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Topic started by Kathir (..) (@ cache13-4.ruh.isu.net.sa) on Tue Aug 3 05:28:04 EDT 2004.



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kathir,

karmanyEva...well.Once the sky enjoys portraying a rain bow , the absence has to pain.If you don't want pain and at the same time enjoy the earthly pleasures without bothering about when the situation will change, the formula is not known to most of us , I feel.

Now to rate your poem. It gets a 65!


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Kathir,

thamarai ilai thanneer pola vazhaththan ellorukkum aasai. anaal enna seyya. Avvapodhu adhan kodikalukkidaiyil sikki thavippadhilirundhu thappikka iyalavillaiye.......

vazhkkai kaatrin vegathil norngipona ninaivu sarugugalukku valippadhillai endru naam ninaiththu kondirukkirom, adharkku mattum thaney theriyum adhan valiyum, vedhanaiyum.....

ungal paarvaiyil ovvondrum eppodhum azhagaai arththamulladhaaai..... arthamulla azhagana kavithai.....

vazhthukkal kathir.....

anbudan
malar.

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Malar, ennadhan philosophical-a ninaikka murpattalum, "thamarai ilai thanneer pola vazhaththan ellorukkum aasai. anaal enna seyya. Avvapodhu adhan kodikalukkidaiyil sikki thavippadhilirundhu thappikka iyalavillaiye" enbadhu nidharshanam. Azagay solliyirukkeenga! Thanks.

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And then, adhukku valikkumo ennavo, namakku puriyalai.. avvalavudhan-nnu soliyirukkiradum oru nalla perception. Thanks.

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aRputham kathir!

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Kathir,

idhu epo eludhiyathu??...i somehow missed it...

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naanum miss pannitten beautiful poem kadhir kadhirthan!!

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//-- only u can conclude everything so optimistically...and it takes a very strong person to do that...

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Wow!! again a beautiful one! ÁøÄ¢¨¸ ÌÈ¢ôÀ¢ðÊÕìÌõ «ó¾ Åâ¸û «üÒ¾õ! ¬É¡Öõ «ó¾ì ¸¨¼º¢ ¿¡ýÌ Åâ¸û ..... ¯üÚÀ¡÷¾Å÷¸û «È¢Å¡÷¸û «ó¾ Åâ¸Ç¢ý ¬Æò¨¾Ôõ «÷ò¾ò¨¾Ôõ. Áɨ¾ ¸Éì¸ ¨ÅòÐÅ¢ð¼ Åâ¸û «¨Å :-( Great job once again!
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