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Topic started by akil (@ 61.1.202.139) on Fri May 28 09:29:40 EDT 2004.




My underground - tube train - experience.. in London -forms the backdrop of this kavithai

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«Á÷óÐ þÕ츢§Èý Üð¼ò¾¢ø '¾É¢Â¡¸'.

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§Àîͦ¸¡ÎòÐ ¿¢ýÈÐ "MIND THE GAP!"

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The theme (i think) of the poem is "Mind the Gap".

Its a common term that u will hear in london tube trains.. because there will be gap between train and platform at some stations.. asking the passengers to be careful..

I used this in the context of "manithargalukku idayil ulla idaivali".. thats why, i feel like being alone even in a big crowd in the train....

In this modern world we communicate less with our fellow human beings.. and just get involved in net, music, tv, media, newspapers, novels (novel reading is a very common practice here in trains.. may be anywhere inthe west, i would presume)......

So, iam just asking the humanbeings (reader) to notice this gap that has arisen between us!

- akil

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Dear akil,

I took the extreme rights of you, by starting your kavithaikaL thread for you - since you are always "sAkku sollifying" for your laziness!!!

I have posted one of the most poignant of your kavithai - that i loved the most, here!

Friends,

Akil - is a great and expressive poet who is always reluctant to open a separate thread for his kavithaikaL, since his affection and love for our home "ulagam enbathu ethanai pEr?" - makes him think that he should not post any of his kavithai outside of ulagam thread!!

I wanted him to open a separate thread and post all of his lovely works here in kavithaikaL section.

Now that he has a separate thread, i hope he would post all his poetry work here too for the benefit of all our friends!

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:-)

ƒ¢§É¡,

«üÒ¾õ... Á¼ì¸¢ðËí¸... :-))

²ý «¸¢ø ¾¡§É ´Õ ¾¢Ã¢ ¬ÃõÀ¢ì¸¡Áø ¸¡Äõ ¾¡úò¾¢Â¢Õ츢ȡ÷.

§º¡õ§ÀÈ¢ò¾Éõ ±ýÀ¨¾ ÌÆó¨¾Ü¼ ´ôÒ즸¡ûÇ¡Ð. :-))

¾ýɼì¸Á¡? «¸¢ø, þÐ ¯í¸Ù째 ¦¸¡ïºõ over¬ ¦¾Ã¢Â¨Ä¡? anyway... pls do continue with your work in this thread.

hope to write my anniversary wishes in this thread too... :-))

:-)


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Geno!
i'm wordless. thanks yaar.

hope i meet ur expectations and keep up!

suresh!
thannadakkam enbathellaam enakku theriyaathu. i always feel proud for what i am and often for even what not i am!

self coined nick of my own is 'jambam jaambavan', which one of my closest friends knows as well!

now back to my duty:

i wanted my collections to be called as
"EN KARAIYIL OTHUNGIYA SIPPIKAL"!

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I will try to post here some of my college day kirukkals as well, which will date back to late 90s and try to record some incidents what led me to write them!

see u again!



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Wow! good to see a 'special' thread for '¸Å¢ Ó¸¢Äý' «¸¢Äý's works ! Thanks to geno for starting up this thread. Even in my list of Akil's work - 'Mind the Gap' comes first! þó¾ Ó¸¢ÄÉ¢ý ¸Å¢ Á¨Æ¢ø ±ø§Ä¡Õõ þÉ¢ ¦¾¡¼÷óÐ ¿¨ÉÂÄ¡õ! :-)


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¿ýÈ¢ ¦ƒ§É¡.

// i always feel proud for what i am and often for even what not i am! // ú¢ì¸ ¨Å츢ȣ÷¸û, «¸¢ø. ¾Â× ¦ºöÐ ¦¾¡¼÷óÐ ¯í¸û ¸Å¢ µÅ¢Âí¸û ¿¢¨È þíÌ þÎí¸û.


