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Topic suggested by Babu on Fri Apr 16 18:53:39 .
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Responses:
- From: Kanchana (@ spider-we031.proxy.aol.com)
on: Fri Apr 16 19:29:46
Babu,
melliya mazaith thooval maadhiri uNarchchi veLippaadu. mallikaippoo varudalaana nadai. karuththuLLa kadhaikkaru. paasaangillaadha eLimaiyaana thamizhil ezudha naan ungaLaip paarththup padikkaNum. aanandha vikatanil neenga publish paNNina kadhaiyai vida indhak kadhai enakku mElaakath theriyak kaaraNam--ithan nenjaith thodum sakthi. vaazththukkaL!
- From: babu (@ 198.153.135.42)
on: Fri Apr 16 19:39:13
Strangely, I don't know what to say. Your comment is one of the best things that has happened to me in my adult life.
- From: Ramki (@ pm062-26.spindler.wmich.edu)
on: Fri Apr 16 21:01:04
babu i dont have words to explain my feelings..my god udambu silirthu pochupaa...excellent.
But a small request..why the same name for the main characters??Nandhini and parthi padikkum podhu somehow I'm reminded of your other stories..indha repitition vitta nallarkkumo Babu??
Again thanks for this great story
- From: babu (@ 198.153.135.42)
on: Sat Apr 17 10:46:07
Thanks a lot Ramki, those were very nice words. Re Nandhini and Parthi, I understand what you say, will try and use some other names :-))
- From: Kumaran (@ abd63b27.ipt.aol.com)
on: Sat Apr 17 20:25:32
Simply superb, Babu.. An excellent work!
Kumaran
- From: aruLarasan (@ psiphi.umsl.edu)
on: Sat Apr 17 20:27:38
kannal? :-)
thamizhla thEnkuzhaiththu nAkkula thadavinA nijamAvE pU pUththadhu mAdhiri thAn irukkum :-)
beautiful.
i don't want to spoil the good feeling this story gives me by commenting on it. kozhandhaya bathramA pAththukkO.
- From: chandy (@ 209.125.83.170)
on: Sat Apr 17 22:33:11
Babu, your kozhandhai is too good. you must feel very proud to have created this kozhandhai.
- From: bb (@ compq1.crhc.uiuc.edu)
on: Sun Apr 18 03:07:03
babu,
melliya mazaith thooval maadhiri uNarchchi veLippaadu. mallikaippoo varudalaana nadai. karuththuLLa kadhaikkaru.i dont have words to explain my feelings..my god udambu silirthu pochupaa...excellent.thamizhla thEnkuzhaiththu nAkkula thadavinA nijamAvE pU pUththadhu mAdhiri thAn irukkum :-)
kannal? or kaNNAL? (saraswathi or beloved womannu otl sollaradhu).
- From: babu (@ 198.153.135.42)
on: Sun Apr 18 09:50:27
kumaran, thanks.
Arul, Please do comment on the story :-)kozhanday samaththa irukku, ippa konjam pEsardhu kUda.
chandy, thanks.
bb, I am not still clear if you liked the story. btw, its kannal - karumbu, sweet
- From: babu (@ 198.153.135.42)
on: Sun Apr 18 09:53:53
bb :
otl kan2n2al kan2n2al 02 1. sugar-cane; 2. sugar; 3. rock-candy; 4. thick molassess; 5. kind of small bird, prob tukkanan kurvui
- From: shiva (@ 98aad47c.ipt.aol.com)
on: Sun Apr 18 12:32:53
babu:
simply great..
liked your style of writing particularly when describing the kutti paappa...
simple and touchy...congrats
- From: Gokul (@ atl-qbu-zpa-vty168.as.wcom.net)
on: Sun Apr 18 14:14:48
bAbu,
The style is excellent. I would have liked the story more if pArththi had adopted the baby for reasons other than the senti-nandhini part[kind of makes it cinematic,IMO]. That aside, the story reads well. I like the conversations you have in your stories:-) Also the flasback dialogues strewn intermittently in the story is a good storytelling technique, which is also seen in your other stories [kolai etc]. Good luck to you.
- From: v (@ wizard.mch.sni.de)
on: Tue Apr 20 02:20:45
babu, excellent.
