Topic started by FlowerGuy (@ 61.11.81.246) on Wed Feb 5 11:17:59 .
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ninaivennum oru paravai
unai kandu vizhithathu.
siragugalai sari seithu
sirithapadi paranthathu.

koondhal kaattukkul
koochalittu magizhuthu.
nakkeeran kaanaatha
narumanathil mayanguthu.

kungumathai kalaithu kalaithu
nettriyil oviyam varaiyuthu.
kaadhoram parandhu sendru
kaadhalodu pesuthu.

ethanai imaigal endru
enni paarka thodanguthu.
eduppaana mookil mayangi
ennikkai tholaithathu.

mudhalil thanathu kannathil
muthamida solluthu.
'en murai ini' endru solli
vanmuraigal seyyuthu.

ilakkiyam padaippatharkku
idhazgalai theduthu.
sapthamindri neendathoru
kavithai ezuthi mudithathu.

kolusugalai sulabamaaga
kaiyil anindhu kondathu.
valaiyalgalai kaalil aniya
muyarchi seithu thottrathu.

viyarvai pookkal parithu
kazhuthil maalaiyittathu.
pookkal udhirntha idamellaam
paravai thodarndhu sendrathu.

iruppathai vittuvittu
illaathathai rasikkuthu.
iRappatharkku munbe mannil
sorkkam kandu kondathu.

ninaivennum oru paravai
unai kandu vizhithathu.
siragugalai sari seithu
sirithapadi paranthathu.


NOTE TO IYAPPAN : anubavichu ezuthinennu sollidaatheenga sir. ellaam oru karpanaithaan. :-)

Responses:

• From: Iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Wed Feb 5 13:19:52
  
  Dear flowerguy!!
  
  >> anubavichu ezuthinennu sollidaatheenga sir. ellaam oru karpanaithaan. :-) <<
  sari sari nambittom ;).
  azagiya unarchchimikka kavithai...
  "sabthamaRRa yudhdhathilE
  veRRi enbathu iruvarukkum
  muththa nEram siritheninum
  adhan sabthan nenjil adangalaiyE"
  
  good one flowerguy
  
  thodarungal ... kathirukkirom ungal kavithaigalukku
  
  anbudan iyappan
  
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ wc05.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Thu Feb 6 00:43:03
  
  Good thought.
  
  >>viyarvai pookkal parithu
  kazhuthil maalaiyittathu<<
  
  kazhuthil maduma ?
  
  
• From: FlowerGuy (@ 61.11.81.173) on: Mon Feb 24 12:01:48
  
  oru 'romantic poem' ezhuthalaamnu thaan aarambichen...
  koncham 'limit' thaandugiratho endra santhegam vandhu,
  niraiya 'vetti' thalli, 'censor' seithu mudithuvitten.
  
  i was bit reluctant to post this. now glad to see some positive feedbacks.
  iyappan,kajan iruvarukkum nandri.
  
  

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