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akil,
«Õ¨ÁÂ¡É Åâ¸û... ŨÃŦ¾ýÀÐ º¢ÄÕ째 º¡ò¾¢Âõ. ¿£í¸û ŨÃó¾ÅüÈ¢ø º¢Ä Ò¾¢Â §¸¡½í¸û ¸¡ñ¸¢§Èý...geno, þó¾ º¢ôÀ¢¸û ÌȢ£θÙìÌ ¿øÄ ¯¾¡Ã½õ.. ÀÄ ¾¡ì¸í¸¨Ç ²üÀÎò¾¢ÔûÇ£÷¸û «¸¢ø.. ¿ýÈ¢ ÀÄ. §ÁÖõ ÀÄ º¢ôÀ¢¸¨Ç ±¾¢÷À¡÷츢§Èý. ÓòÐ츨Çô ÀüÈ¢ «ôÒÈõ §Â¡º¢ì¸Ä¡õ - º¢ôÀ¢¸§Ç þíÌ «Ã¢¾¡¸ô§À¡É ¿¢¨Ä¢ø...
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kathir and sri,
thanks for being so kind towards me!

wherever i go, i get to find good people around. i thought its my 'muga raasi'. but in internet..?!

roshan!
ennai neengaLum genovum sErnthu nalla maatividareenga! irunga, enakkum oru kaalam varum.

PP
ungalukku 'sagalakalAvalliyaar' enRu thaan pattam kodukka vEnum. thaay puli 8 enraal, sEy puli 16 ah?!

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anRum inRum..

anRu

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inRu

yaaz thamiz
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3.7.3

yaazh koNdu seytha isaiyE
vaazhn themmai vaLartha varamE
nool koNdu neytha azhagE
oonodu kalantha ooNE amuthE
thEn kaNda naavin suvaiyE
kEL engaL thaayE thamizhE
thee theendum pOthum karugaai -
nee engaL agathin niRamE!

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Å¡úó ¦¾õ¨Á ÅÇ÷ò¾ ÅçÁ
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thamizannai
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PS: I remember writing this, when I heard a temple was erected for 'Tamil'annai in karaikaal(?) - imagining how She would look like with all those literatures like 'aimperungkaapiyam' as her ornaments with all the sangpulavar around Her - adoring Her beauty.!

PS 2: When i was referring the diary pages, i noticed that i had used 'thamizazagan' as my nick for this work. As I have mentioned to some of u before, I used to use 'kanchi' (the town where i hail from) as my nick for most of works in my college days.

PS 3: My anna took this poem, a year or so later and published in his college magazine on my behalf.

yaaz thamiz
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PS: i think punnahai liked this one, when posted in friendship thread

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additional notes:

1. recently we are not allowed to write more than few sentences in one post, in forumhub. its a big check on 'wide mouth'ers like me!

2. i intend to post here few of my college day works and the ones written recently over the last year in forumhub. b'cos i'm lazy to write new ones so frequently and i will reserve them for ulagam thread, for now.

3. i thought i start with thamiz thaai vaazthu, keeping up our tradition

(PS: ungalukku kashta kaalam thaan?!)

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akil,
kashta kaalame nalla irukkkaiyil nalla kaalam patri aen kavalaipadap pokiRoam?! arumaiyaana kavithaikaL. Maelum ezuthungkaL.
I remember writing poetry in my 10th std and then metamorphosizing into an iconoclast. Some rewards I got for that...( I have mentioned about that in one of the earlier thread!!!).
Expecting more from you.
with regards
srimangai

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:-)

akil,

¸-¸Ã Å⨺¢ø ±Ø¾¢Â¢Õ츢ȣ÷¸û ±ýÀÐÁðÎõ¾¡ý Ò⸢ÈÐ... :-(

¡ú¾Á¢ú Òâó¾Ð... ¿ýÚ. :-)

:-)


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akil,
yaaz tamiz is pretty emotional.i refrain from grading it in terms of marks,on purpose.
good luck.

thituththakkan

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sri and kathir
thanks

pp
thanks. ungaL paarvaikku ulagam thiriyil, oru kavithai ittirunthEn. i think it got drowned in the flood. u might be able to find it a few pages back

thiru
?!

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suresh!
about that amateur work,
as i said in the postscript notes, i see Goddess tamil's idol in my imagination. i see:
avaL kaalgaLil kaaviyach silambu. azagu aabaththaaNathu, athanaal bayamuRuthum. appadi KiLipOl kili seykiRa, kinnammathiriyaana avaL idaiyil maNimEgalai. keerathanaar, keerar (nakkeerar) poNdra pulavargaL(keerar - aagupeyar) avaLarugil. kundru pOl pugaz koNda kuNdalakEsi avaL kaathugalil. natarajan mainthan kumaranin vEl pOl koormai koNdu avaL vizigaL.
i also see a lot of literatures adorning her:
keNdai meenukkE azagai sollik kodukkum piRar manathai kedukkiRa vizigal konda pEnkalin azagai sollum kavigal. kENmai porunthiya kuRaL.

