My first attempt at Tamizh Poetry

[Badri]

[tscii:6b747b57b6]My very first attempt at Tamizh poetry. Pizhai irunthaal (etharkku irunthaal, irukkum) mannikkavum.

ÁÃí¸û ¦ºýÈÉÅ¡õ Åɧ¾Å¢¨Â §¿¡ì¸¢
Ó¨È ¾ÅȢ ÁÉ¢¾¨É ÀüÈ¢ ӨȢ¼

À¼÷ó¾ ¬¨Äò¨¾ì ¸ñÎ, Åɧ¾Å¢ Å¢ÉŢɡû:
§Á¡Éò¨¾ Å¢Ç츢 §Á¡É ÌÕÅ¢üÌ ¿¢Æø «Ç¢ò¾Å§É,
¯Ä¸Çó¾ ¦ÀÕÁ¡¨É ¦¾¡ðÊÄ¢ðÎ Á¢¾ó¾Å§É
¯ý ¸Å¨Ä ±ýÉ?

¬ÄÁÃõ ¦º¡ýÉÐ:
¬¨Ä¸û ¦ºö§¾¡õ, ¦¾¡Æ¢üº¡¨Ä¸û ¦ºö§¾¡õ
«íÌ ¬ð¸Ù째 þø¨Ä §Å¨Ä,
þíÌ ¬Ö즸ýÉ §Å¨Ä
±ýÚ Å£úò¾¢É÷ ±ýÉŨÃ,
¿¡ý ÁðÎõ À¢¨Æò§¾ý, ÅóÐû§Çý ӨȢ¼

ºÄºÄ¦ÅÉ þ¨º ¦ºöÔõ «Ãº ÁÃò¨¾ì §¸ð¼¡û ÅÉ ¸ýÉ¢:
ÁÃí¸ÙìÌ «Ãº§É
Á¡¾÷¸ÙìÌ ¾¨ÄŨÉÔõ ¾¨ÄôÀ¢ÃºÅò¾Ôõ «ÕûÀŧÉ
¯ý ¸Å¨Ä ±ýÉ?

¬ÃºÁÃõ ¦º¡ýÉÐ:
Á¡¾÷¸û ¸¡¾Ä÷¸Ç¡ö ¸¡§Äƒ¢§Ä ¾¨ÄÅ¨É Á½ì¸¢ýÈÉ÷
À¢ÃºÅò¾¢÷째¡ §¿Ãõ þø¨Ä - º÷§Ã¡§¸ð ¾¡¨Â §¾Î¸¢ýÈÉ÷
«ÃºÛõ þø¨Ä, «ÈÓõ þø¨Ä, «ÃºÁÃõ ÁðÎõ ±¾÷즸ýÚ
Å£úò¾¢¾É÷ ±ýÉŨÃ,
¿¡ý ÁðÎõ À¢¨Æò§¾ý, ÅóÐû§Çý ӨȢ¼

Åɧ¾Å¢ Å¢ÉŢɡû:
ÁçÁ¡ «øÄÐ ÁÕ󧾡 ±ýÚ ¸ºó¾¡Öõ «ÕÁÕó¾¡ö Å¢ÇíÌÀŧÇ
Á¨ÄÂÅÙìÌ ¯¸ó¾ ¸üÀ¸§Á
Òò¾¡ñ¨¼ò ÐÅ츢 ¦ÅöìÌõ §Åõ§À
¯ý ¸Å¨Ä ¾¡ý ±ýÉ?


§ÅôÀÁÃõ ¦º¡ýÉÐ
¸ÚõÀ¡ö þÉ¢ìÌõ º¢üÈ¢ýÀò¨¾ ¿¡ÎÅ÷
¸ºó¾¡Öõ ¿ý¨Á ¾Õõ §Åõ¨À §¾Î§Å¡÷ þø¨Ä
Òò¾¡ñÊüÌ À¡÷ʸÙìÌ ¦ºøÖÅ÷
Á¨ÄÁ¸¨Ç Á¨Ä¡¸ ¦ÅÚõ ¸øÄ¡¸ì ¸¡ñÀ÷
Å£úò¾¢¾É÷ ±ýÉŨÃ,
¿¡ý ÁðÎõ À¢¨Æò§¾ý, ÅóÐû§Çý ӨȢ¼

§¸ð¼¡û ÅÉ «Ãº¢ §¸ð¼ À¢ý ÜȢɡû:
ӨȢ¼ Åó¾Å÷¸¨Ç Өȡ¸ì §¸ð§¼ý
¿¡ý ¦º¡øÖõ Å¡÷ò¨¾Ôõ §¸ûÁ¢ý
¸ÅÉò¨¾ þÆó¾¡ý ÅÉò¨¾ «Æ¢ò¾¡ý
þíÌ Åɧ¾Å¢§Â ÅÉò¨¾ §¾Î¸¢È¡û
¯í¸û ̨Ȩ ±ýÉ¢¼õ ӨȢðË÷
±ý ÌȨ ¡â¼õ Üڧŧɡ?


