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Shravan
17th November 2004, 08:27 PM
Hi friends.. Im Again.. konjam busy in work.. vayithukku uzhaikka veandi itukke athaan.. :(. I So here is my new oru kavithai... hope experts like Shakthi priya,malligai, KK..and friends will give their review.. this is just un Poem.. ithula unmai ..poi laam kedayaathu.. just i have told one of natural feeling... :?

Yennavo Yennavo....
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Yenna vendum yennakku
Unnil irunthu.?
Puriya villaye..

Nee
muththamidugaiyil Mogam varugirathu..
adhil
parisutha kaadhal milirgirathu..!

Nee
pakkam amargaiyil
idhayam silirkirathu
Adhil
unarchi thulirikirathu
Paasamaaia..nesamaai..urimaiyaai..!

Nee
katti thaluvugaiyil Undhan
kaadhal therigirathu..
Yenthan idhayam kulirigirathu..
Ulagam marakkirathu..!

Annaal...
Ithanyum nadakkaiyil
naan kangal moodi Rasiththaal...
Kaamam thulirikirathe..!

kulambugiren..
yenna vendum yenakku..
unnil irunthu?
Kaadhal irukkirathu..
unmel kavanam Irukkirathu..
paasam irukkirathu..
unmel nesamum Irukkirathu...!
Anaal..
kaamamum irukkirathe..

Nee vendum..
Un nesam vendum..
Un paasam vendum..
Un kaadhal vendum..
Un kavanam vendum..
Koodave..
sila ganangkalil..
Un kaamamum vendum..!

Yeatru kolvaayaa?
Nee yennai yeatru kolhvaayaa?

-Shravan

xlntbarani
18th November 2004, 06:02 AM
Hi Shravan!

Naan expert yellam kidayadhu
But... I will tell what i felt Ok.

kulambugiren..
Idhu mattum 100% unmai

Shravan!

Pasikkumbozhudhu
Rusithu Pusikkiroam,
Aanalum
Atha Recall Panna
Pasi theriyathu
Rusi mattum thaan Theriyum.

Athey mathiri

Yedho oru
Asambavitham
nadandha
Valikkum
Aanna
Apurama
yosipathinganna
Valikkathu
Varutham
mattumea minjum


///naan kangal moodi Rasiththaal...
Kaamam thulirikirathe..!////


Like that
Kadhaloda
vibrations'a
namba
rusichi thaan pusikiroam
Thirupi recall Panna
Antha Valiyoda Varutham
Mattumea
Minjudhu


Kaadhalaal - Varuthum Kamam
Kamathil - Varundhum Kaadhal

Kaadhal yenum Pasikku
Kaamamea Rusi
So,
Kuzhambadha Pusi


Ok... Well...
Kuzhambiyadharkku Nandri....

- xlntBARANI

iyappan
30th November 2004, 12:29 AM
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Shravan
30th November 2004, 08:47 AM
Yeppadi Tamil font kondu varrarthu?? konjam sollunnga Iyappan..plz

-Shravan