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Topic started by Cygnus (pg) (ganymede_europa@yahoo.com) (@ cavalier250.is.temple.edu) on Sat Apr 3 19:47:47 EST 2004.


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ţΠÅóÐ ¾¢ÕõÀ¢Â ÅÄ¢ Åâ¸Ç¢§Ä Ò⸢ÈÐ!


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// '¦ƒð Ä¡ì'-þø ´Õ Å¡Ãõ ¸Æ¢óÐ
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how beautifully narrated!! especially, the crisp narration of the inevitable routine // «Å÷¸û þÅ÷¸û ±ýÚ ÀðÊÂø §À¡ðÎ þÂó¾¢Ãò¾ÉÁ¡ö ¯È׸û ÒÐôÀ¢òÐ.. // hats off.

'penned by a novice' enbathu mattumey thevaiyaRRathu. u seem really good, as such.


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¸¾¢÷ ¦º¡øÅÐ ºÃ¢§Â!

"¬ñ§¼! þó¾¡ Åó¾¢ð¼Ûí¸ ¯í¸ «ÊÁ!" ±ýÀÐ §À¡Ä ¾¨Ä
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¿£í¸û ¸Å¢¨¾ ±Ø¾¢Â§À¡§¾ ¸Å¢»É¡¸¢Å¢ðË÷¸û!

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nostalgia / requiem -¯¼ý À¨Æ ¿¢¨É׸¨Ç «¨º§À¡Î¸¢È ͸ò¨¾ ¿ýÈ¡¸ô À¢Ã¾¢ÀÄ¢òÐûÇ£÷¸û!

Å¡ú¸! ÅÇ÷¸! :=)


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PP, ¸¾¢÷, geno, ¿ýÈ¢¸û ÀÄ ! Ò¾¢Â ÓÂüº¢¦ÂýÀ¾¡ø 'novice' ±ýÚ ÜȢ즸¡ñ§¼ý. þíÌûÇ À¨¼ôÀ¡Ç¢¸Ç¢ý Óý ±ÉÐ ±Øò¾¡üÈø ¸òÐìÌðÊìÌî ºÁ§Á. ¸õÀ£ÃÓñÎ ¸÷ÅÁ¢ø¨Ä !

PS: I have changed my handle to "Cygnus", I guess my springwell of imaginative nom de plumes was quite dry at the time I thught of the previous one :)


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Cygnus,
Very good attempt !! As geno said, ¿£í¸û ¸Å¢¨¾ ±Ø¾¢Â§À¡§¾ ¸Å¢»É¡¸¢Å¢ðË÷¸û! Å¡÷ò¨¾¸û À¢Ã¾¢ÀÄ¢ìÌõ 'ÅÄ¢' - ¨Â ±ýÉ¡ø ¿ýÈ¡¸§Å ÒâóЦ¸¡ûÇ ÓÊó¾Ð. ¦¾¡¼÷óÐ ÓÂüº¢òÐ ¿¢¨È ±ØÐí¸û!


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À¡¨ÄÔõ ¿£¨ÃÔõ À¢Ã¢òÐ, À¡¨Ä ÁðÎõ «ÕóЦÁýÚ ¦º¡øÅ¡÷¸§Ç.. «ó¾ «ýÉô ÀȨŨ ¿¢¨ÉòÐ ¿£í¸û unga 'nom de plume' §¾÷× ¦ºö¾¢ÕôÀ¢ý ¿øÄ §¿¡ì¸õ.


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:-)

ooobss... penned by a novice ?

i doubt... ( may be in forum hub . right ? )

Á¢¸ ¿ýÈ¡¸ ÅóÐûÇÐ pg... ¦¾¡¼Õí¸û...

:-)


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Roshan, Suresh, Thank you ! Thodarnthu ezhutha muyarchikkirEn.

Kathir, I chose "Cygnus" based on the constellation by the same name, being the astronomy dabbler that I am. But your explanation is beautiful, copyright paNNalenna athai use- paNNIkkalAmA ?!! hehe !

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Yeah, cygnus, by all means. i saw those two meanings, but guessed (wrongly) that you'd've chosen the one i mentioned. anyway, happy. it's a great name.

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º¢ìÉŠ - ±í§¸ ¿£í¸û?! :=)


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cygnus,

reviving ur thread.

try and write once in a while!

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Cygnus,

This one has come well. Sometimes , poetry is beautiful without flowery words and similies.

60!

tiruttakkan

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WOW Cygnus!!...this is simply beautiful...i can relate to everything u have written here...

"«ýÚõ þýÚõ ", is making me homesickkkkk!!! :( :(
post more and more.... :)


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GREAT. LOVED IT.

Dont call urself novice anymore cygnus.
You are promoted(Infact take the credit
of double promotion)

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Thanks tiruttakkan, malligai and Shakthi!!

tiru, 60 marks feels like 90, thanks! I love Wordsworth's simple style that conveys beautifully, feelings that are just underneath the conscious mind, gently floating up now and then, filling up one's soul.

Malligai, this stirs up nostalgic pangs of memories and guilt over my NRI limbo-life for me too :-(

Shakthi,this is was my first 'publication' here, a while ago, double promotion-A?! Yay!!

Special thanks to geno for reviving this thread!!

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cygnus!

À¢ÃÁ¡¾õ!

«ºò¾¢ð˹¸, §À¡í¸!
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