ennavale...!

[k.kaviram]

ennvale..!

un vilikalukkul nan veelnthathu - unmaithan
un kathalukku nan kathirunthathu - unmaithan
un ninaivinai nan nesithathu - unmaithan
un parvaikku nan parithavithathu - unmaithan
anal un
unmai nilai ariyamal -enn
ullathai eppadi
unnodu seravida mudiyum...?

[selvakumar]

Nice one Kaviram. This one clearly depicts the pain of separation in love. Here is mine...
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Unnai than swasithen...
Matravatrai ninthithen...

Unnai than Kandu sendren...
Matravatrai Kari umilnden...

Unnai than nesithen...
Matravatrai veruthen...

Unnai mattum kanavil kanden...
Matravatrai nijathilum maranden...

Unnai parthal irulum enakku sooriyan...
Unnai parkavidil avanum enakku irulthan...

Aaanaal..
Varthai tharamal sirithu onrum sollmal sendraye...
ine naan vazhlvadargu saakalaam...

Ellam unakkaga nesithen...
Penne,
Maranathaium unakkaga nesikiren...

Viravil vaa...
Viduthalai thaa...
Unnai piriundu ulla ulagam, ulagam illai
Unnai parkamal vaalum valgai, valgai illai

Un kaiyal arundinal vishamum amirtham...!
Nee koduthal maranamum enakku motsham than...

Endru kodupai enakku motsham, un nilalil...!

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[k.kaviram]

Thanks selva,
sila unarvukal manathil puthainthavai.velikonarumpothu sila valikkum sila manathukku nekilchi tharum.ungalodathu mikavum arumai.

thanks,
kaviramk

[xlntbarani]

ennvale..!

un vilikalukkul nan veelnthathu - unmaithan
un kathalukku nan kathirunthathu - unmaithan
un ninaivinai nan nesithathu - unmaithan
un parvaikku nan parithavithathu - unmaithan
quote]

fine .. rhyming lines

[quote=k.kaviram]ennvale..!
anal un
unmai nilai ariyamal -enn
ullathai eppadi
unnodu seravida mudiyum...?

what you are.. saying... cant understand...

ullam seramal... eppadi...
vizhndhadhu, kaathirundhadhu, nesithadhu, parithaviththathu... anaithum unmayaagum nanba....

yendru... ullam ... oruthiyai/oruvanai noaki selgiratho andre athu searndhu vidukirathu.... searndhu vittatharkkana acknowledgement kidaikkumvarayea...
kaathirundhadhu, parithavipadhu.. anaithum

if it goes only it can be rejected... naa

So if you love some one... you can love them.. if they dont do return to you too.. Love is not a deal...

like

YOU GIVE ... I GIVE....

[selvakumar]

Thank u kaviram. Write more on this.

Thanks selva,
sila unarvukal manathil puthainthavai.velikonarumpothu sila valikkum sila manathukku nekilchi tharum.ungalodathu mikavum arumai.

thanks,
kaviramk

[malligai]

kaviram,

nala iruku...

[k.kaviram]

thanks malligai..



reg,
kaviram

[viji_ra]

hi ram

really very nice all the best for ur future

rgds
viji

[k.kaviram]

thanks viji

[ponnarasan]

Kadidham Yezhudha Neramillai,
Kavidhai Yezhudhugiren.
Inbam Enakku Tharuvadhu pol, thunbame tharugiraai.
Thunbam enakku tharuvadhu pol, meendum thunbame tharugiraai.
Nee Nilavai Rasippaval, Naan Adhan Velichaththai Mattum.
Nee Ulagai Rasippaval, Naan Un Azhagai Mattum.
Nee Thookkam Kel, Naan Nimmadhi Tharugiren,
Nee Osai Kodu, Naan Uyirai Tharugiren.
Nee Naalai Kel, Naan Indre Tharugiren,
Nee Kel, Naan Tharugiren.

Thodarum indha kaadhal payanam....

[k.kaviram]

Superb ponnarasan,


keep it up..


kaviram

[TamilMoon]

Nice poems Kaviram, Selva anna & Ponnarasan :)

[ponnarasan]

Thavalai Alla Naan,
Thanneerai vittu Tharaiku Thavuvadharku.
Unnil vaazhum meen naan,
Vaazhndhalum veezhndhalum,
adhu unnil than, adhu unnodu than.


Thodarum indha kaadhal payanam....

- Thanks kaviram and Tamilmoon

[TamilMoon]

Superrrrrrrrrrrrrrr :clap: :clap:

[ponnarasan]

Varudi vandha kaatru sonnadhu,
Nee menmai endru.
En viralgalukku mattum thane theriyum
Adhu unmai endru.


-Thodarum indha kaadhal payanam

[Querida]

wow how sweet! :D

[TamilMoon]

Varudi vandha kaatru sonnadhu,
Nee menmai endru.
En viralgalukku mattum thane theriyum
Adhu unmai endru.


-Thodarum indha kaadhal payanam Payanam thodara Vaazhthukkal :D

[ponnarasan]

Idhu,
Poottapatta Kadhavu Alla,
Thirandhu Paarka.
Idhu
Vettapatta
Nenjam.

-Thodarum inda kaadhal payanam

(Thanx Querida and TamilMoon)

[TamilMoon]

heart'a touch pannitteengalae :clap:

[ponnarasan]

Azhagu mayilukku therigiradhe,
andha andhi mazhayin adhisayam...
Un ul manadhirku theriyavillaya,
En Kavidhai Sollum Ragasiyam...




(Thodarum Indha Kaadhal Payanam...)

[sundararaj]

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