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just realised i missed one line:
kaikkiLai kayyanumvet kaiyyOdaaynool kayyinil

kaikkilaikku ayyanum vetkaiyOdu aayntha nool kaayinil..
kaikkilaiy (oruthalai kAdhal)in ayyan - lord shiva (in kutRAla kuRavnaji).. he himself learnt tamil as puLavar iraiyanaar in thamizh sangam.. those books learnt by him were also carried in her hands.

mEgam pOl vaari vazangum kodai vaLLa vaangik koNda paakkal. kovaagana kOmaan (Lord shiva) vin aruL koRukindra kOvaigaL. thannai kauvinavargaLukku aruLum, kanikku avvaiyai aayntha - gowri kumaran (murugan)in adipatRum paakaL.

thus, our Lordess tamil is adorned. I praise her beauty and fame!

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PS: its quite evident that i have seen many 'oLiyum oliyum' where the heroine dances with her lovely bharathanaatiyam dress on the hills

PS2: this was written for trip. later it was recited in our firsr (anniversary) batch day - 1st august 1995 ! our class 'AR Rahman' performed lovely background music for this. inspired by the film 'duet''s kavithai verse, he asked me to write something forceful in the end!
it seemed it did work out alright for our amateur audience, who don't have much depth in to tamil. 'kuch bhi chaLEgA'.

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South Wales trip

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À¨ÈüÚõ ,§À¡ðÎ ¸¡ðÊÂÐ -ÅøÄ¢Éõ Á¢Ìó¾Ðõ,Á¢¸¡¾Ðõ ºÃ¢Â¡?

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pp
its not just that

thiru
thanks. another thanks for thiruththam.
i just wanted to show how my thought process and style has or hasn't changed over 10 years.

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this is the work i had posted in ulagam thread, that pp had made above comment on.

a while back, i gave a topic for kaviyarangam in ulagam thread. only PP came out with a kavithai - she had a list, though i had picked up her first point 'thaaymai anubavam', as her first impression on hearing the topic. here is my contribution for that topic.

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(College Council Inauguration '¸Å¢¾ô§À¡ðÊ'- 29/08/96)

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PS:
1. I didn't know about this competition, untill its an hour left to the closing time, when one of my urban Tamil friends, who writes her Tamil kavithai in English (b'cos her second language wasn't tamil in school - which i hate about some of the high class Madras friends), told me about this.

2. So, I thought about it as I was walking to my hostel mess for lunch and wrote in about 20 minutes. I also had won the first prize of 300 rs. among that small group of '?!tamil writers' in our college. I received the prize from the then minister 'thamizhkkudimagan' in our tamil mandram function.


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akil,

¯í¸û ¸Å¢¨¾¸û ±øÄ¡õ Á¢¸ «Õ¨Á.

::::::::"þ¨ÈóÐ ¾¢Ã¢ó¾ º£¸ø (seagull) ÀȨŸû
¿¢¨Èó¾ Áÿ¢ÆÄ¢ø ¯¨Èó¾ Á¨Ä¸û::::::::::::::

þ¨¾ ÀÊò¾ ¦À¡ØÐ, ºÁ£Àò¾¢ø ¦ÅÇ¢Åó¾

Day after tommorrow ±ýÈ À¼õ ¿¢¨ÉÅ¢ø ÅÕ¸¢ÈÐ. þí¸¢ÕìÌõ global warming §À¡ýÈ ÀÄ ecological ºÅ¡ÖìÌ, ¿¡õ ±ýÉ ¦ºö §À¡¸¢§È¡õ? þ¨ÈóÐ ¾¢Ã¢Ôõ º£¸ø, ÁüÚõ Áÿ¢Æø Á¨Ä¸û ±ò¾¨É ¿¡ð¸û ¸¡½ô§À¡¸¢§È¡õ? ±ýÀÐ §¸ûÅ¢ìÌȢ¡ö ¯ûÇÐ.

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¯í¸û ¸øæâì¸Å¢¨¾ §À¡ðÊ ¾¡ì¸ò¨¾ ¯ñÎ Àñϸ¢ÈÐ. º¢Ä ¸Å¢¨¾¸§Ç ¦¿ïºò¾¢ø ¦ºýȨ¼óÐ ´Õ Å¢¾ ¯½÷¸û ±ØôÒõ. ¯í¸û ¸Å¢¨¾Â¢ø ¸ÕòÐ «ôÀÊ.