- From: Kutti Paappaa (@ global22.citicorp.com)
on: Tue Apr 20 09:32:51
Babuppa, sooperppa. Eppadippa ippadillaam ezhutha varuthu ? naekkum solli kuduppa
- From: sathiya (@ annex2-p26.qualcomm.com)
on: Wed Apr 21 20:48:49
babu
mikath theLivaana nadai. andhak kuttip paapaavaik
kaNmun vandhu niRuththugiRathu. Keep it up man!
- From: babu (@ 198.153.135.42)
on: Thu Apr 22 09:40:25
Shiva, Gokul, v, "Kutti paappaa" pae, sathiya ellarkkum thanks a lot.
Gokul, sentimental-a irukkarthu ellaam, cinematic-aa thaan irukku, I understand what you are saying. But I have tried, in this story, to be as subtle in sentimental things as possible. :-))
paeppaa ennappa ippaddi kindal paNrele :-)
- From: sooriyan/sun (@ 192.149.1.168)
on: Thu Apr 22 10:05:02
babu,
nalla irunthathu. Very nice style and nadai.
- From: babu (@ 198.153.135.42)
on: Thu Apr 22 10:26:58
Thanks sun
- From: Chandra (@ viking.delta-air.com)
on: Thu Apr 22 15:03:09
ׯ 썀ƿ
ҍ Ѵ
Ҏ ѹ -
ґ
⿺ 鹳ب ǀ -
ڽ 헍
.
ҍ = ҍ
= Ϲ;
=
veNpaapuvin chiRukathaiyaip pORRi
puththEL ulakatain-tha paththiniyin paarththipanOr
thaththaay n-ilavulakil thErn-thetukka - meththenRu
pUppOl n-ataipayinRu pollaa manakkathavin
thaazppaaL thiRan-thuvitum thanmaiyinai - n-Okkungkaal
mEvupukaz than-thitumE menmElum n-iRkenpEn
paapuvEn-in kuttippaap paa.
puththEL ulakam = thEvar ulakam
mEvu = porun-thukinRa; thangkukinRa
n-iRku = n-inakku
- From: Chandra (@ viking.delta-air.com)
on: Thu Apr 22 15:28:22
ׯ 썀ƿ
ҍ Ѵ
Ҏ ѹ -
ґ
⿺ 鹳ب ǀ -
ڽ 헍
.
ҍ = ҍ
= Ϲ;
=
veNpaapuvin chiRukathaiyaip pORRi
puththEL ulakatain-tha paththiniyin paarththipanOr
thaththaay n-ilavulakil thErn-thetukka - meththenRu
pUppOl n-ataipayinRu pollaa manakkathavin
thaazppaaL thiRan-thuvitum thanmaiyinai - n-Okkungkaal
mEvupukaz than-thitumE menmElum n-iRkenpEn
paapuvEn-in kuttippaap paa.
puththEL ulakam = thEvar ulakam
mEvu = porun-thukinRa; thangkukinRa
n-iRku = n-inakku
- From: babu (@ 198.153.135.42)
on: Thu Apr 22 16:40:48
Chandra,
ݍ 鑀 ׯ
ր ꗜ .
azakaana paaRRotai veNpaa patiththu
ezavillai n-anRicholla n-aa.
(obviously written in haste :-))
- From: Mukund (@ sd-ppp-204.abac.net)
on: Sun Apr 25 04:47:21
Babu,
Way to go !
Mukund
- From: babu (@ 198.153.135.42)
on: Sun Apr 25 11:13:06
Thanks mukund
- From: test (@ ac956121.ipt.aol.com)
on: Mon Mar 26 19:09:22
test
- From: NAS (@ ac956121.ipt.aol.com)
on: Mon Mar 26 19:12:49
a very good one babu ! where are you nowadays ??
- From: G.Ragavan (@ 164.164.128.13)
on: Mon Mar 26 22:40:09
츢.
Ģ Ţ .
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- From: pAtti (@ 63.64.130.9)
on: Thu Mar 29 15:16:29
naanum ippathaan kadhai padichen. Wow, simply superb. Kannile thannir vandhuduchu. Great job, babu. Keep it up
- From: akesh (@ gw-ehv05.pnl.philips.com)
on: Mon Apr 30 07:17:54
Hi Babu,
Very Good story.
Kannule lesa rendu thuli kanneer etti parthathu kathai mudintha pothu,
regards
akesh
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