Mudhal kavithai

[neruppu roja]

anai in aravanaipum
thanthayin kandipum
sagothariyin thudukuthanamum
orunginaintha kaathaliyaay
nee kidaithay
malarkaram pidippatharku
manuventhi vantha pothu
aayiram kaaranam sonnai
athanayum sarithaan
naan yenna seyyatum
nee illa vulagu thanil
athai koora yen maranthai
tholi? :oops:

[xlntbarani]

\\
anai in aravanaipum
thanthayin kandipum
sagothariyin thudukuthanamum
orunginaintha kaathaliyaay
nee kidaithay
\\
ok

\\
malarkaram pidippatharku
manuventhi vantha pothu
aayiram kaaranam sonnai
athanayum sarithaan

naan yenna seyyatum
nee illa vulagu thanil
\\

should break the para like this.. to emboss your punch.. K

//
athai koora yen maranthai
tholi?
//

Yedhai koora .... ? em...

//
:oops:
//

varivadivathil thaan unarvugalai... sollaveandum....

dont use pictures when writing poems...

Regards

xlntBarani

[malligai]

kavidhai nala iruku...unga id is superrr.. :D

mudindhaal thamizhilum post pannunga...

[minnalpoo]

kavithai arumai
thodarungal

[malligai]

good one...