Tamil Kavidhai... KaRppu

[anithu21]

iravu nera
perundhu payanathil
arai urakkathinoodey
idai varudum
pin irukkai mirugam...

kaamamum kobamum
oru sera kilarndhezha...
varudalin sugam meeriyum
"palaar"ena araigiren...

en varugayay edhirnokki...
thalaiyanai katti thoongum
kanavan mugam ninaithu....

how is this poem....? does tell something....?

[xlntbarani]

//
idai varudum
pin irukkai mirugam...
//

nadappu... nigazhvu...

//
kaamamum ...
//
puriyaadhu... mearkondu padikkirean

//
varudalin sugam meeriyum
//
frankly said...
mundhina vari purigirathu...

//
kanavan mugam ninaithu....
//

yenna solrathunnu theriyala... but yellorum solramathiri thaan solla veandi irrukku... Nalla iruukku....

Do continue...

em...

Comment: 'palar'nnu araiyudhu indha kavidhai....

[siddiqsa]

Dear Anithu..

Ungal Kavithai..
Ethartha Unmai..

Kavithaiku Poi alagu..
endran oru kavingan..

aanaal..

Kavithaiku Unmaiyum alagu..
engirathu ungal kavithai..

Ithai padithavathu..
Miruga manangal..
manitha manamaga..
marattum..

[anithu21]

Thanks for the response... That was a sweet surprise... ur comments are very encouraging... i shud me writing more now...

[k.kaviram]

hi ani,

Ithu poll unmaiyil nan oru perunthu payanathil parthirukkiren.Ungal kavithai antha nikalchiyai napaka paduthiyathu.
neengal kaiyandulla varthaikal pinnirukkai mirugam,kamathilum kopathilum,palaar. mika arumaiyana varthaikal.nall samuthaya sinthanai.

thanks,
kaviramk

[malligai]

anithu..nala iruku..