I remember a story in which there are 2 characters. A king and a beggar. They both are equally happy in life, if assuming a king dreams every night that he is a beggar and beggar dreams every night that he is a king.

So much for dreaming or night life! Also a russian story (I think so) where the orphaned child who is beaten black and blue by step mom, and works like a bull all thro the day, is waiting for the NIGHT, where he can dream or imagine what he wants, what he desires.

:::"¿¡ý
µ÷ þÃק¿Ãô À½ì¸¡Ãý
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þÃÅ¢ý ÁÊ¢ø ÁÄÕõ ¸ÉÅ¢ý Å¡ºõ Á½ì¸¢ÈÐ


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ͧÉ "ÅÇ÷¸¢§Èý" ±ýÚ ¦º¡øĢ즸¡ñÊÕôÀ¡÷,ÅÇ÷óÐ ¦¸¡ñÎõ þÕ츢ȡ÷; «¸¢Ä¢ý «ó¿¡û ¸Å¢¨¾ «ÅÕõ «¾¢¸Á¡¸ ÅÇ÷ó¾¢ÕôÀ¨¾ ¯½÷òи¢ÈÐ!


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shakthi

dream is my favourite topic. i remember mentioning 'day dream' as one of my hobbies in one of my english exams. i dream of worthy accomplishments in my studies and career, to drive myself towards my task.

PP

en moonRu vagai manithargaL ilirunthu.. type 1:

§¾Ôõ ̨ÈÔõ º¢Ä¦À¡ØÐ
þÕÇ¡ö Á¨ÈÔõ ´Õ¦À¡ØÐ
À¢ÈÌõ À¢¨È¡ö ÅÇÕõ
´Õ¿¡û Óؾ¡ö ÁÄÕõ

¿¡Ùõ Á¡Úõ ¿¢Ä¨Åô§À¡ø
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Å¡Ç¡ö Å£½¡ö Å¡Æ¡§Ã
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Å¢¨ÃÔõ ¿£Ã¡ö 'ÒŢ£÷ôÀ¢ø'
¾¢¸ð¼¡ Å¡ú× ¸¡ñÀ¡§Ã!!

i think it applies to many aspects of life. we go through a cycle!
so, i won't say i always grow, though i would like to!


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ÁÚÀÊÔõ «¨Å¼ì¸õ!!!


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today is one of my best friend's b'day. here is a song that i wrote for him long back.

¿ñÀ§É ¿ñÀ§É

(1995)

¿ñÀ§É ¿ñÀ§É
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«ýÒûÇõ §À¡Ðõ ¬¾¡ÃÁ¡¸
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ÀñÒûÇ Á¡ó¾÷ À¡í¸¡¸ ÅÇ÷ò¾
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«ýÀ¢§Ä º¢Èó¾Ð À¡ºõ ±ýÚ ¦º¡ýÉ¡ø
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±¾É¢Ûõ º¢Èó¾Ð ¿ð¦ÀýÚ ¦º¡ø§Åý
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(¿øÄ Ó¨È¡ý..)

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¦Åö¢Ģ§Ä ¦ÅñÀÉ¢§À¡ø
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¦¾¡¼Õõ ¿ðÒ ¿õ¿ðÒ ¾¡ý

(¿ñÀ§É.. ¿ñÀ§É)

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Áɾ¢ø ±Øó¾ Å¡÷ò¨¾¸û þ¨Å
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¿¢¨ÉÅ¢ø ÌÄ×õ ¯ý¨É
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¿ñÀ§É ¿ñÀ§É, ¿¡Û§Á ¸¡ñ¸¢§Èý
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(PS: i'm hoping to be his best man in his wedding in july 04)


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±ý §¾¨Å¦ÂøÄ¡õ ´ü¨Èò §¾¡Æ¢!

(³ Á¢Š Ô ...)