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[madhu]

[tscii:e9a7569695]†¡ö Àòâ !

¿øÄ ¸ÕòÐ...

À¢¨Æ þÕìÌõ ±ýÚ ´ôÒì ¦¸¡ûÅÐ ¯í¸û ¾ýɼì¸ò¨¾ì ¸¡ðθ¢ÈÐ.
¦À¡Õû ÌüÈõ þÕôÀ¢ý ±ó¾ ¿ì¸£ÃáÅÐ ÅóÐ ±ÎòÐî ¦º¡øÄ¢ Å¢ÎÅ¡÷..
¬É¡ø ¬í¸¡í§¸ ¯ûÇ ±ØòÐô À¢¨Æ¸¨Ç
¿£í¸§Ç ¾Â× ¦ºöÐ ºÃ¢ ¦ºöРŢÎí¸§Çý !

¯¾¡Ã½ò¾¢üÌ,

"¦Á¡Éò¨¾ Å¢Ç츢 ¦Á¡É ÌÕÅ¢üÌ "
±ýÀ¨¾
"¦ÁªÉò¨¾ Å¢Ç츢 ¦ÁªÉ ÌÕÅ¢üÌ" ±ý§È¡
"§Á¡Éò¨¾ Å¢Ç츢 §Á¡É ÌÕÅ¢üÌ" ±ý§È¡
Á¡üÈÄ¡õ.

BTW, ¿¡§É ´Õ «¨Ą̃Ⱦ¡ý.. «¾É¡ø ±ý¨Éò ¾¢ð¼¡¾£í¸ ! :P [/tscii:e9a7569695]

[Badri]

[tscii:0776d574d9]ÁÐ «Å÷¸§Ç: Á¢ì¸ ¿ýÈ¢. Á¡üÈ¢ Å¢ð§¼ý.

þ-¸Äô¨À¢ø ¼Â¢ô ¦ºöŧ¾ ´Õ ¸¨Ä. þ¾¢ø ±ý ¾Á¢ú spelling §ÅÚ! «¾É¡ø ¾¡ý ¿¡ý ¦ÅÌÅ¡¸ ¾Á¢Æ¢ø ¼Â¢ô ¦ºöž¢ø¨Ä.

besides, it take so much time. It took me more time to type this poem than to actually think and write it!!![/tscii:0776d574d9]

[temporary sori-Observer]

[tscii:01839a7a9f]Àòâ, ¸¡ïÍô§À¡É ÁæÁøÄ¡õ, À¡ þÕì¸ ÁÃò¨¾ô À¡òÐ ¬Ú¾ø «¨¼Ôõ. «ó¾ ÀÍÁçÁ ¦ÅðÎôÀð¼¡, ¸¡ðÎÁÃí¸û ±øÄ¡õ «Ðí¸ ¸Å¨Ä¦Â Åɧ¾Å¨¾ ¸¢ð¼ ӨȢÎí¸. ¬É¡ Åɧ¾Å¨¾§Â ¸Äí¸¢ ¿¢ýÉ¡ «ó¾ò§¾Å¨¾ìÌ Â¡Ã¡¦Ä ¬Ú¾ø ¦º¡øÄ ÓÊÔõ?[/tscii:01839a7a9f]

http://www.raaga.com/channels/tamil/movie/T0000222.html

[pavalamani pragasam]

[tscii:960adaf5b6]Wow! Àòâ, Á¢¸×õ «Õ¨ÁÂ¡É ¸Å¢¨¾; ¿øÄ ¸ÕòÐȢ×! À¢¨Æ¸¨Çô ÀüÈ¢ «ÄðÊ즸¡ûÇ¡¾£÷¸û! þÐ ±ýÉ ÀûÇ¢ìܼÁ¡, ¿¡í¸û À¢Ãõ§À¡Î ¿¢üÌõ Å¡ò¾¢Â¡÷¸Ç¡? ¦º¡øÄ Åó¾Ð Òâó¾Ð, «Ð §À¡Ðõ ±ýÀÐ þì¸¡Ä ÒÐ communication era's concept. ±ô§À¡Ð "¸Å¢¨¾ìÌ ¸Å¢¨¾" ¾¢Ã¢ìÌ ÅóÐ ¸Äì¸ô§À¡¸¢È£÷¸û?[/tscii:960adaf5b6]

[Badri]

[tscii:612c11afe1]¾ðÎò ¾ÎÁ¡È¢ þô§À¡ ¾¡ý §Â¦¾¡ ±Ø¾Â¢Õ째ý...«ÐìÌûÇ, ¿£í¸ §ÅÈ PP Madam!!

By the way, ellam, ungal kili pechhin inspiration thaan[/tscii:612c11afe1]

[xlntbarani]

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¯í¸û ̨Ȩ ±ýÉ¢¼õ ӨȢðË÷
±ý ÌȨ ¡â¼õ Üڧŧɡ?
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¿øÄ¡ þÕìÌ þó¾ ¸Å¢Ãº... ÒÄõÀø...

