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kaathal_kavignan
21st November 2004, 02:03 PM
"saaraladithu nindra mazhai.,
mottaagave uthirntha malar.,
othigaiyile mudintha naadagam.,
karuvile irantha kuzhanthai.,


ivatrodu thunai ponathu .. en kaathalum "

- Kaathal kavignan

tiruttakkan
22nd November 2004, 08:49 AM
Kathal kavignan,

PL try and use Tamil Font!

Your poem is worth 40! Pl try better and keep writing.

Tiruttakkan

gragavan
22nd November 2004, 06:04 PM
well done. nice poem. but the last line is scary. oru maathiri sogam kodukuthu andha vari. keep it up.

regards,
Ragavan

kaathal_kavignan
23rd November 2004, 04:50 PM
thank u moderator .. for ur feedback..

- kaathal kavignan