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«¸¢ø,

§¾¡¨Æ¨Á 60ìÌ «Ú¸¨¾Ô¨¼ÂÐ

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«¸¢ø,
´ü¨Èò§¾¡Æ¢ ¾É¢òÐò ¦¾Ã¢¸¢È¡û. ´Õ¨Á ±ýÀ§¾ uniquenessý ÌȢ£¼¡¸ì ¦¸¡ûÇÄ¡õ ( "´ýÚõ §¾×õ ¯ÄÌõ ¯Â¢Õõ ÁüÚõ ¡ÐÁ¢øÄ¡ «ýÚ...: - ¿õÁ¡úÅ¡÷.). þó¾ì¸Å¢¨¾Â¢ø ¿ðÀ¢ü¸¡ö «¨ÄÀ¡Ôõ Áɨº «Æ¸¡¸ì¸¡ðÊÕ츢ȣ÷¸û. §¾¡Æ¢ ±ýÀРŢÅâì¸ÓÊ¡¾ Á¢¸ò §¾¨ÅÂ¡É ¯È×. þÆó¾ ÅÄ¢ ±ÉìÌô ÒâÔõ..
¿øÄ ¸Å¢¨¾. À¡Ã¡ðÎì¸û
«ýÒ¼ý
‚Áí¨¸


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ÀÊòÐ, ú¢òÐ Á¸¢Æ:

http://www.forumhub.com/stories/24602.09.48.10.html (http://www.forumhub.com/stories/24602.09.48.10.html
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thiru
thanks. now i know my next target!

sri
mm.. unmai. aanal intha otrai thOzi naan santhitha santhikkapOgiRa pala thOzigaLil sangamam. there is one in particular, though!

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un ithayam
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20.9.99

Ýø ¦¸¡ñ¼ ÁħÃ
Á¡ø ¸ñ¼ Á¸§Ç
¿¡ø Ũ¸ ̽ò¾¡ø
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À¡ø Åñ½ §ÁÉ¢
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¬ø þ¨Ä¢ø ТýÈ
Å¡ø þÉò¨¾ ¦ÅýÈ
Á¡ø Åñ½ì Üó¾ø
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¾¡û §º÷ó¾ º¾í¨¸
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Å¡û §À¡ýÈ ¦¿ï¨º
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áø ¸¡½¡ «Æ¸¡ø
áø ¬¸¢ô §À¡§Éý
Ѩƾø ¸¡§½ý ¬¸¢Ûõ
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un koondhal poo

8.9.3

Å¡ú× ±ýÀÐ ±ÉìÌ - ¦ÅÚõ
Å¡÷ò¨¾ ¾¡§É ¯ÉìÌ

¬ö×ô ¦À¡Õû ±ÉìÌ - ¯ý
¬úÁÉõ ¾Õõ ¦ÅÚôÒ

ÜÊô ¦Àüȧ¾ º¢ÈôÒ - ¯ý
Üó¾ø ÝÊ ¦ÅÚõ â

«ý§À ¯¾¢÷òÐô§À¡ ´Õ º¢Ã¢ôÒ
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Üó¾ø ÌÊÅó¾ â ¯¾¢÷òÐô§À¡
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kuundhal poo konjam vaadiyuLLadhu.50!

tiruttakkan

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tamilandu maiyankal - jk nathan.

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akil,
the last two ones are a bit verbose.. Poetic exaggeration has smothered the spirit of the poem. I maybe wrong in my judgement- but I thought I could share my experience on these poems.
Anpudan
srimangai

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Tum jo mil gaye ho
To yeh lagta hai
Ke jahan mil gaya
Ke jahan mil gaya

Ek bhatke huye rahi ko
Caravan mil gaya

Tum jo mil gaye ho
To yeh lagta hai
Ke jahan mil gaya
Ke jahan mil gaya

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:-)

just to prevent from getting into archives...:-)

:-)

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// ¸¡¾¢øÄ¡ °º¢§Â¡ ¯ó¾ý þ¾öõ!? // kAdhuLLa oosithAn ! asainthu kondE iruppadhAl kOrppadhu siramam.. avvalavuthan :))


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>> Üó¾ø ÌÊÅó¾ â ¯¾¢÷òÐô§À¡
«¾ü¸¡ö ¾¡§É («í¦¸ý) ¾ÅÁ¢ÕôÒ >>

;¡¸÷ «Å÷¸û ¦º¡øÅÐ §À¡Ä verbose §À¡Ä þÕó¾¡Öõ - ±ÉìÌ Ãº¢ì¸ ÓÊó¾Ð! þó¾ verbosity ²üÀÎòÐõ ´ÕÅ¢¾Á¡É 'ÁÂì¸õ'
º¢Ä ºÁÂò¾¢ø §¾¨Å¡¢ÕìÌ!

¸¾¢÷ ¸¨¼º¢Â¡ö ¦º¡ýɾ¢ø ¯ñ¨Á¢ÕìÌ!


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hmmm
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±í§¸ ¿£í¸û??? :?:

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