¦¸¡ïºõ... «ÄõÀÖõ ܼ....
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TSO ... ²ý ±ô¦À¡ØÐõ.. ±ý ¿¢¨É׸Ǣø þÕ츢ȡ÷Û ¾¡ý ¦¾Ã¢ÂÅ¢ø¨Ä...
:lol: [/tscii:c20676f1b9]

[malligai]

[tscii:311988a375]Badri,

idhu nejamaavey unga mudhal attempt-a, sollunga??..bcos most of us write only 4-5 lines in our first attempt...aana neenga oru periya kaaviyamey eludhi irukeenga... :)

nala iruku...innum neraya eludhunga... :thumbsup:

//ÁçÁ¡ «øÄÐ ÁÕ󧾡 ±ýÚ ¸ºó¾¡Öõ «ÕÁÕó¾¡ö Å¢ÇíÌÀŧÇ
Á¨ÄÂÅÙìÌ ¯¸ó¾ ¸üÀ¸§Á //---very nice lines..
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[Badri]

Malligai: Nejamave mudhal attempt thaan...

ithula kasthapatta apparam, maru attempt irukkumane doubt!! :wink:

Thanks much for the appreciation! :)

[madhu]

ithula kasthapatta apparam, maru attempt irukkumane doubt!!

achachO !

appadi ellaam ninaikka kUdaadhu !
evvalvu nalla theme solli irukkeenga !
kaNdippa ezhudhunga !

ungaLaal mudiyum ! :P

[Roshan]

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Ó¾ø ÓÂüº¢ ±ýÚ ÜÈ ÓÊ¡¾ «Ç×ìÌ ¿ýÈ¡¸ ÅóÐûÇÐ ¯í¸û ¸Å¢¨¾. À¡Ã¡ðÎì¸û. ¸Å¢¨¾ì ¸Õ×õ Å¢ò¾¢Â¡ºÁ¡ý ¸üÀ¨É. ¦¾¡¼÷óÐ ±ØÐí¸û. :)

þ-¸Äô¨À ¦¸¡ñÎ ¾Á¢Æ¢ø À¾¢ôÀ¢ôÀÐ «ùÅÇ× º¢ÃÁÁ¡É ¸¡Ã¢Âõ «øÄ. ¬ÃõÀò¾¢ø ¦¸¡ïºõ º¢ÃÁõ þÕìÌõ ¬É¡ø ¦¸¡ïº ¿¡ð¸Ç¢ø ÀƸ ÀƸ ºÃ¢Â¡¸¢Å¢Îõ. ¦¾¡¼÷óÐ ¾Á¢Æ¢ø À¾¢ôÀ¢ì¸ ÓÂÖí¸û. :) [/tscii:5e852fa424]

[Badri]

[tscii:a9e645d2bb]À¡Ã¡ðθÙìÌõ ¯üº¡¸õ «Ç¢ò¾¾üÌõ ¿ýÈ¢ §Ã¡„ý...¸ñÊôÀ¡¸ ÓÂüº¢ ¦ºö¸¢§Èý!

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[jaiganes]

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¯í¸û ¸Å¢¨¾ Á¢¸×õ «Õ¨Á!
±í¸û ¾Á¢ØìÌ §ÁÖõ ¦ÀÕ¨Á!
ÁÃí¸û Å¡ð¼ò¨¾ À¡ð¼¡ö À¡ÊÉ£÷!
ÅÉí¸Ç¢ý ¦ºØ¨Á¨Â Áɾ¢ø ¿¡ÊÉ£÷!

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±í¸û ¾Å§Á ÒÐì¸Å¢»ý ¸¢¨¼ò¾Ð!
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À¢¨Æ ̨ÈÔõ ÅÇ÷Á¾¢§À¡ø ¯õÁ¡§Ä ÅÇçÅñÎõ!
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[Badri]

[tscii:0bb69ea17a]¦ÅüÈ¢ Å¢¿¡Â¸§É!

«ôÀôÀ¡!
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þÐ ´Õ À¡Ã¡ð¼¡, þø¨Ä ¾É¢ô À¡ð¼¡?
«øÄÐ ¦º¡ø ÅǨÁìÌ "ÅÆ¢¸¡ð¼¡"?

±Ðš¢Ûõ, ¿ýÈ¢.
±ýÉÔõ ´Õ ¸Å¢»É¡¸ ¸Õ¾¢Â¨ÁìÌõ ¿ýÈ¢.




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[Kathir9999]

// My very first attempt at Tamizh poetry // mudhal muyarchi, tamil ezuththukkalil? appadiththan thondrugiradhu. kavidhaiyum, karpanaiyum ungalukku pudhidhalla, allava? nalla ezudhiyirukenga. vazthukkal. we look f/w to see more. congrats.

[tiruttakkan]

Badri,

It is really good. Leave alone it is your first attempt-I gotta give it 60!

Please go on!

Tiruttakkan

[Badri]

Kathir and Tirutakkan: Mikka Nandri for your encouragement!