"Naalaya nimisham"

[priyachary]

"Naalaya nimisham"

Anbaana, azhaagana kudumbam
poruppaana thanthai, chuttiyaai irandu pengal
anbaana en amma, aam aval engal iruvaril
ennaku mattum thaan amma..

ithu poojavin ithaya oor araintha ragasiyam..
poojavin appa , en appavin balya snegithar
poojavin siru vayathilayae aval appavum, ammavum vimaana vibathil
balayagivittanar..athu varai nanbargalai iruntha naangal iruvarum
thozhigalanome ...

Andru engal iruvarin muthalaam naal college... college mudithhu
veetirkul nuzhayumbothu telephone mani olikka...
vazhakkam pol iruvarukkum potti..
immurai pooja thaan vendraal.. athil mattum alla... engal manathaiyum

Antha phone yaetho wrong number... aanal pooja yaeno , receiverai
keezhae vaikka marutthal...andru thaan thudangiyathu... poojavin
manikanakaana telephone paechu
yaeno athu enakku konchamum pidikka villai

thinamum thodarnthathu avargal iruvarim paechum..
pooja yaeno muthal murayai ennidam ellaa vatraiyum maraikka
thuvanginaal..

marunaal avargal iruvarum santhippathai iruppathu
ennaku theriyavanthathu....ennal yaeno yaetrukkolla mudiyavillai..
appavidam solla munanginaen...

andru dining table'lil vazhakthirku maarai pooja amaithiyaai
irunthaal..
saapittathum aappavidam thaniyaai pesavendum endraal..
appa endrum poojaavin entha viruppathikkum thadayaai irunthathillai
aanalum ennul yaeno kuzhappangal.

iruvarum mottai maadikku sendru thirumbi vanthathum
appa ennayum, ammavayum azhaithu... naalai maalai..
naam ellorum... poojavudan oru idathirkku pogirome.. thayaaraai irungal
endraar...

enakku manathil oru inam puriyaa kuzhappam...
marunaal maalai... engal ellorukkum muthalae.. pooja ready

naalvarum purapatome, athu oru azhagaana grammam... angu oru govt
hospital
athil room no.11, marana padukkayil oru vayathaana periyavar
engal ellorayum avaridam azhaithu sendraal pooja..


ungal ellorayum arimuga paduthuvathaai sathiyam seithirunthaen
nandri endral, kaneerudan
ivar peyar Inban, naalai intha nimisham ivaruku aruvai sigichai
pizhaikkum vaaippu athigamillai...athanaal ennal mudintha anbaana
vaarthaigalal ivar uyirai
ivvalavu naal katti vaithirunthaen ,ivar thaan "En valarppu thanthai"
ena arimuga paduthinaal...thidirendru mazhai.. "Aam enn kangalil
kanneer mazhai"

[pavalamani pragasam]

Congrats,priyachary! Suspense arumai! nadaiyum azaku!

[priyachary]

Thankyou !

this is my first padaippu :)

thanks a lott for feedback :)

[NM]

priyachary..

romba arumaiyaaga irunthathu..... :thumbsup:

[xlntbarani]

mudivil
silirthean









Try to post in Tamil...

[priyachary]

Romba nandri..

Enakum aasai thaan thamizil ezhutha vaendum endru
aanaal.. my company doesn't encourage downloads :(

[priyachary]

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[priyachary]

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[pavalamani pragasam]

வாழ்த்துக்கள் :D

[Querida]

very nicely done :D

[terminator]

Arputhamai Irunthathu. Muthal Padaippa Namba Mudiyavillai!!!.

[bingleguy]

வாழ்த்துக்கள் !