Hykoo - arasu mariyaathai!

[gautham]

arasu mariyaathayudan
thaganam seyyappatta thirupthiyil
santhanakkattai!

[tiruttakkan]

Gautham,

Not bad!

Tiruttakkan

[gautham]

nanri

[malligai]

nalla iruku, gautam...

unga haikoo's elaam orey thread-la podunga...just for continuity...

[gautham]

thanks..u mean oru topicukku keela one by oneaa add panna solreengalaa?...appo athil update aanathu yellorukkum theriyaamal pogum illayaa???

[xlntbarani]

Moondru varikalil
Mukkiya seithigal
Vaasipathu
Ungal Gautham


Okva...

Unga writtings padikka, padichittu comment panrathukku naan approximate'a 5 clicks pannurean... neenga yennanna 3 strokes'la mudichiduringa.... Hykoo practice pannrengala.... Yedhavuthum lengthiya.. sharpa.. yezhudhungalean....

[gautham]

neelam mukkiyamillai..visayam irukkuthaannu paarunga..visayam illainnaa...visayathooda yelutha try panraen..okva?

[gautham]

hi thiru,
thaangal yenathu kavithaigalukku alikkum vimarsanam yennai kavithai yeluthuvathai uukkappaduthuvathaaga illai...nalla vimarsanam yenpathu kavithai yeluthum aarvathai thuunduvathaagavum thavarina thiruthikkolla innum kuurmai paduthikkolla uthavuvathaahavum irukka vaendum..aanaal thangal vimarsanam yaenoo thaanoovendru "poohira pookkil" alatchiyamaaga solvathu poola amaihirathu...thayavu seithu thangal vimarsana murayai maatrikkondu puthithaaga yelutha varuvoorai uukkappaduthungal. thamil kavithai yeluthuvatharkkendrae yaarum thaniyaaga pirakkavillai.

[tiruttakkan]

Dear Mr Gautham,

You have not read my poems because of the Font issue. I have no reason to believe that you rate my poems highly. Also, I have no airs about myself with regard to my ability to write poems. When I comment on somebodyelse's poem, I do not see what they think of my works.
In most of the cases I have been evaluating the poems in terms of numbers. Some have liked. Some have not. as you did express your dislike to this method once, I've generally refrained from doing that to your poems.
Please note that my comments are genuine. These are even remotely , not meant to hurt or discourage you. Just take them in your stride. I reiterate that I have no sense of superiority over you or any other human being in the world. I have no feeling that I write better than you.

Tiruttakkan

[gautham]

Thanks for ur genuine reply.
i have no idea to hurt u.
I think u one of the seniormost member in this forum club. That's y I am telling encourage newcomers & beginners to try to write verses.
Thamilagathil thamil padikkum aarvam, yeluthum aarvam kurainthu varuhirathu....so, kavithai yelutha aarvathoodu muyarchi seibavarhalai vimarsanam yenra paarvayil nogadikka vaendaam....thavarinai suttikkaatti sarippadutha muyarchi seiyungal. appadi seithaal intha forumum innum niraya paeraal vaasikkappadum, thamilum palaraal suvaasikkappadum.
Intha forumil idam perum anaithu kavithaihalukkumae vimarsanam yeluthum palakkathai ungalai ponra seniormost persons yaerppaduthikkondaal anaivarukkum nalla aarvathai thuundum.
ithu yenakkaana thanippatta karuthalla.
nanri.

[annamalaifan]

kadhal tholvi
malaiyil irunthu
kuthithatu
aruvi

[annamalaifan]

ennail kolbavarukku
tookku tandanai endral
nattil ale irukkathu
solvathu tamil

[annamalaifan]

alaghana pookkal
aanal uthirkkum irakkamatra
maranggal

[gautham]

that first one...aruvi is nice...but that other two theme is good but u can improve that sharpnes....keep it up.

[annamalaifan]

i didnt write these hykoos i just copied from a magazine....

[gautham]

oohhoo..it's ok.

[xlntbarani]

Annamalaifan,

So, Gautham is asking you to improve your coping...sharply... is it gautham

[gautham]

hahahahaha