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[adithya]

very nice

Wonderful words

touching lines

adithya

[gragavan]

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[xlntbarani]

Yeppadi comment panradhunnu.. theriyala..

yenna nadandhadho .. adhai appadiyea yezhudhi vidugireann..


padithu mudikkum pozhudhill... sirippadhai poal manamum... kannam oru muray irugi pin.. malarndhadhu... Poorippaay irundhadhu...

Nalla sindhanai... Nalla veanduthal..

[Aravind_06]

Good Thinking. Nice poem with message

Aravind

[malligai]

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kavidhai rompa nalla iruku...nala sindhanai kooda...

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[kanaga arumugam]

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[kanaga arumugam]

thank u kathir for the nice reply.

[malligai]

kanaga, En neenga varadhu ilai?

[kanaga arumugam]

HI MALLIGAI,

SORRY KONJA BUSY. MUMBAI MAZHAI KARANAMAAGA OFFICE ONE WEEK LEAVE. APPURAM PENDING WORK. ROMBA BUSY ATHANAALE THAAN INTERNET IL POGHA VILLAI AND MOREOVER ENNODA T.Y.B.COM STUDIES,PONNU ROMBA CHUTTI ADANAALE CYBER CAFEKKUM POGHA MUDIYA VILLAI. INI VARUVEN. OK VAA.


THANKS & REGARDS ,

KANAGA ARUMUGAM.

[tiruttakkan]

kavithai is ok. 40!

tiruttakkan

[Srimangai]

kavidhai nanRu. paaraatukkal. Mumbai-leyaa irukeenga? yaarume inge illaye-nnu ninaichukitturndhen.
innum ezuthunga.
anpudan
srimangai

[Shakthiprabha.]

Hi kanaga,

I hope u dont mind my frank comments.
Kavithai is KINDA NOT BAD......

I find it was more like a prose written
over split lines. (sharp cricicism. eh.. sorry :(..)

but reg the messege... meant in kavithai,

ENGA, ITHUKKU ETHUKKU adutha janmam?
intha janmathulaiyE kathu kudungalEn?????

why wait?

Vittuk koduthal enpathu need to be on both
sides. definitely. adutha janmathulaiyum
ithE husband thane?

wow... thats what is called thambathyam.

INDIAN WOMAN!! :)

I remeber a friend of mine wrote a poem(!!!!)
sometime back...(well not a poem..... just
some related thoughts)....

" Unnaip patri ezhudalaam paththu pakkam
ennaip patri theriyumaa rendu pakkam?
naan oru pakkam. nee oru pakkam.
unakkum enakkum ettaam(ethaatha) poruththam
ANAALUM INIKUTHEE nam thambathyam!!"

:)))

kanaga, sorry... in case i commented too
much on ur poem. Just felt U CAN DO BETTER.

regards,
shakthiprabha

[kanaga arumugam]

hi friends,

Thank you for the comments.
Srimangai neenga mumbai il enghe irukeenga.naan thane il
tirutakkan kavidai is ok athenna 40!

shakthi prabha ongaloda comments saridhaan aanal thaampadya vazhkai enbhathil iruvarum vittu kodukka vendiyadhu saridhaan aanalum ennai porutha varaiyil indha jenmathil pengal anubhaviththathai ezhezhu jenmatthil anubhavikka koodaadhu!
adhanaal thaan aduttha jenmathil aangal pengalaaga pirandhaal naam sollithara vendiyadhillai avargalukke nam vedhanaigal therindhu vidum.

appuram neenga sonna maadiri konjam better aaga panna try panren.


Thanks & Regards,