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prabhu_bitindia
18th November 2004, 10:38 AM
Everything you do
Resembles me,
Every Happiness you got
Erased my sorrows,
Every smile you delivered
Retrieved from my lips,
Every dreams you faced
Became real for me,
Every step you marched
Fulfilled my wishes,
Every touch you did
Blossomed me the flowers of feelings,
THATS WHY....
Every poem of mine
Has you as its Theme.

Querida
19th November 2004, 12:35 AM
wow well written. :)

gautham
19th November 2004, 08:46 AM
very well try...flow is nice....try to make coincident in endings like "yethuhai"

prabhu_bitindia
19th November 2004, 09:20 AM
Thanx 4 ur compliment Querida. :)

prabhu_bitindia
19th November 2004, 09:22 AM
Will concentrate on yethuhai and Monai very well on upcoming poems ...Thanx 4 ur compliments