eppadi idam pidikka.....

[venkat_ram_amir]

[tscii:537bf893b8]hi,

How is this?

º¸¢§Â... ¸¡üÈ¢ø Á¢¾ìÌõ ´Ä¢Â¡¸¢
¯ý ¦ºÅ¢¨Â ÌǢçš
ÁÄâø þÕìÌõ §¾É¡¸¢
¯ý ¿¡Å¢¨É ¿¨É츧š
¨ÅÃò¾¢ø Á¢ñÏõ ´Ç¢Â¡¸¢
¯ý ŢƢ¢¨É «¨¼Â§Å¡
¦¸¡Ê¢ɢø ÁÄÕõ Óø¨Ä¡¸¢
¯ý Üó¾Ä¢ø À¢¨½Â§Å¡


º¸¢§Â... Å¡É¢ø À¢ÈìÌõ Á¨Æ¡¸¢
¯ý ÒÈò¾¢ø ¿¨É§š
¨Á¢ø þÕìÌõ ¸ÕôÀ¡¸¢
¯ý ÒÕÅò¾¢ø Á¨È§š
¸ýÉò¾¢ø Å¢Øõ ÌƢ¡¸¢
¯ý º¢Ã¢ôÀ¢ø ¯Õ¦ÅÎ츧š
¾Á¢Æ¢ø À¢Èó¾ þôÀ¡¼Ä¡¸¢
¯ý Áɨ¾ ÀȢ츧š

[/tscii:537bf893b8]

[Sathiyamoorthy Dhanapal]

Hey Venkat,

This is too good....unakkulla ippadi oru kavigana? It's amazing...keep it up!!!!!

[Kathir9999]

[tscii:7ccce8c5e7]hi venkat, unga improvement fantastic.. especially the second paragraph

//º¸¢§Â... Å¡É¢ø À¢ÈìÌõ Á¨Æ¡¸¢
¯ý ÒÈò¾¢ø ¿¨É§š
¨Á¢ø þÕìÌõ ¸ÕôÀ¡¸¢
¯ý ÒÕÅò¾¢ø Á¨È§š
¸ýÉò¾¢ø Å¢Øõ ÌƢ¡¸¢
¯ý º¢Ã¢ôÀ¢ø ¯Õ¦ÅÎ츧š
¾Á¢Æ¢ø À¢Èó¾ þôÀ¡¼Ä¡¸¢
¯ý Áɨ¾ ÀȢ츧š //

azaga, theziva irukku. // ¨Á¢ø þÕìÌõ ¸ÕôÀ¡¸¢
¯ý ÒÕÅò¾¢ø Á¨È§š // oh, oh.. really nice.


[/tscii:7ccce8c5e7]

[venkat_ram_amir]

Kathir,

Thanks for appreciating...I will write more and post...
Just need to learn more tamil grammar (illakanam)..can u suggest some websites...???

[gragavan]

Hi Venkat,

Welcome to the group. Your poems are nice to read in tamil. Keep it up. Start a separate thread and post all ur poems there. That will be easy to track than starting a new thread for every poem. All the best.

Regards,
Ragavan