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ÀÊòÐ, ú¢òÐ Á¸¢Æ:

http://www.forumhub.com/stories/24602.09.48.10.html (http://www.forumhub.com/stories/24602.09.48.10.html
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:-)

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õõõõõ.... :-)) ....... ±É측¸ ¦¸¡ïºõ þÈí¸¢ÅóÐ ±Ø¾¢Â¢Õ츢ȣ÷¸û §À¡Ä¢Õ츢ȧ¾... þÕóÐõ ¾ÎÁ¡üÈõ¾¡ý... ¬É¡Öõ ºÁ¡Ç¢ì¸Óʸ¢ÈÐ.... :-)

// þР͸¦ÁýÈ «ð¨¼Â¢ð¼ ÅÄ¢ô Òò¾¸õ //

- ͸á¸õ §º¡¸ó¾¡§É....!!!!!

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migavum rasithEn.
kaal kaNdaar kaalE kaNdaar, thOl kaNdaar thOlE kaNdaar enbathu pOl.. intha vishwaroobam muzumaiyaaga kaNNukku pulappadavillai.
well.. i meant i liked it very much (in pieces), though i had difficulty in understanding it as a whole!

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Thanks Akil .
Actually this poem is an expression of guilt through realism. I do not know how to name an imaginative form wherein the heart imagines itself as a tree ( magical realism?). The entire episode is about the efforts of a heart to have a catharsis - to get rid of the different masks it has to wear to conceal it's black thoughts.
Sorry for the english fonts.. My Tamil fonts have gone for a toss again..
anpudan
srimangai

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Hello Suresh,
Thanks for your comments.
anpudan
srimangai

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:-)

just to prevent from getting into archives...:-)

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well sudhakar! I'm sstumped for words to explain how i feel after reading your gem!

:=)
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