾×¼ý ºó§¾¸õ..
¿£í¸û Å¢Á÷º¢ò¾ À¢ý ºó§¾¡„õ. ¦Ã¡õÀ thanks.


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..þÐ ÍÁ¡÷¾¡ý ±ýÚ ¿¡§É ¯½÷ó¾¡Öõ.


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Surathii,

'¦¾¡Îõ àÃò¾¢ø'...superrrr...rompa nala iruku...

"¦º¡øĢ¢Õì¸ì ÜÎõ ±ý ¿¢¨Ä¨Â..
¦¿ïº¢üÌõ ¿¡Å¢üÌõ þ¨¼¦ÅÇ¢ "

--very nicee lines...mm another flow of thoughts, right??




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S

.."þÐ ÍÁ¡÷¾¡ý ±ýÚ ¿¡§É ¯½÷ó¾¡Öõ."

---ooo ÍÁ¡§Ã þôÀÊ¡???...then i better disappear from this forum :))





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Thank u. ¯í¸û '¦¾¡Îõ àÃò¾¢ø..' ¸Å¢¨¾¨Âò ÐÃò¾¢ô À¢Êì¸ ÓüÀð¼Ð ±ýÚ¾¡ý ¦º¡øĢ¢Õ츢§Èý. À¢Êì¸ ÓÂýÚ §¾¡üÚô §À¡ÉÐ ±ýÀ§¾ ¯ñ¨Á. «¾ý «Æ¸¢üìÌ þ¨½ þø¨Ä.


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«¾ý ÓبÁìÌõ þ¨½ þø¨Ä..


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eliya nadai, nalla sinthanai.
Vaazhtukkal mallighai.
Anbudan Anand

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eliya nadai, nalla sinthanai.
Vaazhtukkal mallighai.
Anbudan Anand

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eliya nadai, nalla sinthanai.
Vaazhtukkal mallighai.
Anbudan Anand

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tottatil kattirukum malligaiye
ni kampiutaril puttiruppathu eno?
enggum un kavithai manattai parappava?..
..iyayo..iyayo..pidiciruku..
unggal kavithai enaku romba pidiciruku.......
valtukkal....nanpudan...

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tottatil kattirukum malligaiye
ni kampiutaril puttiruppathu eno?
enggum un kavithai manattai parappava?..
..iyayo..iyayo..pidiciruku..
unggal kavithai enaku romba pidiciruku.......
valtukkal....nanpudan...

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Anand & ilakia,

nanriii.....

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Hai Malligai,

Ungal padaipugal melum melum merugera kaangiren,

imayam thodum thoorathil, ungal ezhuthukaluku

nichayam adaiya mudiyum

vazhthukal

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Krish,

"imayam thodum thoorathil"--krish, enaku antha alavuku peraasai ilai..writing in tamil makes me happy, thats all..
ungaloda vaalthuku nanri..

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Krish,

"imayam thodum thoorathil"--krish, enaku antha alavuku peraasai ilai..writing in tamil makes me happy, thats all..
ungaloda vaalthuku nanri..

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Krish-n ethirpaarpu sariyendrey thondrugirathu.. malligai-yin indha kavithaiyai ('pattukku pattu..') paditha pOdhu.

´ýÈ¡¸ ¸ü§À¡Á¡?
¸¼ø ¸¼óÐ Å󾾡ø
¸¡Äí¸û ÀÄ µÊ¾¡ø
¸Çí¸Á¨¼ó¾ ¿õ ÅøÄ¢Éí¸¨ÇÔõ
§Á¨Ä ¿¡ðÎ §Á¡¸ò¾¢ø
ÑÉ¢ ¿¡ìÌ ¬í¸¢Äò¾¢ø
ÁÈóÐ §À¡É ¿õ ¦ÁøÄ¢Éí¸¨ÇÔõ
¿¢¨È¸¨Ç Á¸¢úóÐ À¡Ã¡ðÊ
̨ȸ¨Ç ¦º¡øÄ¢ °ìÌÅ¢òÐ
Á£ñÎõ þɢ ¾Á¢Æ¢ø ãú¸....


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Thanks Surathi...

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hi malligai!

What to say....! I'm speechless!
such a wonderful imagination!

"unggal kaRpanaiku pariSage..
VinMeengalai pidithu tanthu iruPen
athuvum thodum THurathil irunthirunThal!"

athaNal PaaRatukal mattume!! :)))

anbudan
rajj

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Rajj,

thanks..
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Super.. Super.. Kavidhaiyellam ezhudhittu..

yean.. ippo yellam yezhudharadhu illai'nnu... yellaarum keakanumnnu thaan... idha muunadi yeduthu vachirukkean...

Maattikiteengala... :roll:

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þâø ¾¼í¸¨Çô §À¡Ä,
¾É¢ò ¾É¢§Â
¬É¡ø ¦¾¡Îõ àÃò¾¢ø.
.....
µÂ¡¾ ¯Éì¸¡É þó¾ ¾Åõ ÁðÎõ
Á¡È¡Áø þÕìÌõ
¸¾¢ÃÅÛ측ö ¸¡ò¾¢ÕìÌõ ¦Åñ½¢Ä¨Åô §À¡Ä,
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enna malligai...
athu thaane.. ivvalavu azhagaa ezhuthittu en ippo ezhutharathilai.. comment mattum kodukkareenga..

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